My version of PKYEK FF & a Request-Chap2 updated

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

very nyc update...yeh jeh thodi der ke liye pia ko akele kyn nai chod dete😡

kaha na pia ne ki use nai milna phir bhi😡

continue soon...

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

hey buddy beautifull update, :-) superlike... waiting 4 next part... plz update soon

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Nicely written Harry!
So is Pia going to tell Jeh that she does not love him? Great start... Please continue soon.

Thanks Shreya, but this is not an FF. This is something which I wanted to have in PKYEK. I may write another chapter or two. But beyond that I have no idea how to take it forward. That is where I requested the help of FF writers, to complete PKYEK which was rather incomplete in the show.

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Jiya tariq

@Princess_jiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Nice update. Add me in ur pm list.

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Nicely written Harry

Hi Sniggs, I am no writer. It is just what I wished we got in PKYEK. Thats why I have this request to all you beautiful writers to take it up forward. Please Sniggs, atleast help me to take it forward after update the next two chapters.

By the way when are you updating my favourite FF?

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia
please tell dear it is abhiya ff or abhina ff

Hi Chandni, This is not actually my FF as I don't know have a story as of now. This is something I wanted in PKYEK. I am just writing a track on how I wanted it and am requesting the help of our FF writers to take it up forward.

Since the story is about Abhay and Piya's love story, it would be Abhiya FF only. But I also want Jeh and Alina to play important roles as I believe they were not given much importance in the show. Esp Alina who was supposed to have great powers.

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Dearest Dhrishti,Diya, Juhi,Trishna,Jiya thanks a lot for the feed back.

But I am no good writer yaar. It is exactly like what Dhrishti said, its more of Relieving PKYEK than a FF. I need some help on taking this forward after a couple of chapters from my desired track.

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Ts beautiful harinii...da plot luks interesting..vud luv to read more..pm me:)

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hey harry i want to put my personal view i hate abhay here d way he play wid alina's heart, i knw he has priority towards his clan but also he has to give trust to pia's love wid dis and he must think some otherways to get power without hurting 2 innocent soul and i wish abhay has to pay for dis mistake, he is thinking dat after gaing power he live happily wid pia but d way he was doing make him to lose pia and also make situation complicated wid alina, provided unlike show where she jst backaw..

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Yeh Trishna, I agree that it was wrong of him to fake love with Alina. But we never got proper answers justifying his actions. And it was too bad that they showed Alina that she would accept both his confessions alike - when he proposed his love and when he later declined it. They should have shown proper justifications of her behaviour too. Thats why here I wrote that Abhay was in a panic situation of losing his mother and he did not have time nor anyones help to think of an alternate plan without having to break the hearts of two young ladies - one whom he loved most and the other whom he regarded most.. But they should have showed more consequence of his this action, instead they simply took the story in a way as if both the girls felt that this incident never happened. And what to speak of the mount college student. They showed many fillers but never mentioned a gossip on this.