'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 96

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update indu👏 waiting to see what piya will say to abhay😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update
abhiya scenes were beautiful ...can't wait to see how would pia reprimand him now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
super awesome update..
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update indu
I loved it
Abhay eagerness to know Pia reply
Pia confusion
So Pia is actually wid anik or not

Abhay reply to media was awesome & now wht will b Pia's reaction


Plz cont..
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awosome update
finally abhay confess his love
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
tanks 4r including us i.e. abhiya IF fans in ur update
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wil b waiting 4r the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
IF fans 🤣 🤣 🤣 bst prt of d updt ...v r really crazy abt abhiya
couple 😲 😲 hw cute ... well done indu 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful indu. tht was really beautiful. the way you describe a scene and surroundings make it so picturesque that one can actually feel them.

and wow abhay said we are a couple 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
MINDBLOWING! update indu 👏 .u ended it at very interesting part now waiting eagerly for it's next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't need to tell,You are always come up with your Outstanding writing Indu.The was really fantabulous.it shows the reality...in case of that IF...i really wished...imagine...that would be about ViSu...just imagined!!!!i can feel it from some sbs segments...lets not talk abt it.

coming to update,Abhya all moments are ...wonderful.I think Abhay may love Pia,but actually he is not going in that way...he examining Pia...nice way...


as her lips parted and words came out pretty much without thinking, 'i..abhay..it's..it is..always..' 'Kidding!..'abhay whispered followed by a short laugh. 'what??' pia asked in an astonished way. 'of course I was kidding! you thought I was serious?!! Obviously not! ' abhay tried to smile, his face desperately trying to show a naughty glint but it hardly worked, though all this went unnoticed by pia as for the moment she looked bewildered, when abhay added further 'relax..poor anik..!

it was so difficult for Abhay...but he manged it well.

abhay glanced at her through the corner of his eyes and after a moments paused said 'Pia, can I ask you something?' Pia who was now looking at the road turned 'oh..ya..Of course..what is it?' 'these..fans..i mean this..IF...all of them say we..you know.. You n Me..We are..err..' abhay hesitated. 'Yes..Abhay..What? and btw how do you know about IF? do you..?' Pia waited for him to finish. 'nah..no Pia, i hardly get time but ya i visited that page..twice or thrice..i guess..but that's it!' after a short pause he began, 'errm..well..they say..we are..well..electrifying..epic..enigmatic..we generate fire..our chemistry..is awesome..Made for each-other'n etc..etc..' he spoke at a stretch and paused, after a while he spoke again 'so do you think..they are right? I mean..they are fans..can be biased..? Um..what's your take on this?' he asked, careful with his choice of words, not to sound too eager.
Ye huyi na bat...kash ViSu...oh my Poor Abhiya!!these lines are my fav.We are such...

Abhay...jelous na...yayyy...!!

when his eyes fell on Pia's buzzing cell phone and the name 'Anik' blinked, instantly erasing the smile on his face. he was suddenly looking strange! His face grim and the smile too had vanished.Abhay had the cigaratte in his mouth, though he wasn't smoking exactly, he was lost..lost in his own world of speculations and ideas were everything seemed complicated ,hazy and confusing. 'Life is full of surprises and complexities..' he muttered to himself when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned and saw Pia, looking at him with questioning eyes. 'What ?' asked Abhay. 'Abhay you are smoking! ' 'oh..i'm so sorry Pia! I know you dislike it..ok..wait let me throw it away..' and he threw it far away...

Oh my...my ,,,JalKuda Abhay...loved it...haye...thats the point...he n pia can't get it...what is the feeling...!


and the last...

Ok..we understand you are friends. But friends turning into couple is a Regular thing in Bollywood sir, so would you like to say anything about that? Are you just friends...or..there is something more? Actually we are getting to hear something else you know..so' Abhay snapped 'of course we are not just friends..We ARE a COUPLE! ' He smirked and without saying another word, holding Pia by her hand ushered her to get inside the car, whereas Pia was shocked beyond words and did not know what to say. Abhay put the ignition on and when their car was again back on the busy Mumbai road Pia took a deep breath and opened her mouth to speak as if she has found her voice back 'Abhay! What was that?!!!' ''

I can feel this scene...this scene is like 15th Feb 2011...in Mishas party abhay said same to Kabir n leaves with pia...outside pia asked same question to Abhay...

Eagrly waiting ke what answer will abhay give...yoyo...!

Aflatun update Indu...Love u.

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