Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148) - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
Finally Abhay is back
The last part of Abhiya was the best I was reading without breathing
I could see everything in my brains as it is going in front of me and I am not reading
Mohini would be very devasted
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome Tanzie spell is broken by Pia 2 Mohini's utter shock and disbelief and also Peehu is saved yay seems like Mohini's all plans r backfiring on her
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG, this Pia, I tell you, is one CRAZY woman! But then, I guess, that is why she is the only one who deserves to be called his soulmate. We all want an Abhay for us but to handle an Abhay, you need to be a Pia that's for sure. No one else could've gotten Abhay back from the Blackhole. The scene was scary, true, but it just makes you realise what exactly makes us love them so much. The spell is now broken, YAYIEE me!. Tanzie, seriously, hats off to you. You really know what soulmates are made of.
And I love how she got him back in the AR Villa; the place where their story began and the place where they now have a new beginning. That is my favourite place in this FF and AbhIya feel more at home there than anywhere else❤️
I hope Peehu is fine. Poor Aryan, he must've been so shocked. I hope he, Amber and Arman can save her😃
I would've loved to see Mohini's face when she realised the spell is broken😆.😆
Now about Ragini, now I'm really curious to know what exactly happened with her and more about Abhay's past with her.

Continue soon🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update tanzie.This update of urs was very edgy.I can feel the vampire touch in this update.Abhiya proximity,their fight.Pia's stubborness 2 bring Abhay back.Abhay resolution not 2 hurt Pia & tht ripping part & whole blood transfer scene was well describe.I loved tht intense,dark yet passionate scene.Amby-armaan were gud & Gud 2 c peehu & aryan together Plz cont.Cant wait 4 Abhiya now.Wnt 2 c Pia's reaction.. Love u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
tanzie just love the update
finally piya make abhay back
seriously yar loved the way piya thrist him to her blood and even die to him
what happened with pheeu now
happy now what will mohani do lets see
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wht an awsome update yu have describe abhiyas feeling vry welll
now jaldi se update karo aur agle update me sirf abhiya aur unka cute sa sweet sa hot sa romantic sa and awsome sa pyaaarrr hona chiye aur kuch nahi hume agle update me abhiya ka hot love making scene unki feelings unka romance dekhna hai got it my sweetu :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Wht an awsome update yu have describe abhiyas feeling vry welll
now jaldi se update karo aur agle update me sirf abhiya aur unka cute sa sweet sa hot sa romantic sa and awsome sa pyaaarrr hona chiye aur kuch nahi hume agle update me abhiya ka hot love making scene unki feelings unka romance dekhna hai got it my sweetu :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)


I had to reply this comment though I haven't replied anyone till now. Im really sorry to dissapoint you but I need to clarify a few things . I dont write FFs for writing only cheesy romantic things and hot love making scenes entire updates. there are many other FFs which contains romantic things only and nothing else, I suggest you read those only please 😊

In next update there are lots of things to deal with specially how Abhay will deal with Aryan's betrayal because he doesnt know anything about Peehu. how he will deal with the remorse for what he has done with Pia, how Mohini will react and how Abhay will now deal with Mohini and also supernatural court because he is a convict and that's the most important thing in the FF right now because she has failed and it will get dangerous for everyone around. I hope I have clarified myself well... no offence to anyone 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
Well Said Tanzie. Story line is much more important than romance and love making.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan


I had to reply this comment though I haven't replied anyone till now. Im really sorry to dissapoint you but I need to clarify a few things . I dont write FFs for writing only cheesy romantic things and hot love making scenes entire updates. there are many other FFs which contains romantic things only and nothing else, I suggest you read those only please 😊

In next update there are lots of things to deal with specially how Abhay will deal with Aryan's betrayal because he doesnt know anything about Peehu. how he will deal with the remorse for what he has done with Pia, how Mohini will react and how Abhay will now deal with Mohini and also supernatural court because he is a convict and that's the most important thing in the FF right now because she has failed and it will get dangerous for everyone around. I hope I have clarified myself well... no offence to anyone 😳



Well actually I totally agree with you tanzie! I have seen so many FFs where there is romance without any plot that I am honestly tired now. And I always believe that in a story, the writer is the boss- So it's incredibly naive, not to mention rude, to forcibly ask for specific themed updates. I personally like your story a lot, as it balances out romance and an incredibly good plot. That is what distinguishes people like you guys from just *any* writer...Because in a story, at least to me, plot matters most.😳 You didn't need to clarify yourself to anyone but I guess some people are perfect examples of "laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante" 🤣

Keep a cool head and go on with whatever you have planned. I for one won't have any complaints, and I know a sizeable number of readers will understand too. Tc dear😳

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan


I had to reply this comment though I haven't replied anyone till now. Im really sorry to dissapoint you but I need to clarify a few things . I dont write FFs for writing only cheesy romantic things and hot love making scenes entire updates. there are many other FFs which contains romantic things only and nothing else, I suggest you read those only please 😊

In next update there are lots of things to deal with specially how Abhay will deal with Aryan's betrayal because he doesnt know anything about Peehu. how he will deal with the remorse for what he has done with Pia, how Mohini will react and how Abhay will now deal with Mohini and also supernatural court because he is a convict and that's the most important thing in the FF right now because she has failed and it will get dangerous for everyone around. I hope I have clarified myself well... no offence to anyone 😳


Tanzie ur story is headed the right way dear 😊 n it has a perfect balance of mystery, thrills, family bonding n romance 👍🏼 U have already given us romance n I am more than happy about it. For me romance is all about being together, understanding each other, some light moments here n there n maybe an ILU confession Embarrassed I defo dont think that romance is all about making out 😛 endlessly. Well had Abhiya not confessed their love for each or been together through both good n bad times I would've probably cribbed about not getting romance here but u have given us a good blend of all the aspects of a story in this FF 👏 n I am more than happy for that. Please calm down dear n go ahead with the story just like u had planned.

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

3 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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