My version of PKYEK FF & a Request-Chap2 updated

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My dear FF writers - Dishu, Ayesha, Shreya, Snigdha, Tanzee and all others who write beautiful FFs. Kudos to your imaginations and creativity. I have a humble request. I have always wanted an interesting track in PKYEK as below, like all of you do, but never had the creativity to write a track which I badly wanted to happen. So could I request any of you to take up the track from where I wish to as told below :-
The track is from the scene, where Abhay proposes to Alina in front of all the students of Mount College and leaves Piya heart broken. But I don't want Misha to be attacked by Haseena.
The situation of the characters are sketched below :-
Abhay:-
Abhay has to convince Alina to take him to the potion or let it be any kind of power with help of which, not only would he save Haseena's life by curing her of her blood thirst, but also gain such power in supernatural world, and which would help him and his clan to move freely in the human world and behave like normal humans. Something similar to what the werewolves possess.
Dipannita:-
Here I don't strictly mind Dipannita's family being that of werewolves, but a family of sorcessors. This potion/power Dipannita's family already have, but do not want to share it with the Vampires just for the sake of want of power. This power is something they are permitted to share.
The reason why Dipannita kept Alina locked is not merely because of hatred but because of three main reasons
1.Alina was too powerful which she got by inheritance
2.However Alina always wanted a normal life, to be loved and accepted by others, wanting things to go in her way and seeking attention
3.This attitude of Alina always proved dangerous to the Khurana family because Alina never hesitated to use her powers to seek others acceptance of her because she never cared for her powers. This might prove dangerous to the Khurana's if someone took advantage of Alina's vulnerable attitude.
Chandeena and the Vampire Superiors :-
Haseena is possessed by some one, who is making her blood thirsty. The vampire superiors have come to know of it and for them the secrecy of the existence of vampires is imperative. They want to finish off Haseena as she might expose them easily in her conditions. They are aware of Arnab approaching Vampire hunters and they are just looking for an opportunity to bring the truth of Raichands and destroy them. Chand requests the vampire superiors to postpone the execution of Haseena, by convincing them Haseena is only being possessed and not doing it by her will and that Abhay is trying his best to get the power which would not only help to control Haseena's thirst, but also which would enable them to exist among humans normally without any risk of exposure. The Vampire superiors are impressed with this and also the fact that Alina is now with the Raichands. They also extend their support by sending few of them to Raichand's house to keep an eye on Haseena and prevent her from attacking. However they warn Chand that incase they are on the verge of being exposed, they would finish of Haseena then and there before the truth is out.
Piya:-
Piya is heart broken at the public confession of Abhay.She is oblivious of the Khurana's true identity. She does not know that Haseena is the one who is responsible for vampire attacks. Though Abhay asks her to trust him and tells her that she is the only truth of his life, she is not able to imagine, how everything could become normal that Alina is so much in love with Abhay and even the human side of Abhay would not want to leave Alina heart broken. She also does not understand on what is the thing which is under the possession of Alina, that Abhay has gone to this extent. She feels like going mad as she does not have anyone to speak to about this. Her sisters and friends would only chide her for still hanging on Abhay, especially when he had moved on with Alina. And she is also playing with Jeh. She cannot also talk about this to Jeh, because he is no longer her friend and seems to be an obsessive lover, never leaving her alone for a moment. He even does not seem to mind Abhay and Alina's relationship. She has in many ways tried to tell him that she does not love him. She also can see it that Jeh knows it but does not want to accept it. He never seems to leave an opportunity to declare to the people that he and Piya are a couple. She feels it somewhere in her heart, that if she tells it explicitly to Jeh that she does not love him, he is not going to like it and only would create more problems. She has already witnessed the anger of an animal in him when he tries to hit Kabir, when he shouts at Alina, when he shouted at Piya who kissed Abhay in a Truth and Dare game. She infact wanted Abhay's help to keep away Jeh from her life. But she could not. She knows that her father is teaming with the Vampire catchers to destroy the Raichands. She is very much scared about this and she wanted to be very much with Abhay.
Jeh:-
Jeh had used Piya to bring back Abhay as Abhay's blood was essential to bring the life of his brother back. However in between all these, he started to like Piya and considering the fact that she is Abhay's love, he wanted to possess Piya as a victory over Abhay and his helplessness. Now that he not only lost both his brothers Gaurav and Neil, his mother is also forced into hiding. His fury is not so blind as that of Dipannita, because he does not blame only Abhay for loss of his brothers. If only his mother had not attacked the Raichands that night, Abhay would not have staked Dipannita and to bring her back to life, the soul of his brother had to be sacrificed. Dipannita has instructed Jeh to keep a low profile at this moment as the Raichands also are not less powerful. She had received instructions that she cannot risk the life of her clan just because of her personal issues as Gaurav should never have supported Siddharth in the first place to fight the Vampires. Both the vampire superiors and the werewolf (sorcessors) superiors did not want any disturbance and be exposed in the human world. However Jeh was not willing to give up Piya. If he cannot fight a war with Abhay and avenge his brother's death, atleast he would not allow Abhay have his love. He had warned Abhay a lot of times, that he would prefer to see Piya dead rather than Abhay getting her. He himself was not sure if he could kill Piya because he too loved her in his own way and wanted to possess her at any cost. Infact he was having a tough time convincing his mother on not to kill Piya for taking revenge on Abhay. His mother told him and he also knew that Piya still loved Abhay and not him. He would use Piya in a different way to take his vengence on Abhay. As of now, she was his trump card. He agreed to Alina's wish that she could move out and behave as a normal human being on her condition to bring back Dipannita to life. But he never expected that Alina would take a liking to Abhay and not even see that Abhay could use Alina against her own people. He tried to keep her by force but came to know that she is all too powerful for him and if he stops her from having her way, she might even hurt him and turn against the whole clan. He now understood why Dipannita kept her locked in a room. He still felt that Dipannita could have explained things to Alina in a proper way than locking her up. But now with Abhay faking relation with Alina and Alina so dumbly believing Abhay and just to win his affection, she is ready to share her family secrets, Jeh could not afford to keep her away from his sight even for a moment. He has to constantly follow her actions and take decisions accordingly.
Alina:-
A simple, naive girl, never believed that she had a lot of powers by inheritence. All her childhood had passed in the training of using her powers in the dark terrible caverns. How much she hated it and how badly she wanted to spend time with her brothers and her friends. She did not believe in this stupid inheritance of power. Her mother was constantly behind her testing her powers at the end of each of those horrible sessions with the hooded people. She saw no fun in it. She was very much relieved to be back with her family and was the apple of the eye of her brothers. But her mother and brothers were constantly upon her forcing to use her powers on some stupid achievements which they called as accumulating powers. She missed being with her friends and tried her best to use her powers to impress them by entertaining with some magic. Her family disapproved of this and she was always under constant survelliance of one of her brothers. She never liked the fighting stuff and sometimes to stop this, she had used her powers against her family. This enraged Dipannita and she locked Alina in a room not allowing her to meet anyone. Her brothers also did not come to her support. She was totally against her brother supporting the vampires just because they promised something more in return. Even Dipannita was greedy that she did not discourage Gaurav from his act. But in the fight that followed, they only lost Gaurav. His mother had preserved the body as she believed that Gaurav could be brought back to life by sacrificing Abhay's blood. Now who was this Abhay and why was he buried in a ice grave which her brothers constantly planned to get this Abhay out of the grave. Her family moved to Dehradoon suddenly and her brothers were planning to get close with the Dobrial family. There was this girl Piya, whom her mother and brothers believed that, she would bring back Abhay from the ice grave. How was that possible? She was more curious to know about all this. However she was sent away by her mother to those horrible hooded people who insisted on Alina practising on her powers every day. One day she escaped from them saying that she wanted to go home to see her brothers. She was curious to know what her family were upto that they had taken a false identity of Khuranas. Despite Jeh's warning, she took the car out and then there was this accident where Piya was knocked down. Her brother blamed her for this and she was surprised to know that Piya was Jeh's girl friend. Then then suddenly she sees this handsome vampire who simply bashes her for causing the accident. So this was the vampire who had killed her brother and her family was hell bent on getting his blood to revive her brother. But she was too shocked that her mother was totally upset about her coming to this place and was feeling horrible when her mother locked her up again in the coffin room. Her people had given her the powers to read the maps for all the hidden secrets in the jungle. She also was given a direction on how to approach to these places from her present house. Using this, this escaped from the coffin room, to the part of the jungle, where she sees Abhay and Piya talking. So are these the two lovers, her family was talking about. But she seems to be the same one who Jeh introduced as his girl friend. Then what was she doing with Abhay. Before she could follow them, Dipannita had reached out to her and she put her in a room behind the paintings. Alina shouted at the top of her voice to be let out, and then this person came in suddenly and freed her. He told her that Abhay had sent him to free her and bring her to the Dobrial house where her family was currently. Who was this Abhay and why did he try to free her. Abhay treated her politely and somehow she felt very secured with him. The kind of feeling which she never felt before. She wanted to know more about him and somewhere within her she wanted to be with him. She wanted this so much that she conveniently forgot that Abhay loved Piya a lot and it was this love which brought him back from the ice grave. Her brother liked Piya a lot. So why not let him win her. Her family treated her badly, so why not give them a taste of their own medicine. They had infact tried to kill her. She had written off any rational thought and just wanted to win Abhay at any cost. All she wanted was acceptence for which she was ready to do any thing, even share her valuable family secrets. She never wanted them anyway. But if they would help her to get what she wanted, then why not use them. Abhay had now made her the most happiest person by declaring his love for her so openly. Even Jeh does not seem to mind. She would give anything to Abhay in return for his affection and acceptence. Anything he wanted.
Arnab Dobrial:-
Arnab was always prejudiced about the Raichands. He always felt that there was some mystery and now he knew for sure that they were not normal humans. They could be vampires. He had always dreaded the vampires from his childhood and moreover a vampire had actually tried to kill his two daughters last year. All he wanted was to destroy the Raichands whom he believed were vampires. Now he had teamed with a group of vampire catchers and also had Jeh and Dipannita to support him. Dipannita led Arnab believe that it was because of the vampires she had to move into hiding. Since she knew their truth, they would never let her survive and they had already killed her son Neil. With all his knowledge on the vampires, he was waiting for an opportunity to expose and finish off the Raichands.
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Chapter 2
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harinisriram39 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So many views and not even one like or a comment 😔 I know I am a bad writer yet wanted to write
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I had given the situations of the characters in PKYEK for the track I wanted. I will write the start of the track and request our FF writers in helping me proceeding further.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: harinisriram39

<font color="#000099">So many views and not even one like or a comment 😔I know I am a bad writer no harini u r nt...i really likd it...& wuld luv 2 read more... yet wanted to write </font>

do pm me
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Madam, pehle likhiye toh sahi. I am sure a lot of us will pitch in to help😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice plot.

I am sure it will be more interesting as it proceeds further.
All the characters are nice here, good storyline
continue it and plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plse start wid this ff... sounds interesting... as i myself not happy wid d end part of d beautiful show, its not upto our expectations... i think dey r in hurry to close d channel... and ya pm me whenever u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey good beginning. Continued your writing, if you need help. I'll help you too. 😉
Edited by abhiya_kapi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb cs.do pm me wheneva u update
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sound really interesting...pls continue and pm me...😳
i really want to read more...😛

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