Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

whoa what an update.. abhay coming out of spell.. mohini will soon realize power of love.. my abhiya is made her fail...whoa awesome update tanzie

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

OMG!what an update!
I m speechless,wordless n adjectiveless! 👏
finally power of true love won breaking d gr8est of spells,conquering all d hurdles,fears,dangers,trials n hardest of d tests! 👏 😃 piya did it!!!
Whole part was magnificantly written esp dat final abhiya part.
The line"two magnets trying desperately not 2 attract each other" well defined d situation frm abhay's POV n piya what can we say 4 her?she kept her heavenly love 4 abhay above her life 2 get him back frm blackhole!
Whole part was so heart touching n emotional 😭
in d end i totally enjoyed mohini's shocked xpressions!
Piya ne uski saari mehnat par apna khoon pher diya 😉
peehu s also rescued.hope d babies r safe!
overall lovely update n waiting desperately 4 d next part 😉

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

what an awsome update😉
the way u explained piya's determination for bringing her abhay back was just marvellous😳👏
& abhay trying to control his thirst for piya without knowing his past with her was a sign of a true lover😳 yipeee the spell broke peehu has also escaped😆
this one is for mohini
continu soon😳

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

wow amazing update!!!!!
loved it
the last part was fantastic!!!!!!!

yay!!! mohini's spell broke..abhay is back to normal yippee!!!

aryan found peehu...hope she will be fine soon. also liked amber n armaan's part ..glad he came to help amby.

abhiya scenes were just fab!!.it was gory but equally fascinating when abhay was abt to kill her i was reading holding my breath..i was like but when he remembered everything n the spell broke i was like

mohini was already eager to meet pia now she will be sure that pia have broken her spell...waht will she do now will she try to harm pia this time???

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neetu

@sweet_neetu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

It is just amazing tanzie
yipee sandclock spell broke
abhay is back

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

firstly congo for book 3...i never knew i read so much...and i am still in love with this fic...its my all time and i have actually read this fic 3 times all over again...and its a fact...😆...i never like reading same things again again..but there are very few stories which i have read more than once and yours is one of them...

btw this is my 1st comment on this thread...😆

amazing update tanzie...loved it...

the spell broke..abhay is back...aryan saved peehu. everything is getting back to normal for time being...mohini ke plans flop 😆...now tanzie...you have no idea i am so eager to read ur next update...reading the title of ur update is making me so impatient 😆..please update soon...

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sofia2

@sofia2

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

good story. pls pm me when u update. add me in ur buddy list.

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Tanvi Pareek

@tanvipareek

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

thanks tanzie for ur update and pm

ur work must be really appretiated.

and that run away part of pia and abhay and platform scene and afterwards that swimming pool scene..

really awsome

and finally true love make abhay to overcome from mohinies spell

nice tanzie

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Monkey

@TISA0711

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

yay. . . happy happy. . . 👍🏼peehu is rescued.than abhiya blood exchange was too good. .🤗

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squirrel

@urmita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

finally tanzie...finally the clocks are broken...nd yeah finally i edited my comment😆...i was waiting on this update eagerly...

abhiya are always so romantic...the blood exchange scene...pia tricked him into drinking from her...abhay actually gave her blood from his heart...literally...ohhh...abhiya r always too good...even more so when u write the ff...so don feel unsatisfied...

nd peehu is saved...she is with aryan...i hope she servives her delivery too...no more trouble for aryan please...

now mujhe agle update se mohini ki band bajte hue dekhni hai...vo bhi acche se...continue soon...

Edited by urmita - 13 years ago