NEW FF:WHEN BOTH WORLDS COLLIDE!IMP Note on page 26 - Page 15

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

Superb beginning Indu..👏 thanks sonu...🤗

it was not boring at all.. thank u..😳

I feel bad for Liza...I agree she shouldn't have lost her temper and doubted Martin's love..but how can someone leave his family when he is needed the most... yes sonu,you'r write. lisa was at fault true,but martin is at fault too! but whatever happened was the outcome of loss of trust n love,without which no relationship can survive.

Abhay's part was brilliantly described..😳

waiting 2 see what America has in store for Abhay and Rick.. yaa...lets see what america has in store for them! but surely lot of things are gonna happen in the coming days... 😊

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice update!!!!! thanks anji 😳

does lisa n martin have any role further??? or there story was just to give idea about abhay's job...he is somehow related to their suferings...right!! hm...ya you'r somewat right! but its too early to say anything ,so lets wait ! 😉
abhay is mysterious here...who is he or i should ask what is he??? yep he is ! he is human,not a ghost or vampire,that i can assure you! 😆

well i know you not gonna answer my questions now.😆...so continue soon. ya..will try to continue soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: Yumna786

very nice n interesting update..

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

thanks 4 pm... nice part

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

interesting update thanks dear..😳

so abhay is inflicting pain and suffering on others but he too feels it yep,u have got that absolutely right !

what is abhay actually...is he some demon from hell? no. he isn't a demon or any kind of supernatural. he is an human. but why he is like this that you will get to know gradually.

thanks for pm you are most welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

what an amzing update indu 👏 thanks for liking and thanks for such a lovely comment dear..😳

this ff is really extremely intresting , sooo much mystries i m loving the abhay 😎 thanks. glad that u'r loving this abhay. 😳 ya,abhay is very mysterious but he is suffering pain for a long time. when you get to know how much he has to bear,i bet you will feel terrible.

he is such cool wanna eagerly know more of him and poor lisa i pity tat girl but who is she ? and who is martin ? and how r they related to abhiya ? lets see wether they are related or not. but for that u have to wait!

ufff i guess m becoming piya 😆 asking so many question but awesome , waiting eagerly for next chappy ya..but i love piya type readers...😆 so no worries. 😉

once again thanks a ton 😳 ya..will try to update soon..😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

This is amazing!
Abhay sounds really complicated!