New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Nice update guys 👏 Hope ur exams went well n welcome back 🤗 Coming to the update, I have many questions but I shall wait for the upcoming updates to know the answer 😉 I felt bad for Pia n Varun 😭 It was heartbreaking to see Abhiya share their last moment before the gloom took over their blissful paradise 😭 Abhay was avoiding Pia n this has something to do with the new characters right? The updated CS was interesting n I am waiting to see how they will fit into this story. I am waiting to see Varun confess his feelings to Tara 😳 Its way too obvious for anyone to see through it 😆 Poor Varun I felt bad when Abhay blasted him for no fault of his I hope Pia is able to find out y Abhay is behaving like this soon n I am sure however painful n horrifying it is she will accept Abhay no matter what Good one gals 👏 n update soon 😛 I know u gals have holidays 😉

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

wahooo Romi dearr lovely👏Really sad for Pia & Varun😔why Abhay behave like tht?Who is Vikram & wht relation Abhay?Wht happen Abhay?Uff Soo many question dearr...Is Abhay become a vampire?Plzz dearr continue asap😊I'm really love ur this ff soo much dearr🤗

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

nice update/...

i think i miss smthing...ye sadu abhay agan sadu ho gya/...hume ye sab seril main kyon nhi mila dekhne ko..abhiya after marrige..tsk.
last scene is same as sid pia ko hstl chodne aaya n abhay ordering pia to go inside...it is fun vikrm i.e KWB i.e viraj dobriyal..nw its intrsting to read nxt evil vikrm abhiya...nxt updte soon..chshmish n vrun.mjht..

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

awesome update..
poor piya..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

wonderful update

hope pia is able to figure out the reason for abhays rude behaviour

thanks for pm

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fabliha

@fabliha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

wow!!! lovely update,romi...😉

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fabliha

@fabliha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

wow!!! owesome & interesting update...👏yea vikram ek vampire hai na???really felling sad for abhay...😭

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

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awesuum update girls!!! 👏 enjoyed reading it. 😊 hm..so abhay is acting weirdly all of a sudden! bt i'm sure there is sum big reason for abhay's strange behavior. bt I wonder wat! 🤔 oh..felt bad for poor pia and varun! these two r suffering becoz of dis! whatevr the reasn is I hope that gets solvd and abhay comes back to normal again! 😊 hm..i feel this new guy is grey in charactr. its quite clear tht abhay dislikes him! now am waiting to see wats d reasn n y has ths guy arrivd!

and ya I so loved the little thngs of nature. it was describd so nycly! specially I loved the way u used the night ,darkness as symbol n ur way of xplaining was marvellous too!! ⭐️ great job Romi! 👍🏼 keep it up! N ya I likd tara. She is sweet. Varun too is nyc. [$]
plz carry soon. waiting for the next. 😊
and ya thanks for the pm and superb job roshni n romi. 👏 p.s. Xtrmly sorry for unresing so late. Bt am damn busy these days. So PLz dnt mind.

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Oh that was all sad sad update...wt exactly has happened that abhay had to mask this devil ka roop?? I hope in all this piya doesn't break totally coz broken hearts can never be mended...

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Amazing update! WELCOME BACK GUYS!! Lovely CS n Pics too.
Arey yaar ye Abhay ko ho kya gaya hai? What has happened dat things cant be like as they were earlier? At least he behaved good with Piya 4 sometime bt again returned 2 his sadu mode.
So varun is developing some feelings 4 Tara!
Who d hell is this new trouble? Reveal d mysteries soon.
Continue asap.

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