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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update.

hope piyali is able to find pia.
thanx for pm

thanks dear.
hmmm u will know it soon.
u are always welcome dear.

Originally posted by: Saayaniz

now again u started to say sorry 😡 ?????
the update was awesome dear...awww... Abhay cried...I felt so bad for him 😭
Hope Piyali be able to find Piya soon...continue soon & thanx for the pm 😊

lol kya karun yaar late update ki na isiliye.
awww, don't feel so bad dear jaldi sab theek ho jayega ok.
hmmm yea piya mil hi jayegi, i will update asap and always welcome ok.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

awww thank gauri
thanks dear, hmmm he will
thank u so much dear, glad u liked it

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal

dat was awesome..
carry on.. thanxx for d pm..

Thanks a lot dear, will update soon and always welcome

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu

amazing updated abhay not able to find pia

felt bad for abhay
piyali is here to help abhay to find her
i have feeling someone did it
i loved the twist
it is so lovely '
thnx 4 pm

awww thanks a lot neetu dear.
hmmm don't worry piya mil jayegi ok.
yea piyali will help them.
glad u liked the twist, thanks again.
u are welcome dear.

Originally posted by: bellaaa

wow romi amazing update yar
abhay is so heart broken yar
why they kidnapp piya
and glad to know that no body beliebe on the leeter of piya obivously which cant be written by her
piyali a witch hope she can do somethg
ohh no abhiya baby life is also in danger if baby become evil
waht to know more soon
cont soon

Thanks a lot beenish yaar.
hmmm yea abhay is heart broken, abt the reason just wait a bit dear.
yea, no one believed that lol.
yup she will help.
i will update asap ok.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

FABULOUS UPDATE!
Abhay was so much broken 2 see d note 😭 bt d thought of piya n angel in danger again brought him in active mode.
Piyali jaiswal seems 2 be a gr8 help in tracing piya.
Hope they find her soon!
Continue soon!

Thank u so much kirti.
yea abhay had to be active na varna piya kaise milegi.
yup she will help dear.
yup they will and will update soon.

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

Amazing updt👏...Hope they find pia soon

thanks pd dear, yea they will ok.

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

Awesum update
hope they find pia fast n 9thng hapens to pia n angel
aw abhay was heartbroken to c the note

Thank u so much dear.
hmmm they will dear.
yup he was, par sab theek ho jayega ok.
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Posted: 13 years ago
update was amazing..
but where the hell is pia gone..im having afeeling that jai have done this..
he is such a jerk first he throw her like a tissue paper know he is doing this all drama..
abhay will dfinetly kill him...
is jai awerewolf or human being...????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Wow what a fun-filled update. Finally, I managed to complete both the parts. Didn't expected about the witch. Biggest twist huh?0„2😉 So what about Jeh? Is he related somewhere to witch or Pia?

Thank u so much renu.
Lol I know witch ka idea mujhe toh likhte waqt hi aaya so it was unexpected for me too, lol
Abt jay u will see soon dear.

Originally posted by: piggi_Babes

Amazing updat dear... lov it... supb... interesting...👏


Thank u so much dear.
awww, u liked it so much thanks a lot yaar.


Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -sakshi-

awesome update rmuk... feeling bad for abhay & family..

you described piyali very well.


Thank u so much dear. Don't worry everything will be fine soon ok.
awww, glad u liked it so much.

Originally posted by: ajwa.ali

update was amazing..

but where the hell is pia gone..im having afeeling that jai have done this..
he is such a jerk first he throw her like a tissue paper know he is doing this all drama..
abhay will dfinetly kill him...
is jai awerewolf or human being...????

Thanks a lot dear.Ummm all ur questions will be answered in few updates so till that u have to wait ok.
Yea jay is a evil here, and he will get punisments dear.
ummm that u will know in coming update ok.
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Posted: 13 years ago

update on pg 110

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CHAPTER 31

Dobriyal Mansion

piya's room

The atmosphere surrounding the whole room was cold and calm, than usual, which was giving a clear indication of the storm coming in their life, which has already arrived to cause some disasters in the life of each and every soul present in that room.

A pin drop silence was surrounding the whole room, everyone present in that room at that moment was looking at piyali's horrified expression, but no one was able to utter a single word, all were patiently waiting for piyali to speak up, but she just stood still, abhay who was losing his patient each and every passing moment couldn't take more, so spoke up.

abhay-: (angrily) what happened? why are u standing like that? speak up something, what happened to piya? who is responsible for all this?

piyali looked at abhay whose face was clearly saying how impatient he was, then she averted her gaze to each and every face present there looking at her with some hope.

piyali now decided to speak up, she moved towards the chair and sat down and gestured all others to sit too.

abhay nodded and sat down and all others followed too and waited for piyali to speak up.

Finally piyali broke the silence and spoke up slowly with her melodious yet mysterious and calm voice.

piyali-: Piya haven't left the house herself someone has taken her, I can smell the presence of some supernatural here and i know who it can be and he is the reason for why I am here today.

'Supernatural' this word, these creatures was not something new for dobriyals but piya is with some supernatural shocked them to the core. On the otherhand abhay experienced various emotions, he was angry on himself for thinking his piya could leave him, how stupid of him, how could he doubt piya's love, he was angry on the person who dared to lay a hand on his piya and their angel, he was confused on how will he save piya and their unborn, he only knew he will save them but how?

He felt many emotion in himself, many questions were running in his head.

Piyali observed abhay' confusions so without wasting any further time she decided that it was time to clear everything up.

Piyali-; abhay, as I promised to reveal that how am I here today, i will tell and i think it will clear some of ur confusion, so here how it is.

Abhay nodded and waited piyali to proceed further and others kept quiet waiting for piyali to tell the incident.

piyali nodded and closed her eyes to go back to the flashback's as she needed to first think how to start her part of story. She began to utter some spell and slowly slowly eveyone started witnessing piyali's pov infront of their eyes.

FLASHBACK

LONDON

The climate of london was as usual cold as it stays around 10 degree during these time of the year. A white coloured building could be seen far away surrounded with beautiful flowers, bushes and trees.

The natural enviroment of this place can make anyone think that it's special.

Suddenly the scene moved inside the white building. a women in mid 40's was preparing something in the kitchen and a girl with her back turned towards the hall was sitting on the breakfast table waiting for breakfast to be served. From a close view it can be seen that the girl was none other than piyali herself.

The lady served the breakfast to piyali and went out leaving piyali alone in the house as she was instructed to do so by none other than piyali herself.

After having breakfast piyali got up from the table and went upstairs her room to practice some of her new spell she had discovered recently and that was the reason she was staying at her own house for few days leaving her hostel, yes she has her own house too but to avoid any kind of doubt and to avoid coming to contact with any supernatural she stays at hostel in center of humans as her house is in a secluded place where supernatural's could find her easily but little did she know that she was already founded by supernatural or particularly by a warewolf.

The scene moved to a dark room of the same house piyali had entered the room to practice her skills but a strange smell caught her attention but before she could realise anything else she felt a strange thing was thrown towards her like potion or something and everything blackened out infront of her eyes.
Scene shifts to a dark den

piyali opened her eyes and found herself lying in a dark cave. The same smell again caught her attention and she recalled what happened to her. But this time she realised this smell belonged to none other than a warewolf.

Suddenly a manly voice spoke up

The man: So mrs. piyali the gr8 white witch, you woke up so fast, i thought that u will see ur end tomorrow but it seems like u are in a hurry.

piyali tried to look at the man's face but due to darkness she couldn't see anything, she felt scared as this man may kill her but was confused why did he want to kill her and how he reached there.

Not able to control herself more she spoke up

piyali-: (angrily) who the hell are u? I know u are a bloody warewolf, I can feel it but what u want from me? how did u find me?

suddenly with a bold of lightening the cave lit of, piyali saw a man standing there, his face could be clearly seen, green eyes which showed hatred, revenge and evilness only, and a evil smile was playing on his lips.

The man-: cool cool mrs witchy keep ur mouth shut, why the hell do u think I am going to answer all ur questions while i can kill u easily, huh?

piyali-: oh really u think it's so easy to kill me? don't forget i am a original white witch, ur potion can make me weak but can never kill me, got it?

jay-: (smirking) so miss witchy is being brave ok let's see who kills whom but yes, I will answer ur two question first and second one last one I don't think is important so better we don't waste any time on it and don't think i am answering u because i am scared of, I want u to know the reason for ur death. so, listen carefully.

piyali didn't protest as she also wanted to know the reason so she just kept quiet and jay continued.

jay-: I am jay khurana, the leader of warewolf clan, being a original white witch u must know the prophecy that was made ages before, it stated something like

'a special human child will be born who will be destined to mate with a supernatural and will give birth to a hybrid who will be indestructible, deathless, and immortal, who will either bring peace over the whole world or will destroy the whole world and will rule as a king.'

so it's time for the prophecy to be true. In dehradhun, this miracle will happen, yes that hybrid have already came in the womb of piya raichand wife of abhay raichand, a vampire and piya is that special child, so for now the baby to be born, a white witch is required so that the baby and it's mother will remain safe but but but if a original black witch is able to cast the spell of dark life then the baby will turn evil which i want that means death of every supernatural and we will rule the whole world because the baby won"t be able to harm the one who will cast the spell and can never betray any of her order.

Saying this jay gave out a evil laugh which ecohed throughout the whole cave and looked at piyali who was looking at jay horrified and ,dismayed and outraged.

jay-: what happened miss witchy, shocked? don't worry u will not survive till that time to see those destructions so now time to say u goodbye miss witchy.

As soon as jay said those words several wolves in packs began to enter the cave, piyali looked around and saw almost eight wolves were surrounding her.

jay-: so miss witchy i guess it's the time to say u goodbye, actually u must be happy u will be free from this cursed lifem, so be ready.

piyali gulped hard due to that potion jay had used on her she is weak now so many wolves will she able to fight so many? but she have to, she can't let the world to be destroyed, she will fight hard.

The cave was now full of sounds of howling, piyali looked around cautiously and with a gust of wind three wolves were thrown aside injured badly. Piyali was panting hard as she used lot of her strength. But this was a fight so no mercy, two wolves all togeher attacked her, she managed to get them down too. Still 3 wolves and jay was left, though jay was surprised that instead of the potion how did she get so much strength, jay decided, it was time for him to come in the war field, jay began to shake vigorously, a strange strength took over him, his physical features that were of a man changed, his eyes changed colour, his face drained all it's colours and a deadly look replaced it, his white shirt tore away, instead of his rough skin, hairs grew all over his body, the human voice was no more heard only scream of some animal is heard, and in few minutes he transformed into his real form, instead of jay khurana stood a deadly warewolf now.

Piyali looked at the creature standing infront of her, she knew it's going to be a hard fight, and in fraction of second she was lying again, blood coming out of her forehead, piyali again stood up and chanted some spell with a sudden strength jay was thrown some ten feet away but this spell took away all her strength, she felt like she was going to collapse, she stood still with little bit strength left in her, on the otherhand jay stood up, he was injured too but being the leader he was the most strongest warewolf so applied all his strength and attacked piyali one more. This time piyali's whole body hitted a wall and she collapsed on the floor. Jay saw these and with a victorious smile playing on his lips he took a step towards piyali with the intention to kill her forever but suddenly he saw that piyali's body floating in air, jay looked shocked how is it possible?

Suddenly a ray of light fell on piyali and she was healed, and in a fraction of second she couldn't be seen anywhere as if she vanished in thin air, leaving behind jay who was standing dumbstrucked.

FLASHBACK ENDED

Everyone was now again back to the where they were, that is dobriyal mansion, piya's room. Each one looked at piyali with mixed expression, shocked, horrified, confusion, scared and happy to that at least she was safe, horrified of all the fight sequence they saw, shocked to know that jay is a warewolf and scared for piya.

Abhay-: (angrily) so, jay is a warewolf, how dare he even to think like that, I will kill that bas****d, if a anything happens to piya or our angel, can u trace him?

piyali-: No I can trace him only in his warewlf form, but yea by perfoming some rituals we can trace piya, abhay u were saying that u can't trace her that coz black witch have cast her spell of untraceble, but this spell won't work on the unborn, so through these ritual u can connect to ur baby but yes only abhay can do these because he is blood related and one more thing these ritual can only give u five minutes to connect so u have to try ur best to know where they are.

Abhay-: but do u think that a small baby will be able to tell the location, i mean...

piyali innterupted,

piyali-: abhay don't forget that the baby is not a human being, he is the most powerful hybrid so we can only hope because that is the only way we have.

abhay nodded and all other nodded to in agreement.

Misha who was quiet still now, spoke up.

Misha-: but i didn't understand how ur body was floating that time and how u managed to flee that time?

everyone looked at piyali as all were waiting for the same answer too.

piyali gave a little smile and spoke up

piyali-: As u all know we all are the children of mother nature so how could she not protect her child, knowing that if the In died then the whole nature will be destroyed, the balance would be disturbed, so that time mother nature helped me, she surrounded me with her protective shield and healed me fully and I using my own power vanished from there

Every one gave a smile and proceeded for the ritual to perform.

Khurana mansion

Jay was still sitting near the the fireplace, and thinking of the past events. He still remembered how he followed abhay's each and every step so to keep a proper trace over him. He came to know about piyali from him only.

He decided now it was time to go to somewhere. He will suceed in his plan and with a evil smirk he got up took his car keys and rushed outside.

Dobriyal mansion

Abhay, and piyali were sitting in a dark room, candle surrounding them. Piya have closed her eyes and and kept a bowl of water infront of her. She have not allowed anyone else to come inside as human beings may disturb her concentration. Abhay's eyes were closed too and he was also reciting the spells with piyali on her insistence, suddenly all the candles blew away and with a gust of wind some faint voice of a child reached abhay's ear whispering ' dadda plz chave (save) momaaa...'

Ps-: Guys this the first time i updated from pc so can't understand the length so if short then pardon me, can't type more.

One more thing a big thank u to chandni who helped me a lot in storyline, so without her so many twist couldn't be possible so thanks a lot.

Hope u all will like this update, if not then also plz comment as each comment means a lot to me. i haven't wrote flashback or supernatural events before so may be it's not good, but still read and comment.

Love u all.😛

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..it interesting..
So now abhay n piyali will trace abhiya child..
Loved it..i hope piyali will save piya sooon..
Jay i hate him in show n every where...
Plzzz continue sooon as possible
Thanks 4 pm..
Edited by Aish-Naksh - 13 years ago

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