New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

superb but painful update

pia pain is very beautifuly describe

poor pia she lost her baby..

afterall what happened to abhay?why he is behaving like this?

continu soon can't w8 for next part

thanks for pm

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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

nce update poor pia ... she lost her baby ...

bt what happend 2 abhay ...

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

sad ishtory😭but tum bandaron ne mujhe kabhi pm kyun nai kia!!!!

i thout after reading the prologue it was tara crying n varun coz u wrote a girl of 21-22 there n tara is 22 n pia 24.And ye abhay ko kya hua...

plz plz plz jaldi updt kar😛

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

its sooo sad... she lost her bby...

whr ws he in all dese days? & y he ws playing hide & seek wid his own wife...

at d end...is he abhay?

confusion ...confusion... confusion...

Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Hey I love ur ff...hut y didn't u pm me...plz do it for next update

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piggi_Babes

@piggi_Babes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

GOOD JOB DEAR... supb work... njoyd😃👏

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653787

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Awesome update 👏 It was very painful. I felt really bad for Piya and she lost her baby 😔 What is wrong with Abhay? Where was he? And I think it's him at the end but why is he behaving like that? Update soon 😊

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Annie

@annie.doll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

oh woww..!! awesome update ...loved it...poor piya..felt bad 4 her n where was abhay all the time...?? wht happened to him..?? waiting 4 next update n plz pm me when u update...