'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 94

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

awesome awesome update!!! it was beautiful and light and made me feeling with a sense of peace...👏 ⭐️ thanks princess...😳

the first part showed how haseena is glad that her son is back to being her old abhay...it was a small part maybe but it explained a lot!!😊 gud to know it did!.😊

hehe..abhay sure is impatient to meet piya😆..after all though he doesn't say it out loud..she matters to him and he loves her with all his heart..so its natural that the heart would want to stay with the person whom he craves so much😳 yes..he is restless completely to b wth pia!😆

the director can see what abhiya refuse to..that abhiya have a inexplicable bond...they generate fire whenever they are together!!😳 yep! 😉

and when piya went off with abhay..aww it shows her deep trust in him..and understanding..love their moment together in the cottage...it was so beautiful, so touching...u described that part so so perfectly!! thank you.😊

I said..the number of stars represent the days we have spent with each-other and we will spend in the future..

i already told u, i love love love these lines...they r sooo beautiful!!! thanks.😳.never thot my real life implementation can b loved soo much lol..😆

and the last part ..abhay's last words are the best..omg..i'm sure it will hit piya like a storm..even i enjoyed writing this part a lot...😆

i mean she's never even paired up with anik and abhay's telling her to break up??😲😆..i'm eagerly waiting for piya's reply😉..i'm sure next part will be dhamakedaar as always!! well lets see..what happens..😉 dhamakedar??!! that i dont know lol..😆dekhte hey...😛

and thanks for this wonderful n big comment..it always inspires me princess...🤗

@mansa:😛😆

Originally posted by: mandy1024

I am so sorry, I had forgotten to unres my comment n even u didn remind me u know very well dear that i never like to bother anyone ever..besides i know u'r hell busy these days..😊 Heaven knows wats got into u lately 😛 U defo havent lost touch with this FF at all It was a lovely update n a treat for all Abhiya fans 😃 u sure??😕

Coming to the update I am really happy that Abhay is back to being what he was 😊 Haseena got her son back, Risa got her bro n Pia, Tora got their friend back 😊 Abhiya r now doing a movie together with a reputed filam maker n I am so happy for them 😳 I hope that Kate stays away from them now. I agree with Razdeep on Pia's weight issues 😆 even i do! thats why i added it here! 😆

Suku is defo pretty but she has sticks for hands n legs right now 🥱 Its high time she put on weight. I hope Suku adds on weight as well. me too!!

Abhiya moment was very cute. The way Abhay pulled Pia n told her to come with him though he was dragging her himself not giving her a chance to decide was too cute 😆 you liked that??😲 i thought its too much foolish! 😆 anyways good to know you enjoyed it..😊 So Abhay lived in Sweden? Interesting 😉 no dear he didnot live there, read that part carefully...he used to spend his only his holidays there.😊

My clients r swedish too 😆 thats gud..so u know swedish then? 😊Abhiya bond here is so subtle, poignant n I love the way u describe simple human emotions so beautifully. thank you..but am still a newbie here..😳 Ur love for nature, music is evident in ur writing 😳 I am glad Abhay got get rid of a part of his angst before Pia 😳 Then they were back in their fav place where they had shared some beautiful childhood memories 😊 The moment where they tried to reconnect to each other in the same place where they once used to count stars was really cute 😳 thank you.good to know u enjoyed this part..actually,it was a thing i used to do with my elder sister wen i was small..😳Both of them thinking abt the dreams n aspirations they nurtured once upon a time was so sweet 😳

But wat has Abhay done? 😲 Well even none of us want Anik to come in between Abhiya but of course that was no way Abhay could demand Pia to leave him 😡 Its her choice entirely. wait dear..wait for the next chap..b patient..😊

Well I guess I shd actually wait for the next update to know wat made Abhay say that. Do update soon dear 😳 I actually want to know what Pia wanted to tell Abhay as well.hmm..that u will know but bit later.. I fear that Pia will now despise Abhay again Oh dear, what on earth has Abhay done? 😭 all i can say is wait n watch..😉

Fabulous update Indu 👏 Do continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: 45Pinky

Lovely update ! 👏 thanks pinky.
Abhay was so eager to meet Pia !
Wow , they will work in the same movie together !!yes they will..!! 😉
Loved abhay's suprise . glad you enjoyed it.😊
Abhay asked Pia to leave anik ? i think yes..😆
Awesome , continue soon and thanks for the pm ! u'r welcome..😊

Originally posted by: luckdiya

updt ws superb !!!!!!!!! bt end 😕 ...eagerly waiting 4 piya's reaction
tk ur tym 4 updt 😃

Originally posted by: himanshu1990

Amazing Update.

Originally posted by: HawaHawai007

Superb ! 👏