New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
Fabulous bt sad update!
Feeling so so bad 4 Piya 😭
u described her longing n wait 4 Abhay perfectly,she lost her baby n is broken mentally n emotionally 😭 only abhay cud pacify her bt wat's wid abhay now?
Has he lost his memory or what?
Such an attitude frm abhay broke Piya completely! If i m nt wrong then this was d scene in d prologue right?
Cntinue soon!

Awww thanku soo much .

Yeah piya have suffered much and glad u liked it . Oh yeah piya is completely broken abhay wouldn't leave like this , he will make her alright . Na na nothing like loosing memory 😆 Well abhay's attitude has a reason and yeah this is the scene of prolougue 😃

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: sofia2
i felt really sorry for pia she had a miscarriage. wth is happened to abhay. why he behave all odd? pls reveal soon.

Thanks for commenting dear, yea we know piya suffered a lot, aby abhay u will know soon.

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: shria
such an emotionall chapter😭😭 piya had a miscarage what happened to abhay? continu soon😊

thanks for commenting dear awww don't cry dear, yea yaar piys had a miscarriage, abt abhay u will know soon, will update tonight.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
Gr8 update..
poor piya..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..

Thanks dear, yea piya really suffered a lot
we will try to update tonight
u are always welcome

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: meerubzara
superb but painful update
pia pain is very beautifuly describe
poor pia she lost her baby..
afterall what happened to abhay?why he is behaving like this?
continu soon can't w8 for next part
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear.
awww, glad u liked our descriptions
abt abhay u will know soon. We will try to update by tonight
u are always welcome

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
nce update
</div> poor pia ... she lost her baby ...<div>bt what happend 2 abhay ...

Thanks dear.
awww, yea she suffered a lot yaar, abt abhay u have to wait a bit dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: ilove99
sad ishtory😭but tum bandaron ne mujhe kabhi pm kyun nai kia!!!!
i thout after reading the prologue it was tara crying n varun coz u wrote a girl of 21-22 there n tara is 22 n pia 24.And ye abhay ko kya hua...
plz plz plz jaldi updt kar😛

Thanks dear for reading, awww don't cry yaar. Oh I think I skipped ur name as mostly I send pm's sorry will do frm next time
lol prologue assumption pe likha tha na isiliye, we will try to update tonite

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: luckdiya
its sooo sad... she lost her bby...
whr ws he in all dese days? & y he ws playing hide & seek wid his own wife...
at d end...is he abhay?
confusion ...confusion... confusion...

Thanks dear for reading and coomenting.
yea piya suffered and gone through hell and abt abhay u will know soon.
Yea he.is abhay only, confusion will bw cleared soon lol.