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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Amazing piece of writing indu. I just loved it. I felt sad for lisa, martin is not doing right with her or there is any mystery in it. Poor child. I loved the way u described each and every part. Rick's inner turmoil was beautifully written. Amazing start. I am in love with u writing skills. U are a brilliant writer. Plz continue soon and waiting for unfolding of abhay's character more. Thanks for the pm and sorry for commenting late.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: mandy1024
N u say this is not nice 😡
This is for u

I totally loved it Indu

It was brilliantly written Abhay surely is a mystery here 😕 Very intriguing n this is the reason I completely loved it. The scene with Rick in particular was brilliantly written. The way u described his state of mind was outstanding 👏⭐️

I feel so sorry for Lisa 😭 How could Martin do this to her? Agreed he felt hurt when Lisa doubted his love for her but thats no reason for him to turn his back on his dying son 😡

Now u surely have entrusted me with a bigger task . I wonder how I'll be able to match with your writing skills in our joint FF.

Again superbly written n as for criticism I can only ever think of a very minute detail that can very well be ignored even. A couple of extremely minor grammatical mistakes(mind u minor ones). Other than that it was perfect 👍🏼

There I have been honest as well 😃

.thank you mansa...🤗 that means a lot to me 😳

ya there are not one but many layers of abhay that will slowly unfold with each update. and i just hope i can do justice in portraying him... 😕

martin hurt lisa but he also loved her deeply,so u see wat really happened was not in his or lisa's hands. though it's true that there were some issues between them but their weakpoints made the road of their destruction smooth

now that is too much of exaggeration dear...as you are a prolific writer and i'm nothing in front of you 😳

and there are so much expectations from this ff,i just hope i can live up to them 😕

and thanks again dear 🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
amazing u described abhay's state so well continue soon...

thanks juhi. glad you liked it. 😳ya will try to update soon..😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: .tanu.
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Awesome starting... it was beautifully written. it looks impossible right now that this stone will ever melt n fall in love... so abhay gets pleasure when completing a mission yet its unwanted like you wrote... ok this is a very mysterious story... eagerly waiting for next chapter update soon 😊

thanks a lot tanu 😳

ya..abhay is more like a stone now without any emotions. there is neither hate nor love in him. but in adequate conditions even stone does melt,so it depends and in abhay's case it's more complicated. so we have to wait for that. no it is not pleasure,but pain what he feels actually but the irony is he gets it as his gift and thinks it to b pleasure,as that is what he heard was desired by humans. but little did he knew that it was pain!

hope you will like the next update as well..and yes will try to update real soon this time...😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner
Nice Update

Loved the first Chappy😊

thanks dear.glad you liked it.😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
.thank you mansa...🤗 that means a lot to me 😳 U r welcome 🤗
ya there are not one but many layers of abhay that will slowly unfold with each update. and i just hope i can do justice in portraying him... 😕 Waiting for that to happen

martin hurt lisa but he also loved her deeply,so u see wat really happened was not in his or lisa's hands. though it's true that there were some issues between them but their weakpoints made the road of their destruction smooth I agree both r hurt but that's no excuse to walk out on his son It would've been OK had he left Lisa but what's his son fault in all of this? 😭

now that is too much of exaggeration dear...as you are a prolific writer and i'm nothing in front of you 😳 U will never accept any compliments ur way 😛

and there are so much expectations from this ff,i just hope i can live up to them 😕

and thanks again dear 🤗 Yep the stakes are high on this one but I am sure u'll pull it off brilliantly 🤗