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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMG Shreya 👏 👏 👏

I have no words to explain how much i loved it!!..

U wrote it beautifully!!..

N another reason i loved it was tht it had all my fav characters 😉😆

Abhay, Maithili, T, Kabir, Misha 😛😆

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Thanks a lot,everyone!!
@maria - nope dear that was kabir misha was dancing with not abhay

@indu, sonu Thanks but i don't see any scope to continue...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
superb work and an unique plot 👍🏼 u showed what maithli must have felt in T body.loved reading this

Thanks! Glad you liked it

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Pavi, thanks a lot. Yeah I know you loved the T-Metz thing. In essence, this was inspired by you 😳

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

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This is all I can do!!
-Gauri

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautiful, amazing os dear. U have just justified t's feeling after maithli possessed her body unlike cv's. Gr8 work. Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late comment.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Gauri, Romita : Thanks so much guys!

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

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..Monica..

@..Monica..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Amazing OS Shreya

Love how u potrayed metz's feelings

Sorry for commenting so late & thanks for the Pm

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Loved it Shreya 👏 Very well written. U portrayed Metz's feelings very well n it masked the illogical aspects of the track in the show w/o any kind of explainations esp the part where she slaps Kabir. I mean if it was Metz then probably she wouldn bother but the reason u gave was so reasonable tat Metz would've slapped Kabir thinking he was Abhay coz Metz would want nothing to do with a mere mortal like Kabir n his life love. She was only concerned abt Abhay n none else. Fab job 👏

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