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maria

@Maria-capri

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wonderful os sreya very nice good job 👍🏼
misha dancing with a young man cool ...😉
i think young man is abhay ...😉
i loved it plzzz update soon ...😃

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

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wonderfully written!! 👏
sreya u beautifuly describd metz's pov n her thots! Ur justificatn of metz's actns was perfct!! 👍🏼
plz sreya if u cn thn plz write anothr os cntinuing frm where u left !! 😊

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fatima

@Yumna786

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

👏amazing os sreya👍🏼...
luved it...

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesom os shreya...u wrote well..metz...loved it..thanx.

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

nice work Shreya 👏 😊 beautiful os 😊

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Apllaud big round of applause👏

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow shreya thats superb work...
really in show t possessed with mathzz didnt show much
u did justice with this

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bubble_

@bubble_

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

That was awesome Shreya...👏👏👏Loved the way u showed Maithili's evil nature...😈I liked the cellphone part..😉

As Haseena left, Maithili saw a silver box lying on the ground. It was rather small, she thought. Opening it, she saw a blue screen that seemed to have "T" on it. It was asking her where she was. Maithili wondered why- Siddharth had only taught her so much about these devices the humans called cell phones. She wondered what to write. Finally, she decided on a dramatic effect.

and r u going to continue this..???If yes...then continue soon..and thanks for the pm..🤗