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Posted: 12 years ago
Continued from part A
Abhiya's room
As soon as Piya stepped inside the room she was surprised to see Abhay was wearing a black shirt along with black coat and jeans, he always used to wear what Piya decided for him because he knew Piya's choice was best but today strangely, he wore something else, though piya felt bad but she made herself understand that may be abhay wanted to wear something else, though piya felt bad but she made herself understand that may be abhay wanted to wear something else today, she silently scolded herself for thinking like a stupid typical wife she and entered the room.
Piya entered the room with a big smile and wished Abhay good morning but was surprised to see that Abhay didn't reply her instead he was busy staring at some file.
On the otherhand Abhay was aware of Piya's sadness, as soon as she had stepped inside the room the tempting smell of her perfume had told him that she is there, busy staring at him, for once he was mesmerized seeing his angel in one of his favourite dress but he knew whatever he was doing was for Piya's sake only.
He ignored her wish, and kept the file inside the office bag and started to leave for the office only to be interrupted by Piya's voiceagain.
Piya-: Abhay stop, what's wrong? Why are u behaving like this? And where are u going?
Abhay-: nothing happened and stop asking me this kind of stupid questions, can't u see I am going to office?
Piya-: Abhay why are u talking to me like this? And at least have breakfast and I will accompany in ur office na, we both will leave together.
Abhay-: U don't need to come to office, I can take care of my responsibilities and I earn enough for us to live, so u stay at home and about breakfast I am not hungry and now if ur questioning is done, I am leaving.
Before piya could have uttered a single word abhay.left from their.
Piya was both shocked and confused at Abhay's changed behaviour, silent tears welled up in her eyes, why was Abhay behaving like that?Abhay never talked to herlike that? Yesterday only he was so good and calm and today he is behaving in this.way? What happened to him just in one night?
She remembered that before Abhay always used to give a light kiss on her forehead and then after her forcing him he used to go to office and that also after taking her with him, as they both worked together in office ,together only they were able to set such a huge company, but today he said her that she is not neededanymore in office? Why? Several questions were surrounding Piya's mind now but Tara's voice made her come out of her thoughts.
Piya hurriedly wiped away her tears and turned only to see Tara standing at the.door.
Tara-: Di, jiju left for office so.early, he did his breakfast?
Piya-: (smiled a little) yea...Yea abhay had breakfast early today, actually he had a.important meeting today so he left early, that's it.
Tara-: oh then ok, ok di come have breakfast, I am hungry.
Piya nodded and both left for breakfast table.
Breakfast Table
Piya and Tara were surprised to see Varun sitting quietly and having breakfast.
Tara and Piya looked at each.other confused and joined Varun.
Piya-: Varun why are u so quiet?
Varun-: nothing bhabhi, just.thinking something, u know today bro behaved so strangely, u know while he was going to office by mistake I kept my bike infront of his car he strangely unlike other days, didn't scold me in his usual friendly tone but he scolded me seriously which he never did before ever, I am not saying that I felt.bad or anything, he is my elder bro and he has right to scold me but the thing is that he behaved in a totally changed manner.
Piya by now knew for sure that something was wrong
with Abhay, she smiled a bit and assured Varun saying Abhay must be tensed cause of something else that's why scolded him like that.
Varun understood andsmiled.
After having breakfast Tara was about to get up from the table, when Varun spoke up.
Varun-: chashmish, I heard that u are leaving today.
Tara-: (surprised) yea, I am going back home but who told u that di?
Varun-: (embarrassed) No, no not bhabhi, (stammering) I saw ur suitcases their (pointing towards the stairs).
Tara-: oh, yea I am going back today, I am leaving now only.
Varun-: but u can stay here for few more days, I mean (stammering) u know bhabhi needs someone to take care of her and and…
Tara-: (smiling) why are u stammering like a mad person, god jiju is back now to take care of di and I need to go back home too I can't stay here forever, normally u keep saying always why I come here daily? Mom dad has thrown me out of the house etc, what happened now?
Piya who was silent till now and was enjoying their cute convo forgetting all her worries for few minutes decided to step in now.
Piya-: stop u two, Varun, Tara is right she needs to go back, though I will miss my star
but still she is right here and Varun why are u worried for god sake u both study in.same college u can meet her there too.
Varun-: (embarrassed) bhabhi who said I want to meet her or I will miss her I was thinking about u just nothing else, ok I will drop her to Dobriyal mansion.
Piya smiled understanding the new budding love between her brother-in-law and sister and nodded, Tara too agreed and after sharing a sisterly hug, Varun and Tara left for Dobriyal Mansion,leaving behind a smiling Piya, currently who was happy seeing this two love birds but somewhere deep inside her heart she was still worried for Abhay, craving for him, feeling an unknown fear, she just silently wished that everything turns back to normal soon unknown to the fact that their changed life can never be normal again!!!!

For part b scroll down
Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part B
(written by mohit-dewaani aka Roshni)




Piya felt lonely as she was alone in house and always she was lost in thoughts tat why was abhay suddenly behaving soo weird , has she done any mistake or is he also upset thinking about loosing there child , she was very confused and thought to make abhay's mood better . She thought making food for him although she didn't knew how to make , she took out a recipe book and got started . With lots of effort and hardwork of whole day finally piya made a salad , tacos , hot & sour soup and chocolate mint pastries , this all was abhay's favourite . She waited for him to come eagerly she heard voice of car arriving , she was became excited and went out to see abhay but to her disappointment it was Varun .

Varun : hey bhabhi ! Why u home today ? U didn't go to office ?
Piya : no Varun , actually didn't felt like going today .
Varun : oh ,btw sumthing is smelling freaking good ( he rushed in the kitchen )
Piya ( in a royal voice ) : I myself made food today
Varun : seriously bhabhi , u and cooking and ahh tacos ,pastries , salad and soups . Is today's sumthing special huh ?
Piya : obviously Varun after so am days we three having dinner , sooo thought menu should be special na . Btw how was yourday ?

Just then a car arrived and this time it was abhay . He entered the house with a simple blank expression as if everything in life has finished up for him . Piya was a little worried and upset seeing this , he didn't even once looked at her . She went to abhay with a smile and hugged him .

Piya : abhay go get fresh fast , I hav made food today tat to your favourite and ha don't worry it isn't burnt like before sooo u don't need to suffer from my experiment ( she giggled a bit )

Abhay ( removing piya's hands from his neck ) : no thank u ,I had my dinner in office only .
Piya ( highly dispointed ) : ummm... Uhhh it ok abhay hav the desert then
Abhay : naa not feeling like eating anything
Saying tat he was about to move but Varun who was extremely shocked seeing abhay .

Varun : bhai how can u say tat , atleast sit with us for dinner , bhabhi made lots of efforts just to make u happy and you are going just like tat , sit not fair bhai
Abhay ( raising his voice ) : well I am tired Varun as I have Many works In a day , unlike you who sit around joking with anyone , I hav many responsibilities of office , yours and even piya , soo I hope this little and good for nothing brain of yours has understood tat wat I mean . ( in a low yet audible voice ) such a useless family hav I got !
Saying that abhay without even Turning once left from there & went to his bedroom . Varun was highly hurt by his brothers words while tears rolled down piya's cheeks . She couldn't believe this is her abhay , the abhay who even I his worst mood never talked liked tat . she looked at the food on table and more tears made there way out of her eyes . Whie Varun wanted to stop his bhabhi from crying anyhow cause he knew how much she suffered while abhay wasn't there . He went towards the dinner table and ate one bite of taco .
Varun ( with fake yet huge smile ) : amazing bhabhi ! Hav never ate such a delicious tacos . Wah bhabhi wah ! Even mom didn't made such a delicious food . I love it .
Piya still with tears : stop it Varun !
Varun : no really bhabhi , it's amazing . Come on na let us eat , dekhna bhai will come here in midnight and eat this for sure . He just in very bad mood today , tats why he is behaving in such a way don't worry bhabhi , he will be normal in morning and dekhna

Before he could complete piya left from there sobbing and Varun was standing there helplessly , he felt sooo defeated , neither he could make abhay back to normal nor he could stop his bhabhi from crying , he soo needed his Tara right now . He didn't knew where to go . On the other hand abhay who was listening to all , was totally heart broken . He felt like killing himself for being soo rude . For the first time piya made for him with soo much efforts he didn't even once looked at it ,he remembered how earlier piya along with him would learn cooking though at end she burn it up all and today she with lots efforts she made food for him and he behaved rudely with her , he felt horrible and he even shouted at his brother for absolutely no reason , but it's for there good only . Piya was sitting in the terrace , crying continuously not because abhay behaved so rudely but because piya knew abhay wasn't alright , she knew abhay from top to bottom , she knew he was in problem and he wasn't sharing it with her . He was suffering it all alone and piya wanted to share his sorrow . He wondered wat would be soo big thing tat he was behaving such a way . She missed her old abhay . She got up and went towards the room where she found abhay sleeping peacefully . She went there and rubbed his hair and whispered " I love you" . Saying tat she went to her place to sleep thinking they are so close still why's the difference arising between them .


It was around 8 when piya woke up but to her surprise abhay had already left . Her shattered into million pieces seeing the huge change in behaviour of abhay . A tear escaped her eyes . Soon the day came to an end. It was a dark night and clock stroked 10 ' o clock
. Well Varun wasn't home yet , must be with his friends thought piya . She was Sitting in garden looking at the stars which earlier was always accompanied by abhay .although abhay Was sitting beside piya , she almost felt he wasnt there .i abhay was sitting with a laptop and he was involved in his laptop tat he didn't even once looked at piya . Actually abhay was sitting there waiting for Varun . He would be relief if Varun arrived home safely and so just to keep a check on he was sitting outside . Piya finally got up from there and moved towards the house the her bracelet fall down she was looking for it here and there . Abhay noticed this but again got involved in his work . Just the a huge car arrived .no it wasn't Varuns car it was some one else . And soon a man came out of it wearing black shirt and jeans . He was pretty handsome . Abhay was hell shocked seeing him . With anger and despair he exclaimed ' vikram !'While piya was confused seeing him .

Piya : ummm hello ! Aap kaun ?
Vikram : well u don't know me but I know you ,you must me piya , abhay's wife right ?
Piya : yes ofcourse
Vikram : ahhh bhabhi ji ! Glad meet you . ( he bend down and picked up something ) waise bhabhiji , you were looking for this .
Piya smiled : yes , thank you .waise aapne bataya nahi aap kaun.
Vikram: well main , I m the cousin of your husband .
Piya : cousin ? Abhay never told me about you .
Vikram : actually woh ...
Before he could complete abhay came between .
Abhay : piya go inside at once .
Piya : kyu abhay ?
Abhay : dont argue , just go .
Piya : that's rude abhay
Abhay shouting : piya Andar jao .
Piya went inside angrily while vikram just gave those childish smiles .
Abhay : why the hell are you are ?





Ps-: Ok so here is the next part, we tried our best to do well but don't know how it turned out as u all know we are updating after so long, so was hard to link up with previous updates then writing after 1 and a half month as we forgot how to write updates only lol. So pardon us if it's not upto the mark. Hope u all like it, do read and plz comment as it encourages us a lot!!! Thanks for all ur previous support and comments and patience.
Love u all
from Rosh and Romi😃
Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
jUST AMZING UP DATE DEAR ,nice cs and nice story too
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW IT WAS AN AWSOME UPDATE WRITTEN BY BOTH OF U!⭐️ JUST AMAIZING.👏.👏.👏WHAT HAPPEN TO ABHAY? 😲WHY HE IS ACTING SO WIERD? 😕PLS REVEAL THE MYSTRY NA.😆..😉UFF FELT BAD FR PIA! ITNA SARA KHANA BANAYA AUR ABHAY NE KUCH BI NAHI KHAYA!😭 😡😆ONE THING I AM SURE ABHAY IS NOT VAMPIRE.😉..I CAN BE WRONG TOO! 😛AB YE NAYA ADMI KAUN HE?😆 ANYWAYS UPDATE SOON.😃
Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update girls👏 Abhay is being so rude to them...😭plz yar jaldi reason btao...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm update.Poor pia...Abhay is hurting her badly with his rude behaviour.Plz jaldi se mystery ka khulasa karo...what happened with Abhay
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome nd fabulous update.thanx for giving such a long update.but abhay rude behaviour shws dat he oh i should nt mention my thought here coz i think dats da big twist.plz add me to ur pm list nd do pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story pl\z update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. But Abhay is very rude here. Why Abhay behaving like this?

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