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Posted: 13 years ago
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harry its a nice plot. <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc concept harini...plz add me to ur buddy list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...😃
continue soon...and do pm me weneva u update...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Madam, pehle likhiye toh sahi. I am sure a lot of us will pitch in to help😊

Arre, joh likha hai usse paddho na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Arre, joh likha hai usse paddho na

Aree I meant a Chapter...not a CS...😆 CS was nice I read that already😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Before I start writing the track I would like to mention that

You will find some situations which were already in the show

The potion is something which would help the vampires to turn into Hybrids just like the Khuranas

The Khuranas were more of sorcessors than werewolves and Alina was allowed to share her powers as long as there was no danger of exposure. The sorcessors were normally trading their powers to the other supernaturals for their existence and desires. They were however not allowed to engage in a war for these powers as it would only cause more chaos and may impact the humans on a larger magnitude.

Chapter 1

Abhay knew he had to get the potion from Alina as fast as he can as the time is running out and Chand is finding it difficult to keep Haseena under control. He just wanted to fake romance with Alina to win her confidence. He was not sure if Alina was willing to share her family secrets with him at this moment. He knew she needed a stronger assurance. Also Jeh was keeping an eye on Alina. Abhay could never get more time to spend with Alina to make her talk about the secrets. He had to win the trust of Alina so that she would even dare to walk out on Jeh, if he interfered much. He had only one option left and that was to declare his love for her in front of everyone. Attention and acceptance was what Alina needed most and she was willing to trade anything for that. Alina was already glowing in happiness at her new make over and winning over Abhay's love. And when Abhay declared his love for her in front of the entire college making him and Alina as the centre of attraction amidst the Dandiya celebration, Alina felt she had got everything she wanted in life. This was the elate mood Abhay was waiting for. And before she gets over this mood or Jeh spoils anything, he had to get the secrets out from her. He knew he had broken the heart of Piya by his open confession. He could not even reply her when she wanted answers. He could only beg her to trust him. He really hated himself for breaking her heart and leaving her alone in this state. But he convinced himself that once he gets the potion, he would explain everything to her and she would understand. He also had a new hope that once he gets hold of the potion, it would enable him to lead a life of a human by controlling his vampire instincts. He could lead a life with her and also if he wished , he could give up immortality, as he would become a hybrid. He could also give her few years of his life and youth so that they could always remain together for whatever time they existed. Rejuvenated with this new hope, he planned to get the potion from Alina the very next day.

Jeh knew all the time that Abhay was only faking romance with his sister so that he could gain a stand against the Khuranas. But he never expected Abhay to propose Alina infront of the whole college. He knew Abhay still loved Piya and would never try to hurt her in any way. Jeh had decided to speak to Dipannita about this. Moreover Abhay had asked Alina for a date next day, where he planned to spend the whole day with her. Jeh knew Alina was giving this more as an information rather than asking permission. He knew that Alina would simply walk out on him and he could never stop her without disclosing his powers which would also mean a fight with Abhay. His mother had warned him to keep away from all the fights for the moment. He could in no way prevent Alina from doing what she wanted. All these days they controlled her by locking her up and by threatening to finish her. With Abhay's support Alina would never fear them as she feared before. So there was no stopping her. However he had to keep an eye on Alina and if he was found following her, Abhay would only make it more embarrassing. So he told Alina that he would like to know the details of the public places they were planning to visit as he wished to take Piya also on a date. Alina was only more happier to know that her brother is also approving of this relation and he also wants to spend a quality time with his girl friend. Jeh could also sense by Piya's expression that she was shattered on Abhay's public confession of love to Alina. So she still had feelings for Abhay. Jeh was not going to lose Piya at any cost. He considered this an opportunity that he would take Piya on a date to the same place and make her see Abhay romancing Alina.

Jeh calls Piya, but is surprised when Misha attends the call. Misha tells him that Piya is unwell and is resting. Now Jeh is perplexed and decides to pay a visit to Piya and somehow convince her to go on a date with him.

Piya still could not believe the fact that Abhay declared his love to Alina publicly. And when she demanded answers, he just kept mum asking her to believe him and his love. What the hell was Abhay doing. If he still loves her, then he is definetely going to hurt Alina as Piya could see how happy Alina was. And Jeh, even he seems to have forgotten their business rivalry and is happy for his sister. Now once Abhay tells Alina that this is all fake, things are not going to be good as Alina would be heartbroken and Jeh would never tolerate this. On the other hand, if Abhay wants to avoid all these, then it only means that he has left her. The very thought seemed to kill her. She knew very well that Abhay loved only her. She also knew that Abhay would do only the things which is right to him. But what and when a thing feels right to Abhay is something which she would never know. He was full of uncertainity. He would follow her like a shadow if he felt she was in danger and he would leave her forever if he considered his presence was a danger to her. Whatever, she is certain that she doesn't have the strength to face it.

Piya told Misha to attend to Jeh's call and tell him that she is not well and needs some rest. She was not ready to face Jeh, Abhay and Alina together. She wanted to avoid college or even going out. She wanted to gather courage to tell Jeh that he better not have any hopes on her. She does not love him nor can ever love him.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Harry..!!
i never thought u would actually write it..! now we would get to read ur awesome writings not only in comments but a FF..!! love u for this..!
this is seriously like actually.. "Reliving PKYEK"..!
the CS and the chapter- both were brilliant..!!!
I loved it very much..!! the way u described the situation for Abhay, Piya, Jeh and Alina was simply superb..!!

do update soon.. I'll be waiting..
thanks for the PM.. do PM me next time too..!

-Dhrishti.. :)
🤗 🤗
Edited by Divya6696 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nicely written Harry!
So is Pia going to tell Jeh that she does not love him? Great start... Please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please tell dear it is abhiya ff or abhina ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb strtin harry 🤗
luvd d way u hv written d whole updt
piya is hurt..she knw he luvs her only still faild 2 understnd d reason behnd abhay's luv confession 4 alina in 4nt of whole college...bst prt is dat she is goin 2 tel him d truth dat she doesnt luv him...😆 bechara j
jeh...ah!. 😡 wnts 2 add oil in d fire
abhay is in dilemma..he luvs bth d ladies (haseena & piya) bth r equally imp. Nw he is hurtin 1 of dem in d sake of othr
alina.. Unaware 4m d reality
updt soon..its excellent
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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