New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: DashingCuteJazz
just amazing up date dear ,please abhay not this time leave piya ,thanks for pm

Thanku soo much dear 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Saayaniz
Wao ! Awesome update Romi & Rosh 👏 . Sorry for commenting late , actually I read it just now . So Abhay has changed & he can't be the old Abhay again 😕 did he turn into a vampire 😲 !!! OMG !!! What will happen to Piya now 😭 ??? Continue when u 2 get time dear , will be waiting for next chap 😊

Thanku soo much dear 😃 no probs yaar , well lets wat has happened to abhay 😊 Don't worry of piya , she is a strong girl . We will conti soon 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: koli97
wahooo romi u make me cry😭...wahooo sooo lovely Abhiya feelings.love the way tara-varun feeling😊wait 4 wht happen Abhay on tht day😊Abhay pain also make me😭

Afterall my romi is a meethi churi 😆 thanku soo much . Well you will see more of there bonding soon 😊 you will know tat soon dear 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sofia2
great update guys. pls con soon. i think abhay has turned into a vampire. romi for network i cant open facebook. but i tthinj hg can now.

Thanku soo much 😃 Weill con soon, well lets see wat happened 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
sorry dear but my like button not working😳
will like it later😳
it was a fab update👏
i wonder wat has happened to abhay😕
but it must be really big issue dat he thought to leave pia
hope he dosnt leave her😳
continue soon😊

No probs 😃

Thanku soo much yaar 😊

We you will know soon . Yeah it is indeed a big issue 😃

Lets see

We will conti soon 😊

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: meerubzara
awosome update finally abhay is back but why he will leave his family? did abhay become vampire? continu soon

Thank you soo much 😃

Well you will know all the things soon ..

We will conti soon 😳

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: bellaaa
wow romi and rosh well done guys
superb update
well narrated yar
but the main twist yar what happened to abhay
why he behaving that piya and he not meant each other
abhay make him rude to that hate for piya
love the scene of varun and tara so sweet
and the way piya cried and hugged abhay great scene
but yar piya become again heart broken if abhay leave her
i understand take your time guys for update

Thanku soo much wifey 😃

Thanks again 😆 you will know it soon re ,just wait and watch oops I mean read 😆

I know I too loved , I read it thrice 😆

Thanks again , well lets Kya hota hai piya ka ..

Okay 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
awesome updt..poor Pia..Tara & Varun

Thanks sooo much pri 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHARACTER SKETCH 2

Abhay raichand

Piya raichand

Varun raichand

Tara dobriyal

Chand and haseena oberoi

Siddharth oberoi

Vikram mallik

Kabir rathod .

They are few more character left which will be posted as story moves forward 😳

Edited by Mohit-deewani - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 6
Part A
(written by Rmuk aka me)
Raichand mansion
The sky which was cloudy and hazy till now became more darker now and small droplets of rainwater began to fall on the person who was standing near the fountain in the garden, the perfect features of his face which were tensed, troubled clearly showing how much angry, annoyed and frustrated and angry he was, were a bit relaxed now which showed that the cool and calm breeze blowing and the cool rainwater falling over him were giving him a cool sensation thus making him a bit calm and relaxed now.
Abhay Raichand who was hell frustrated till now cause of the last phone call became a bit calm now and kept his blackberry in his coat pocket and tried to smile a little. He decided to now go inside knowing very well that Piya must be waiting for him to come, he took a long breathe and went inside the mansion.
Piya's room
As soon as Abhay stepped in the room he saw Piya sitting in the bed and staring outside, looking at the pitch dark sky outside unknown to the fact that the same darkness which she was staring at with pleasure has.already entered in her life.
Abhay sighed a bit and as if sensing his arrival Piya looked towards Abhay and gestured him to come and sit beside her. Abhay smiled a bit and did as Piya told him to.
Piya-: Abhay, look the sky outside is so dark na but the climate is so calm, everything.is so beautiful though it's dark.
Abhay-: (surprised) Piya, u are finding this darkness beautiful? Strange, I thought u don't like darkness.
Piya-: (smiling) yes, I don't like darkness but u know darkness only tells us that how much daylight is necessary for us, and see the cool breeze blowing, then the rain all this are a part of nature and u know Abhay I love rains so, for that I am ready to accept this darkness, nature is beautiful Abhay and so are it's creations, day or night both are a part of nature and if u love something whole[ heartedly u should learn to
accept both sides of it's right?
Abhay became silent for few minutes.
Abhay-: (without paying attention) really Piya? Is it so easy to accept darkness in.one's life?
Piya-: yes Abhay it is, if we.keep in mind that after every dark hour of night comes a.beautiful morning, we just need to wait for it.
Abhay-: and what if the morning never comes only? What if only Darkness remains? Then what should we do?
Piya-: (a bit surprised) It never can abhay and if it happens then we should learn to live engulfing that darkness and one day or the other we will win from every kind of hurdles, darkness that are surrounding us.
Abhay-: it's not that easy Piya it's not.
Piya-: it is Abhay because u know love can make u do anything, leave this and tell me what happened to u? Why are u asking all this kind of questions? U are alright na?
Abhay came back to his senses now.
Abhay-: (quickly) nothing, nothing Piyu, I was just thinking something else, I am perfectly fine, u need to sleep now, u have started talking big big now like a matured women, give ur small brain a bit rest (teasing), Sleep properly now.
Piya-: (laughing) oh really and who was talking like some ages old oldies few minutes ago, I thought some philosopher ghost have possessed u (teasing).
Abhay-: (fake shocked) what a philosopher ghost in me? O.god poor soul will get afraid of Abhay Raichand's soul and about ages old oldies, do I need to prove how young I am? (Winked while teasing)
Piya-: (smiled a bit shyly) Abhay u are too much.
Abhay-: I know but if u don't sleep now I will really become too much now, come on u need rest, sleep now.
Piya-: I will sleep but on one condition.
Abhay-: condition? What condition?
Piya-: I won't sleep on pillow I want my husbands cozy arms to sleep on, u know I missed sleeping on those arms a lot (a bit sadly).
Abhay-: (sensing her sadness)these arms missed miss sleepy head too.
Both continued laughing while teasing each other more and more.
After about fifteen minutes Abhay finally made Piya lie.down on the bed and he himself led down too, Piya kept her head on Abhay's.right arm and both slept peacefully embracing each other tightly, finding solace in each other arms, as if living their perfect world of dreams for the last time, unknown to what tomorrow holds for them, to the fact that their perfect life will take a new turn from tomorrow itself!!!!!
Next Morning
The sun has arisen early in the morning, but still compared to other sunny morning today's one was a bit clumsy. The rain have stopped before dawn only.
Today's climate was though cool and calm but due to.yesterday's heavy rain the feeling of freshness was.lacking, the sky was still not fully clear, a mild cold wind was blowing outside, altogether giving a total.different kind of feeling.
Piya got up from her long peaceful sleep with the.striking sound of the clock showing 9 am now, Piya was expecting Abhay to be still sleeping waiting for her to wake him up but her face fell as she saw that the bed was empty, that means Abhayhave got up early, but why.didn't he wake her up?
Piya left all her crazy thought behind and hurriedly got up sensing that she was late today, she made her way to the bathroom but heard sound of shower that means Abhay must be taking bath, she smiled a bit and took her's and Abhay's clothes from wardrobe and kept Abhay's one on the bed and took her's one with her and.made her way to the guestroom to get freshen up.
Guest room
As soon as Piya stepped in the guest room she saw Tara packing her suitcase and getting ready. Tara looked.towards piya and gave a warm smile and hugged her excitedly.
Tara-: Good morning di. How are u feeling now?
Piya-: good morning star, I am feeling much better now, but (looking at the suitcase) what happened? Where are u going star?
Tara-: Di, I am going back home.
Piya-: (worriedly) Home, but why? Everything is fine na?.Did mom say anything? I mean should I come with u too?
Tara-: ufff di really u are a question bank, stop getting hyper, chill, nothing happened and everything is fine.
Piya-: then why are u going[.back star? (Sadly)
Tara-: (smiling) di I can't stay.here forever na, now jiju is back too and u know na mom is alone at home dad has gone for business tour, here jiju and Varun will be with u but at home mom needs someone na and I promise I will come to meet u ok, now stop getting sad and get fresh, we will have breakfast together then I will leave.
Piya nodded and smiled and was about to go when Tara stopped her in mid way.
Piya-: what happened star?
Tara-: how was yesterday night, u and jiju after so long, together, slept properly na(winked) Piya gave a fake angry stare and gave an unbelievable look and went straight away and Tara kept laughing unknown to that someone was watching her silently and that someone was none other than Varun Raichand.
Yes, Varun heard everythingband strangely he feeling was.sad to know that Tara would be leaving today. He sighed and decided to speak to her on the breakfast table itself.
Abhiya's room
After taking bath Abhay came out of the bathroom and saw that a mauve coloured shirt along with grey pant, golden tie and grey coat was kept on the bed. He knew very well that it must be Piya who would have done all this, he smiled and was about to pick up the.shirt when suddenly he remembered that from today he needs to change, he needs to show that he is no more the old Abhay Raichand!!!
Guest room
Piya got freshen up and wore a light pink coloured skirt along with a white top, she remembered abhay gifted her this one during their college fest. She applied some lip-gloss and kajal and while drying her hair she left for her own room.
plz chk pg 68 for next parts.

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago

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