New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update.pia is in so much pain...feel bad 4 her.what has happened to abhay?why is he behaving lyk dis? Thanx 4 pm

Thanku soo much megha 😃 Well happend to abhay , u will know after few upds

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
omg pia's condition is so vulnerable and what happen to abhay usne ane m 3 mnths kase laga diye and nw he become sadu... plz plz update soon

Yeah I know piya is broken right now , well that's right ,u will soon see a sadu abhay but why that's the suspense , will upd soon😊

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update
pia's pain was portrayed nicely...poor pia..lost her child n abhay is not with her
btw the person who entered was abhay na...why he behaved that way n where was he all these days?

Thanks a lot anji , glad u liked it , Ryan it was really tuff for piya

Yep tat was abhay , u will know the answers in few more upds 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: fabliha
really,shocking update,😲 but loved the way of describing pia's pain😭😲don't know what to say...😕.😲plz,update the next part so on😭

Glad I loved it 😃 And it was shocking upd but in further upds there is gonna mor being shocked so get ready for tat

We will upd soon 😊

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: smdosi
Omg..!!!! U made me cry romi...it was so so so painful...what had piya done to suffer so much pain..? And why is abhay being a jerk..? Wt ws gotten into him..? Is he mad or sumthin..? Stupid idiot jerk moron etc etc etc...newaz d update ws heart wrenching n written beautifully...loved it...update soon..

Romi ne Tujhe rule diya 😆 Well piya done nothing , tat was written in her fate and dont say abhay a jerk , there is his side story still left na which is equally painful ,and na he isn't mad or Sumthing 😆 Thanku sooo much ,

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: Saayaniz
Oh Goddd !!! what u both have done ???? first Abhay missing...then misscarriage !! poor Piya...she had to suffer so much 😭 u 2 made me cry for her !! & the man entered at last...it was Abhay na ??? then why did he behave like that ??? now what happened to him yaar !!! gr8 job ! nxt part update soon 😊
don worry...we will wait...I understand...even in my ff I faced the demand of Abhiya scenes , Abhiya proper meeting etc...while I plotted the storyline different . don worry it was an amazing update ! loved it to the core

Nothin sayu just updated the ff😆 Yeah she has suffered so much and even abhay hav suffered much , you will come to know his story too in few more upds, aww don't cry ,yep he was abhay 😃 Umm nothin much what happend him u will know soon. We will upd soon. Thanku soo much for understandeing , glad u liked it soo much 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
hey angel very emotinal update!!! 😭 thax fr pm!!! next 1 update soon!!

Thanks a lot dear , and welcome . We will upd soon😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Poor pia...she had a miscarraige.But what is gng on with Abhay?

I know piya suffered much , and u will know wat sup with abhay in few upds 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update dear.I lke it.It was sad part.Where Abhay went?Oh I felt bad 4 Pia she lost her baby.I m damm sure tht Man was Abhay but y he is rude wid Pia?Why he instead of hugging her went 2 his bed room?Plz cont

By the way I changed my name frm Cuteshrishti 2 SheDevil

Thanku soo much shrishti btw nice username 😃 Yeah piya suffered much , and yep abhay is the man who came , ummm abhi keh liye toh he is less rude after 1 more upd , u will see the actual sadu abhay . We will conti soon 😊