Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 14

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

ye hui na baat tanzie too gud yaar

one side peehu is rescued and the other side abhay...!

oh party tym🥳

poor mohini😆

Originally posted by: mandy1024

You were honestly disappointed with this update Tanzie? 😲 This is one of THE BEST update of this FF ever 👏 I'd say this is a milestone. U have it taken it a notch up with this brilliant piece of writing ⭐️ Vampires are no fairy tale beasts n trust me had this part been mellow as a reader I'd be disappointed This update was perfect beyond perfection for me 👏 Its OK I know what u will say, that I am exaggerating n all that 😛, but this time I honestly don't care coz I am going to tell what I exactly felt on reading it: Superb, Amazing, Brilliant, Captivating, Passionate, Fantabulous, Outstanding 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Yes yes you always exaggerate 😛 and thanks a lot for the wonderful words, I donno if I deserve them and I wanted the scene to be difficult and dark and glad I have made it up my mark. 😳

Pia's outburst on their passionate encounter was amazingly depicted. Here she is with a man whom she loves with every fibre of her being who has no recollection about her n then his touches rekindle those fond memories she has of him 😳 It was truly touching 😭 i wanted to show its not lust. she is defo attracted to him physically, both are but then she knows the person loving her is same but NOT really the same.. its so ironically depressing

Haseena n Chand have gone to SC. I hope their appeal doesn go in vain Coming to Ragini, I really wonder what could have possibly gone wrong there. Abhay did seem to love her but from what we saw of him till now Ragini was just like any other woman he had probably dated and then left 😕 Whats with this mystery? There's another jury member who will shock and surprise everyone next update but he/she will help Abhay in the court process 😉 Yes, at that time Ragini was just a woman Abhay liked. not really loved but she loved him.

I am so happy that u showed Armaan 😊 Had missed him. When will Armaan n Amby realise their feelings for each other? Amber deserves her share of happiness. I hope they get together soon.

I am glad Aryan could rescue Peehu 😊 I hope nothing happens to Peehu or their unborn. Mohini is under the illusion that Abhay will be doomed 😆 Wait n watch honey, ur in for the biggest shock of your life 🤣 She will be revolting and twins will come to world within next 4-5 updates.

Coming to the main part of the story, what shall I say? It was brilliantly written, infact best part of this FF ever. Abhay's scorching thirst, Pia's determination to bring him out of the BlackHole Spell, Abhay trying to control his thirst for not hurting Pia as she had been good to him was wonderfully written 👏 Pia selflessly offering her blood to him n Abhay lured by the call of her blood but more determined not to harm her was portrayed brilliantly. My heart went out to Pia who had to endure so much pain to bring her love back 😭 Especially when the knife cut through her belly Then Abhay trying to save her despite the fact that her blood was driving him senseless, healing the cut while taking in the pleasure of her intoxicated blood and then biting her again was very realistic for a vampire who is blood thirsty, but at the same time doesn want to harm his victim. 👏👏 Pia believed somewhere deep inside that Abhay cant kill her specially because of how he was reacting hear her. Abhay tried his best to control him but in the end he is a vampire and even in this thirst he almost healed her and that's why he is Abbay - thats why he is so unique from everyone.

And then Abhay finally giving into his beast! 👏👏👏👏👏 Superbly written ⭐️ Every intake of Pia's blood telling him her story, infact their story was mindblowing 👏 Then Abhay after having sucked her dry finally came out of Mohini's dark spell n what does he see next? 😭 His love who has gone to extent of laying down her life for him was on the brink of death 😭 Abhay's pain n guilt was wonderfully portrayed here n kudos to u for that 👏 Abhay ripping his chest to revive Pia n Pia feeling every emotion he went through was so so emotional. Now both of them exactly know how they feel about the other 👏 WOW! Am speechless but yet I have written a marathon of a reply 😆 They finally fought against all odds to be together 😍 isnt the scene at the same time scary, mesmerizing, heart stopping, poetic and sexy? 😆 i mean it has to be one of my fav things I have ever written.. this scene only. 😳 i was confused about the bloody exchange should be done by which body part. dishu helped. it was classic Dracula act actually. I loved your reply dear..thanks for the detail analysis 🤗

Mohini ko 1000 volts ka jhatka zor se laga 🤣

Once again fab update Tanzie 👏 thanks a lot dear 🤗

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Amazing update tanzie!!!! I don't have words to say how much I loved it. U are saying u feel it's not very good, but for me it's just more than perfect. Everything was described so beautifully. Both abhay and piya's emotion, inner turmoil, pain everything was perfectly described. I loved every bit of it, but I felt that the part where abhay drank blood from piya's belly and saw all her emotions on the otherhand the part where abhay offered his blood to piya and piya drank it from abhay's heart for me, it was most beautuful and intense part of this update. I so so loved it. And the last part where the sand clock smashed, omg I felt like jumping here and there, I felt to happy like all this were happening in reality. Just marvellous. Plz update next part soon, the more I read ur writing more I get amazed, u are really god gifted writer, such a brillant writer u are. Plz plz plz update as soon as u get time.