New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Ayesha

@Yum_SR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

But tum ppl toh aisay roa rahay ho jaisay abhiya milnay lagah hai..
Waisay in dono nay suspense bohat chora tha😆
Waisay guys un kay thread pay chatting mat karo vo bura maan jaye gii

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: ilove99
tujhe beech mein bolna jaruri hai?😆

Forum ka first page dekh!!😉

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Guys plz wait rosh haven't come online till now, only when she comes I can post updt as I am waiting for her part, plz have patience

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: ilove99
yup i m vampire😈so better u update tonite or tomorrow...😎

Abhay ki fan ho and itna nahi janit tat vampy don't eat people , they drink bloood 😆

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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man!! u guys made me cry...
poor pia😭she had miscarrage😭
nd wat happend to abhay???😲

Awww sorry to make u cry , yeah poor her but don't worry now abhay will be there

Andes happend to abhay is the mystery , u would know tat after sumtime😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: Aish-Naksh
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Sad update but nice..in one update so much things had happened abhay missing,piya accident,piya MC,now so much leap,n then abhay enter n vo gussay mai upar chalay gaya n plzz releive sooon...now abhay why act like this so suspence...like arnav in ipkknd..arnav said the same line to his family kay i m fine n etc etc..
Update soon

Thanku soo much fati 😃 I know kuch sada hi hogaya ek upd mein , and ummm suspense pura reveal Karne main will take time , ummm never watch much ipkknd so don't know arnav when did this but definately the suspense isn't related to arnav 😆

We will conti soon 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
@rosh-emos pe click karo pata chal jayega...😆
but...haw...bechaare abhiya...😭😆
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me 2nd...😭😭
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it was such a sad update...

seeing pia in such a state was painful...

first she lost abhay (not exactly) n den dere baby for whom she was still living...

but what's up wid abhay...?? y did he not even look at her...

is he in some kind of trouble...??

i wonder how dey wil tell ol dis to abhay n how will he react...

romance is not so important...first get dem together atleast... tabhi to romance hoga...

the updates were very well written...

have many questions in my mind...so continue soon...

will be waiting...

love u guys...😆

I know it was chits , yeah it was but after some upds u would know abhay's side , even tat wil be painful , I know her last hope was also taken away about dunno worry , abhay is back na and abhay will be broken completely , glad u liked it , u hav many question in mind ,are u pia ?😆

Love u too Chits and as usual emos are sooo cute 😆

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: mandy1024
That was such a heartbreaking 🥺 and painful udpate 😭 Pia missing Abhay was so sad. But still she made an effort to go on with life as she had her child to live for 😭 But then a mishap happened n she ended up losing her last ray of hope. I once had a friend who lost her first baby n I know how painful it was for her to recover from it. The part where Pia feels her empty stomach n broke down was so so emotional 😭 Then Pia being statue like was obvious as nobody can recover from such a big shock I am glad that Pia had Varun n Tara to overcome her grief. But the big question is where was Abhay all this while? Also is this the same part u guys wrote in prologue? Kudos for the gr8 update girls 👏 It was painful but well written ⭐️ Dont worry abt romance. Story is more imp. Well Pia has just now lost her baby n I suppose Abhay was unaware of it as well. They both need time to get over it. They obviously cant get all romantic when they have suffered such a huge loss.

First of all thanku soo much Manu for the lovely comment , me and Romi always love it 😃 Oh yeah it was indeed , she has to move on she can't sit all day crying for abhay although she was completely broken from inside , tat was most painful part indeed , she lost there first symbol of love , well such mishaps are horrible nightmare person , hope your friend is alright and oh yeah Romi described tat brilliantly , u will know where abhay after few upd and yep ,tats part we wrote on prolougue and from here the main story starts , thanks soo much Manu 😃 And thanks for understanding 😳

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Wow amazing update
Why did abhay tell piya not to look for him ?
Poor piya was in so much pain then she lost the baby😭
I wondering how will abhay react tp piya's pregnancy n miscarriage
I am glad Varun n tara were their for piya
Why did abhay ignore piya and walked to his room n closed it
Poor abhiya 😭
Thanks for the pm

Thanku soo much dear , well actually he didn't wanted piya to complaint a file in police station and he wouldn't Come to her tat time so he told her soo , yeah she lost her Abby too her only hope , abhay will be broken for sure , yeah they were piya's only support , well that's the suspense

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