Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: kuttu
Pia trying to fool abhay and he didn't see it coming was a big surprise. Pia really showed the lengths she could go and abhay inspite of loosing memeory didn't want to hurt Pia. Now I guess Pia is no. 1 on Mohini's hit list.
Peehu back into Aryans life somehow whenever she comes back into his life it is just an onset of a brewing storm Mohini would be furious to know all her trump cards are lost. Jai will he stand on his own in the super natural court or has he dug his own grave by shaking hands with the devil herself.
I am waiting to see Mohinis reaction to the developments She sure is not going to like the turn of events and she would plan something more deadly this time for sure.

Well if Abhay could have been in his senses he would have guessed because he knew Pia inside out but this Abhay who doesnt even know himself well couldn't guess the limit Pia could cross. Mohini wont realize just now that how it happened because it was impossible in her dictionary but yes, she would be livid and try to revive the spell.

Peehu coming back will create more problems in Aryans life but she is helpless now. I have good plans for Jeh and soon he will know his sister is alive which would change his POV.

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Poor Mohini, she lost the game on two fronts.
Or rather she was bound to loose because she underestimated the power of love.
The love AbhIya share, the love Aryan has for Peehu.
He tore open his chest and let his love bleed into her.
That was poetic Tanz.
Ragini seems to be a significant part of Abhay's past.
Excellent work Tanz.
Love
Nidha

Thanks a lot Nidha. Mohini wont give up so easily. glad you liked that scene, always wanted to write an blood exchange scene and Im happy I did and you guys liked it. There will be more Ragini soon in flashback.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
Amazing dr... Now abhay will be back... I loved it...
Finally pia was succeded...
I hope peehu will also be fine... Waiting 4 d next chapter.. Cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

Thanks Akshi. yes Abhay is alright now will be busy fixing everything now.

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Hey tanzie ,what an awesome piece of writing yaar
Loved it and wow abhay is back to normal finally all because of piya and aryan found peehu , tats great armaan and Amber part was nice , can't simply wait for next upd , thesis getting very interesting 😃

Thanks Roshni. Yes Abhay is back to normal and Aryans babies will come within 4-5 updates. I have ignored Arman for a while because I had to focus on other characters but he has a important part to play soon.

Originally posted by: ririrararaatry
awesome book...you should send it to ekta...btw can anybody tell me that who is amby...i can noy see her pic

Thank you. Amber is Abhay's and Aryan's sister and the role would be taken by Jennifer Windget

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: -_Sweta_-
That one was one of the beautiful update of this FF Tanzy...👏
Loved it to the core...😊
I was like Blushing, Shocked, Surprise and dancing in joy at the same time..
That Kiss.. Awwiee!!😳 thank you so much
I felt that Abhay and Piya were long lost Romeo Juliet meeting each other after a long time... And the swimming pool plus the combination of Hot and Cold was Haaye!!.. 😳 glad you liked it 😳
They were messing Piya's mind?? I guess they were messing my mind more...🤣
Now I hope the Supernatural Court doesn't create any more problems.. Hope they agree with Haseena and Chand's evidences..😕 they wont and Abhay will have to go to his hearing in the court soon.
Piya's plan was mind blowing... Though she was sacred she worked out an awesome plan to bring Abhay back!!😃
Woah!! Does Ragini and Abhay have a past?? Coz the past story is indicating that way..😲 yes, i have written in BOOK 1 that Ragini is Abhay's first love...
Peehu is back with Aryan?? I wonder how... Thank God Aryan didn't go to get back Piya and Abhay otherwise everything would go down the drain...
Uh Oh!! Piya was playing with fireby giving Abhay no blood.. Whiskeys pe Whiskeys??
Humka peeni hai peeni hai humka peeni hai...🤣
Abhay scared the hell out of Piya and Me... I was literally biting my nails as to what was coming next...
Piya's selfless love brought Abhay back from that blackhole spell... She offered her blood despite of the fear that she could die... But this is what Love is?? Right..!!😊 Yes, Pia can go to any extent for Abhay and so does he.. soulmates afterall
And the Lover Boy and Romantic Abhay Raichand is Back!!!😳
Finally they two are united together as their fate... So Happy I am.!!
Ha ha!! Mohini so deserved it.. That was on the face of evil witch!!😡 evil witch become crazy... she wont give up so easily.. 😆
That was one of the action packed update...
As I can see a romantic update is waiting in the chapter..☺️
Please update soon..😆
Thanks a lot for the PM..😊
Lots of love..🤗 thank you... will update tomorrow I hope.. .🤗

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr
Yeyyy... i m dancing ...!!! what a fantablous update 🤗 🤗 👏 i jst dont find words to praise this update n ur writting skills 😳 I love it to the core 😍
Partyy time because pehu bhi mill gayi or abhay theek ho gaya ... 🥳
update soon with loads of abhiya romance ☺️ ☺️
thanks for pm

Thank you Ayesha. romance ke liye please thoda sa aur intezer 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
awesome Tanzie spell is broken by Pia 2 Mohini's utter shock and disbelief and also Peehu is saved yay seems like Mohini's all plans r backfiring on her

Thanks a lot Ankita. Mohinis plan backfired too but she wont stop.

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
Finally Abhay is back
The last part of Abhiya was the best I was reading without breathing
I could see everything in my brains as it is going in front of me and I am not reading
Mohini would be very devasted
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Glad you liked it and I could make it good enough for you people's visualization 😳

Mohini wont be devastated but livid. she will try again...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy
OMG, this Pia, I tell you, is one CRAZY woman! But then, I guess, that is why she is the only one who deserves to be called his soulmate. We all want an Abhay for us but to handle an Abhay, you need to be a Pia that's for sure. No one else could've gotten Abhay back from the Blackhole. The scene was scary, true, but it just makes you realise what exactly makes us love them so much. The spell is now broken, YAYIEE me!. Tanzie, seriously, hats off to you. You really know what soulmates are made of. Yes for sure. Only Pia could have made this possible and break all rules of magic. thanks a lot dear. I have always felt Abhiya are true soulmates and they change the meaning of it to me so I tried to best to keep the essence of their love in my writing. 😳
And I love how she got him back in the AR Villa; the place where their story began and the place where they now have a new beginning. That is my favourite place in this FF and AbhIya feel more at home there than anywhere else❤️
I hope Peehu is fine. Poor Aryan, he must've been so shocked. I hope he, Amber and Arman can save her😃 That's the reason i brought them back there. where things started, they will find themselves and their love back... Aryan is through too much but his babies will arrive within 4-5 updates to bring back happiness in his life..
I would've loved to see Mohini's face when she realised the spell is broken😆.😆
Now about Ragini, now I'm really curious to know what exactly happened with her and more about Abhay's past with her.

Continue soon🤗 Mohini will be livid but wont stop either.. she will try again. Will write more about their past... 🤗

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Awesome update tanzie.This update of urs was very edgy.I can feel the vampire touch in this update.Abhiya proximity,their fight.Pia's stubborness 2 bring Abhay back.Abhay resolution not 2 hurt Pia & tht ripping part & whole blood transfer scene was well describe.I loved tht intense,dark yet passionate scene.Amby-armaan were gud & Gud 2 c peehu & aryan togetherPlz cont.Cant wait 4 Abhiya now.Wnt 2 c Pia's reaction..Love u🤗

Thanks Shrish. I wanted to bring touch of real vampire story and its intense and dark already so had to make the scene like that. Pia will be depressed because Abhay will refuse to face her due to guilt and remorse of hurting her.

Originally posted by: bellaaa
tanzie just love the update
finally piya make abhay back
seriously yar loved the way piya thrist him to her blood and even die to him
what happened with pheeu now
happy now what will mohani do lets see
cont soon

Thank you. Will write about Peehu next update. Mohini will try again

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#156

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

😳Tanzie, firstly Ramadan Mubarak to u 🤗

Secondly stop stressing over updates dear. I understand how tough it is 😊 to manage everything - fasting, prayers, office, its not remotely close to being easy n its OK if u cannot update this entire month also.

Coming to the update, YAY I am first again n this is my first for this FF 😃

So Mohini's hubby is an original vampire and he is Abhay's friend too 😉 Mohini tu toh gayi ab 😆 BTW I dont know much abt Kol as I haven't watched TVD season 3 from epi 9 onwards 😭 but I know he's Klaus' half brother. Mohini's spell is broken n now she needs Abhay again to do it 🤣 Uski toh BBB ho gayi 😆

Abhay finally came out of that spell n it was really touching - the letter he wrote for her. Loved the last line esp 😳

Glad to know that Peehu is back with Raichands n is under their protection. Damn that Mohini if she ever comes there 😡 Amber can't stand Peehu but she is willing to do whatever it takes to ensure hers n her children's safety for Aryan's sake 😊 I so love this woman 😃 I am glad to see Aryan strong emotionally now but I feel bad for Alina 😭 I'll always be team Aryan Alina unless u make Alina negative here which I hope u dont Amber n Arman are back to being on friendly terms again n I soon hope they find their happiness with each other 😳

I felt miserable in seeing Pia in that state 😭 It was so heart wrenching to see Abhay leave her again maybe it might be for her own good but still when Pia fought against destiny itself n brought him back only testifies the fact that they are meant to be forever 😳

Ok so Mohini doesn hate Abhay just bcoz of Ragini? 😈 Abhay revealed her true colors to Kol n thats the reason she spites him. Hmmm wonder what Abhay told Kol 😲 I hope Abhay gets to know y Aryan did that n I hope he can forgive him too Abhay's guilt n self torment was agonizing to read 😭 Well now that he's out of that spell hope Abhiya catch up on the lost time now, thanks to that b****h 😡 Bella is surely super dumb here 😆 Well the Bella in Twilight was super dumb as well 😛

So now Mohini wants to revive Mohini before Kol arrives? Hmmm 😕 Well I hope her plans backfire but I have an inkling she can succeed on this one for sure.

The last moment was brilliant 👏 Do I really have to say how much I loved it? 😳 Abhay's guilt, pain, longing, love was expressed so beautifully n then Pia's selfless undying love for him that crossed all boundaries of sanity and rationality was out of this world 😊 Tanzie hats off to u yaar 👏 U are an ace when it comes to romance ⭐️ I am surprised my lappy is in one piece still 😆 coz the passion was burning hawt ☺️ But as always u pull it off aesthetically n I am amazed each time 👏

Superb update 👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

aww tanzie beautoful update dear

the way you described Abhay's turmoil and guilt was really nice and heart-touching. the guilt of hurting someone who loves you and who you love more than your life is a very painful feeling and you described the pain really well.

Bella's lost mindedness cracked me up 😆

loved the line where abhay says i cant stay from you anymore. 😍 and their love was passionate and dreamy 😍

a very nice update indeed👏

Edited by ..dishu.. - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

dear aaj to thursday he. tum kb update krogi????? m waiting!!

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Rumki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

1st of all Ramadan Mubarak to u Tanzie

superb update.loved it❤️

poor Mohini loll, her spell is broken😆😆. Liked her outburst here

Finally Abhay is OK 👏. He remembers everything. Liked the letter part where one part Pia is happy that Abhay can remember everything😃 and other part she is sad that he left her again

Glad that Peehu is with Raichands and she cant move. Now she'll be safe here

Poor Pia, heart ache seeing her in this state. It is true that we can fight with the whole world but it hurts us most when we get hurt 4m loved ones

Hmm so Mohini don't hate Abhay only 4 Ragini's death, she hate Abhay because Abhay exposed her!!Abhay is sharp enough, even in this state he phoned Kol. Loll Bella 🤣🤣 she is dumb here as well🤣

Ow Mohini is trying to wake up Ragini 😲. Hope she wont succeed

Hmmm about the last part I hope I don't need to say how beautiful it was😳. It was superb, awesome, mind blowing👏.

Now cant wait 4 next chapter. Do update when you get time

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