Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superb fantastic update tanzie...so abhiya on their honeymoon😃😉

Omg!! What will mohini do with jeh...😲

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Rumki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

loved the update
finally Abhiya on honeymoon...loved Abhiya part😆...Pia is so naughty😆
btw whats Mohini going to do with Jeh?

Eid Mubarak to u too🤗

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Thanks for finally updating this Tanzie. loved it.

so finally Abhiya honeymoon started 😆

I wonder what Mohini has in store for Jeh now. I just hope no major harm comes to him

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Thanks for the lovely update and Eid Mubarak to u too...I totally loved the short update finally abhiya are on track now but m worried 4 jeh now...cont soon

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

that was a nice update. I liked that Jeh scene in the beginning and how it overlaps with the ending scene. jeh will surely pay for helping them :/
the Abhay Piya scene was funny. mutual seduction haha and Aryan his words were 😆
all in all pretty light and happy. how long will this last?

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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great update!👏
I told you a number of times but i want to say again-that i love Kol.😳 i simple love the way you are portraying him here. Am enjoying it totally.😃
so now Kol and Abhay are searching for ragini. Bt dnt they know that if she is a metamorphosis they wnt be able to find her.? I mean she wnt have ragini's face anymore. Dnt they know that or have they forgotten it?😕

I also like the way you pictured the whole Jeh scenario. The awkardness..jeh saying 'we are still nt friends Raichand.' were perfect.👏

Its good to see that Alina is living with them now.😊

and i also like how you mention small but important things-like when its stated that Abhay wanted a man talk! Its a natural thing and being a vampire doesnt really change some basic facts like this. Great job there.👏

now abhaypia.
Well..again the fact that pia is angry with abhay for lashing at her and coming late was another apt projection of a marital relationship. It was very natural and common part between any husband and wife. And its the same here. Very very good.👏

also i loved how Abhay told her why he lashed at her instead of just stopping at a sorry. Yes he had his reasons and a very natural gesture on his part too to place his point while at the same time being genuinely sorry.👏

so their happy time together starts now. I only cnt help bt wonder how long will it last.
Anyway coming to jeh-i was pretty much expecting this! I knew mohini wouldnt spare him. Afteral he had betrayed her and from someone like mohini forgiveness is something we can hardly expect.😳

ahh..i now wonder what will jeh do! Will he contact alina or will he fight all alone?!! I shall eagerly wait to know that.😊

overall a great update. 👏
take care tazie. Waiting for next. And thanks a lot for the pm.🤗

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

She is 2nd name of "everything is possible for me" ❤️ dis line ...

god bless the furniture's of Mom's poor villa and I hope Belgium makes fine and STRONGER wood there!!" Alina and Amber bursts into laughing. 🤣🤣

finally abhiya r on honeymoon:) m afraid of Mohini she wil nt leave jey.. Wht vil she do nw? :/

Lovely updt tanzie 👍🏼

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story

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megha sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

amazing update

despite being negative i am really liking mohini in your story coz she is a very strong character and is very intriguing. her determination is praised even by her opponents.

"she is second name of "everything is possible for me"

this line quite sums up her strong will and the extent o which she can go to achieve her goals. if only she would have used it positively she and kol would have been together and happier too.

alina-jeh-pia scene was wonderful. even if abhay and jeh haven't become friends atleast they won't be murderous towards each other. great to see jeh finally doing the right thing.

abhay-pia were superb. loved their fight. it's only pia who can shock or get angry from abhay otherwise no one can even dare to treat him like this.

alina-amber and aryan convo was hilarious.

the last part...i hope jeh does call alina and ask for help coz mohini won't spare him for sure. he has betrayed her.

can't wait to read further.

eid mubarak to u tanzie