Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 85

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Phew. Finally the court case comes to a happy end.

Still scared for pia though.

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

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AMAZING! That was a very impressive update tanzie!! 👏 Thanks Indu

wonderfully written in a strong, plain, unpretentious style..distinguished by humour and powerful understatement. Excellent.👏
and i so prefer your mode of style! Its straight and bang on!👏

with lot of court room drama an meaningful plotting it was full of thrilling events!

Especially the Mohini Kol encounter was the show stellar!! ⭐️ Their argument..rage..the past, all was packed so niftly! Bestest part of this update.👏 thanks a lot. I enjoyed writing it and im glad i wrapped up the case. didnt want to drag it.

Abhaypia pia's concern, depressive state and Abhay and his frustration was narrated brilliantly! Their fight was just a natural part of any marrital life and that you have used greatly through them. Bravo! 👏 I want them as normal couple so yes thats how it is 😆

And i always go estatic by the way you describe scenes of Mohini. They are quite a class! ⭐️ the role of nature, mohini's rage, it all makes it so powerfully brilliant! 👏 glad you liked it

Pia said everything to Kol except the part that was most important!!! :-(
But figures! Thats how the future problems will arrive i suppose!😉

Waiting to see what mohini's next plan would be and how will she make use of the hair! you will get to know within 2/3 updates I suppose.

Overall it was pretty long..😆 ya..but was so interesting that i read in one go! The court room drama especially! Very intelligent writing there tanzie.👏 great update.👍🏼
please carry on...🤗 Thanks Indu. I will try to update on Eid or after that. lets see If i can.

p.s. Am so sorry for being so late. I missed it. I thought i have commented. :-( bt when i saw ur note and came to check i realized. Really sorry! From now on i'll have to be more careful! :) its completely alright dear. Im late too in updating so it doesnt matter :) Im just glad you commented.

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

Tanzie tanzie tanzie...my god that was brilliant...see abhay ko ek chiz btayi gayi aur usne turant mystry solve kar di...annd i like abhiya fight...😆😉 kinne time baad dono ko fight karte dekhe hain...😛