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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

superb update
finally abhiya came face to face
Is Pia related to metz?


Thank you. Wait and see 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

i just completed reading ful chapter...sorry for late coment😳
superb chapter👏
so now pia n maithili are look alike...ok..i dont have any problem with that😆
abhiya meeting was nice...he felt all the emotions of love, shock n anger together by seeing her
alina is evil...what is she really planning???😕

just read ur note...plz dont discontinue it.
i can understand...you feel bad when u send pm n people dont hit like button or give coments...i also send pm to many people n only half of them coment but plz dont be sad...continue it for sake of those who really like it.
i have already said sorry for late comment😳...i m very busy these days n hardly get any time for coming on IF n pkyek forum...so some times i only hit like button n dont comment on FFs...n sometimes that like button also dont work so i just read the update...but that dosent mean that i dont like reading FFs here...so plz dont do this n continue this ff.


Thank you 😊 Abhay did feel lots of human emotions and that is something he hates. Alina's plans will be revealed slowly.
I'm not discontinuing it. You don't have to be sorry dear and you're not one of the readers I'm disappointed with 😆 I understand people are busy at times and they cannot comment 😊 it's just that I got very less comments compared to my ss and others in forum so I felt the story is not interesting 😳 but after my note I have got more comments 😆
Edited by .tanu. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Tanu..Ok...Let me introduce u ...Im Vidya...u can call me Vidu...Im an old member of the forum...I do read all ff's...bt dn comment...like button press karke bhaag jaati hu...😆...Includes urs also...Thts doesnt mean u r a bad writer...or the story is nt gud...Its becoz people r lazy n nalayak ...jst like me...😆...Pls continue this ff...becoz I really lob the Story...Nw cmg 2 udate...I loved the reaction of Abhay...Poor Piya... v r gng 2 get more of Sadku Raichand..😆..n confused Piya...😆...The dailogue which Abhay gave 2 Piya whn she was upstairs was rocking...Im luking 4wrd 2 the story...😛...



Pm me whn u update the story...n jaldi se update karo...😛


Ok Vidu, then how come these lazy people comment regularly in other ffs 😆 They send me buddy requests, ask for pms but don't comment 😳 That makes me think they don't like it anymore and don't read it 😳 Compared to other ffs, I got lowest comments, isn't that enough to show I'm not a good writer 😳 Anyway, I have decided not to worry about comments and write for those who want to read 😊
Thanks for your comment 😊 Yes you will get that kind of Abhay in this ff 😆 Glad you're looking forward. I'll surely pm you and try to update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

When will u update next yaar...and it would be easy if u mention the page no of update also...I am archhana can call me Anna...I read all the FFs but don't comment...just hit like...so does that mean u a bad writer...nah...


I will update soon, Anna. OK I'll mention it but you can easily get to each update from the first page. I have already explained my pov countless times 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Superb update tanu 👏


Thanks dear:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

Superb story!
Finally Abhiya met.
Is piya anyhow related 2 maithili?
Ruhi is just like in d serial.
What s alina planning?
Plss continue soon.


Thank you. If any relation exists between Piya and Metz it will be revealed later. Alina's plans will also come out slowly. I will try to:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

I'll surely pm you:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_mahar

awesome update tanu 😳
Interesting loved it😳


Thanks Maria... glad you loved it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5

Dobriyal House

It was midnight and Piya could not get to sleep. She kept thinking about Abhay and his rude behaviour. She got up and opened her window. A cold breeze touched her skin and she closed her eyes. When she opened them and looked out she saw a group of hooded people stood outside her house in the dark. Shocked and fearful, she blinked and they disappeared. Piya thought it was her imagination and shut the window but she felt quite uncomfortable. She went out in the quiet and dimly lit hallway and headed towards Misha's room. She entered the dark room and instantly gasped in shock when she saw a face with fangs covered in blood, a vampire. Misha quickly got up and switched the lights on. It was then that Piya realised it was the picture of a vampire on Misha's laptop.

"Piya are you OK?" Misha asked her whilst handing her a glass of water.

Piya drank the water and asked annoyed, "Misha, why are you looking at these pictures at night?"

"I was just doing some research," Misha replied slowly.

Piya sat down, "At this time?"

"I couldn't get to sleep and remembered my discussion with Kabir from the party on ancient creatures."

"Is that what you and Kabir talk about when you're together?" Piya asked in disbelief. "And what did Kabir tell you?"

"He didn't tell me anything directly but I could tell he believes in the supernatural. I think he has witnessed something sinister," Misha said seriously.

"Misha, you're thinking too much," Piya said and laughed.

Misha laughed a little and decided to change the topic, "Did you meet Abhay Raichand?"

Piya crumpled her face in disgust, "Don't say his name in front of me."

"What has he done to you?" Misha asked in surprise.

"He has not done anything to me," Piya said sternly indicating to end the discussion on Abhay.

But Misha did not understand and asked her amused, "Is that why you're upset that he didn't do anything to you?"

"I didn't mean that!" Piya said loudly. "He's such a rude and arrogant person and he was giving me angry looks in the party for no reason. He spoiled my mood, I just hate him."

"He is quite strange, I saw him standing alone in a corner all of the time like a stone."

"Let's talk about something else."

After chatting for hours, both sisters fell asleep.

The Jungle

Abhay was running fast through the trees with his vampire speed. He stopped abruptly at a point and knelt down. Being a vampire, he was supposed to hold no emotions but still the human part of him which he refused to accept was full of pain and anger. He had spent a few moments with Piya and since then she had occupied his thoughts. He feared to get trapped by that beautiful face again. She had awaken all these humanly emotions inside him, which he hated because he was not human. He was a vampire and he wanted to be one in true sense. He thought he had become a stone but she was proving him wrong. He hated weaknesses and now he could see some in himself just because of her. He wanted to punish her for doing this to him. He knew she was at no fault but her being Maithali's lookalike was a big crime in itself. He suffered because of Maithali and ended up with this dark life. Now what was Piyali going to do to him?

"I hate you Piyali!" Abhay shouted. "I will destroy you before you destroy me."

Dobriyal House

The following day, Madhu and Arnab were busy discussing the arrangements for Misha's engagement in the hall. Madhu was enthusiastically talking about everything whilst Arnab watched her smiling.

"I want everything best for Misha," Madhu said happily.

"Misha and Piya are so lucky to have a mother like you," Arnab told her.

"No Arnab, I am lucky to have such lovely daughters. I want to do everything for them just like Sugandh would have done if she was alive. I just hope I am able to."

"Madhu you have done a lot for them. You brought them up like their own mother."

Misha and Piya who had been listening silently came and sat with Madhu.

"Mom, I know if Sugandh mom was here even she wouldn't do all this for us," Misha assured her.

"We love you mom," Piya said and she and Misha hugged her.

After a while, Madhu spoke up, "Oh I forgot to tell you all something. My friend's son has come from abroad after years and he's in Delhi right now. He's coming to Dehradun today to settle here. He doesn't have any relatives here so I thought we should go and receive him."

"That's a good thought Madhu but I have a very important meeting," Arnab said seriously. "It's OK, I'll postpone it."

"No Arnab, don't postpone you're meeting. I'll arrange someone else to go."

"Madhu I'll manage-"

"Work comes first Arnab," Madhu said sternly. "I need to take Misha to the jewellers. Piya are you free this evening?"

"Yes mom," Piya answered.

"OK then can you go and receive him?" Madhu requested.

"Of course mom," Piya said instantly. "But how will I recognise him? I have never seen him."

"I haven't either. He was a small child when his parents died and his uncle took him to America but I'll give you his name and contact number."

"What's his name?" Piya asked.

"Siddharth. Siddharth Mehra."


This part ends here.

Edited by .tanu. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipee me 1st
awesome update...
were there really vampires outside her room window???
poor abhay suffered so much😭
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago

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