Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Very Important Note:

I will be shifting all my FF PM list to separate account since its getting difficult to send Pm to 300 people in my friend list so kindly add this account if you want to receive PM for my FFs from now on. will be shifting all my PM list there there:

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Disha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Phew. Finally the court case comes to a happy end.

Still scared for pia though.

Edited by ..Bournville.. - 11 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AMAZING! That was a very impressive update tanzie!! 👏

wonderfully written in a strong, plain, unpretentious style..distinguished by humour and powerful understatement. Excellent.👏
and i so prefer your mode of style! Its straight and bang on!👏

with lot of court room drama an meaningful plotting it was full of thrilling events!

Especially the Mohini Kol encounter was the show stellar!! ⭐️ Their argument..rage..the past, all was packed so niftly! Bestest part of this update.👏

Abhaypia pia's concern, depressive state and Abhay and his frustration was narrated brilliantly! Their fight was just a natural part of any marrital life and that you have used greatly through them. Bravo! 👏

And i always go estatic by the way you describe scenes of Mohini. They are quite a class! ⭐️ the role of nature, mohini's rage, it all makes it so powerfully brilliant! 👏

Pia said everything to Kol except the part that was most important!!! :-(
But figures! Thats how the future problems will arrive i suppose!😉

Waiting to see what mohini's next plan would be and how will she make use of the hair!

Overall it was pretty long..😆 ya..but was so interesting that i read in one go! The court room drama especially! Very intelligent writing there tanzie.👏 great update.👍🏼
please carry on...🤗

p.s. Am so sorry for being so late. I missed it. I thought i have commented. :-( bt when i saw ur note and came to check i realized. Really sorry! From now on i'll have to be more careful! :)

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago

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pia surve

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

i hv send d request on ur new a/c. plz accept it. and update soon.

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story

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PhoenixFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Updated. please add this account for PMs from future.

Edited by PhoenixFF - 11 years ago

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

I really am confused whether i should be happy that Abhay is free or terrified that Mohini is gonna get worse. I am literally shaking at the very thought of what she will do to Pia. Knowing you something totally out of loop. Anyways i loved the update specially kol and mohinis arguement. Am looking forward to honeymoon. And pia learning from haseena how to be the boss.

Awesome Tanzi

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us.

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..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#830

Tanzie tanzie tanzie...my god that was brilliant...see abhay ko ek chiz btayi gayi aur usne turant mystry solve kar di...annd i like abhiya fight...😆😉 kinne time baad dono ko fight karte dekhe hain...😛

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