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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
Wow lovely updates I am glad Abhay found about Kate spiking piya's drink and loved how he yelled at Kate and I am glad his relationship with Kate is over. Abhay loves piya hope he realizes soon abhiya moments will. E waiting thanks for the pm sorry for late reply. Also loved risa,Torah and piya bond

thanks dear..glad u liked it...😳 yaa...finally abhay has detached himself from kate..! hm..i guess he will..soon..😊

its ok..no worries dear..u replied that is enough..😊

Originally posted by: flora212
This was super awsome! Yeppie...kate got tight slap! So abhay is feeling some thing fr pia! thanks nafi..😳 yaa..abhay is...!!! 😊
So now what pia will do when she will see abhay infront of her? hmm..well to know u hav to read the next update!! 😉
I hope abhay realises that he is in love with pia and hope pia also love abhay! cant say..lets see wat happens..😊
Pls i want next update soon...its ok if u guys r busy! sorry dear. its been too late i know! but will b updating soon! 😊
And u didnt pm me this time! Dont forget next time*pouts*rofl!

i didnot forget dear! i pmd everyone later!

Originally posted by: SheDevil
hey indu awesome update.I guess this update was needed 4 Abhay 2 realize his mistake & his new found feelings 4 Pia but hey why no PM 2 me?Kate toh gayi but wnt Pia's BF.He is still standing in b/w Abhiya.Plz cont..😳

thank u shrish.. 😳 ya..abhay had his own doubts,so he had to fight with his confusions to clear it all..! 😊 hmm..about anik..lets see..!!

how can i forget u dear! i did send pms to everyone including u but later! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
Wow!luvly update...so abhay z falling 4 pia..luvd his caring nature..n ofcus cant wait 4 kate's dhulai..

thanks renu...glad you liked it..😳

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia
what is your name i do not know but your ff chapter is amazing ...abhay gave slap to kat woder-full very nice story ...please add me in your pm list

thanks for reading dear..😳 glad you liked my work..😳 my name is indu. 😊 and may i know ur name plzz?

ya,i have already added u dear. 😊

Originally posted by: luckdiya
hi indu & tora..superb update yaar...abhay realized his mistk & dat SLAP ws awesome...stil he didnt knw "ish feeling ko kya naam du" 🤣 dis updt is secially written 4 abhay all his feelings,regrets,sadness,care everythng hs described b'fully

thanks a lot diya...😳 yaa..u'r ryt..still he doesnot know..! 😆

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Nice update:-):-)

thanks rashi..😳

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Yay so kate was nicely put in her proper place! I wonder what she'll do now...
and Pia wakes...she'll wonder what's happening 😆

ya shreya..kate is in her proper place! but fr how long..cnt say that..!! hmm...ya..i guess she will..! 😆

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#723

QUOTE=Alicia2001]wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
thanks alicia..😳 u'r welcome..😊

Originally posted by: barki
lovely update abhay realised his mistake and come back to his real life thanks for updating me 👏 u'r welcome dear.😊 n thanks for liking..😳

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
wow just amazing story abhay slap is mind bowling ...waiting for piya response how she will react ...thanks for pm

glad u liked it dear..😳 u'r welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
awesome update...!!!finaly abhay broke up with kate...waiting for pia's reactin continue soon thanx for pm😊

thanks juhi..😳 ya..they broke up! 😊

most welcome..!

Originally posted by: sofia2
i love this ff. pls add me in ur buddy list and pm me when u update. i want some abhiya moment pls.

thanks for loving my work dear...😳 yep..lots of abhiya moments r coming up..!! hope u will like them..! 😳 have already added u ...😊

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
Fantastically written...pheew!kate z out but she was no less dan a tornado..pia..jaldi hosh me aao..we want abhia..n abhay finally realized his mistakes..yay!cntinue soon..

thanks renu...😳 ya..she was more dangerous...😆 ayegi..ayegi..dnt worry,pia ko toh hosh main aana hi hoga...😉 sorry for late..but yep..will update asap..! 😊

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
hnw could u say like dis dat dis chappy is boaring... u knw wat its the best of all... egaerly waiting 4 next part and abhiya convo...

aww...thanks a ton dear...😳 ya..will update within day or two...! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#725

QUOTE=JANAGI]nice thanks dear. 😊

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini
super update.. thanks dear..😳

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#726

edited comment on page 91😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: anjali0111
wow!!!!!👏
superb update!!!!!⭐️
it was not at all boring..it was amazing indeed!!!!!😃 thanks anji...😳
loved the way abhay demanded answer from kate!!! that was the best part...yay!!👏 i was so delighted on every insult he threw at her!!😆 yippee!!!! they broke up gr8!!🥳 glad u liked it dear...😳ya it seems everyone loved that part most...!😆
kate is so evil😡...even after all this she is thinking of taking revenge😡...hope she will suffer more🤢 hm..lets see...bt she wnt leave them so easily...

finally abhay ki dimag ki batti jali😃...he found his old self. liked rajeeb for so blatantly telling him his mistakes😆..good. ya...abhay wasn't dumb,it's just that,he wasn't mature enough to understand his own feelings...😊
the scene where abhay realized that he didn't have any feelings for kate and all his well wishers were right...n how stupid he was...the way he felt...that he could rewind his life...was amazing!!! 👏⭐️this is what happen when realization strikes. thanks dear..yaa...he needed to confront his own feelings...😊
but now he is so afraid to use his brain😆 that when it telling him abt his feelings for pia...he is just ignoring it...every person around him can see that but our gr8 abhay raichand as usual will be the last to understand😆😆😆...but i love this innocent n cute abhay.😆 ya..u'r ryt...😆 ya..me too..!! 😊

continue soon😊 sorry for the delay,bt will update soon..n thanks again for such a lovely comment...🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: --peehu--
hey! finally i caught up with it... thanks fr reading...😳
all the updates are amazing.
i am so in love with this SS.. thank you peehu...😊
abhay was so stupid..i mean did he really tolerate kate for so long.. hmm..ya he did..!!
finally..abhay broke up with her... ya...
i hope he sees his feelings for piya soon.. he will...
and piya..she took all insults just for abhay... hm..ya abhay is precious to her.. 😊
all i can say is..i loved it... thanks a lot dear..glad u liked it...😳
plz update soon... sorry ..will try to update wthin tuesday... 😊

n ya..thanks for commenting dear...😳

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: .tanu.
Awesome update Indu ⭐️ Abhay's feelings were described beautifully. Kate truly deserved the slap n I loved it 😃 but im a little worried of what her evil mind might plan next 😡 So Abhay noticed that he does feel something for Pia other than friendship but at the moment he just wants his friend back... that's sensible. Like Tora she is very supportive. Waiting for Abhiya moments... cont soon n thx for pm 😊

thanks tanu...😳 hm..ya..she will wait to take her revenge...! ya..abhay did..!! nd he will realise his true feelings very soon...! ya..tora is a sweet friend..yep..lots of abhiya moments r cuming dear..😳.will try to updat real soon..u'r most welcome dear...😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#730

QUOTE=zoozoo123]Beautiful yaar...MAZAA AA GAYA...Bitchy kate ko dustbin me daal diya..Abhay is a gadha...😆...He cnt undestand his feelings 4 Piya...😡 thanks vidhya..glad u liked it so much..!😳 i think it's the first time,u'r commenting in our ff...😊

😆 nope dear,he isn't,but ya..he is bit slow in understanding his own feelings..i agree...but he soon will...😉

Originally posted by: anjali.K
Indu🤗, love your ff yaar. Its beautifully written. Havent read all the parts. Just reached part 5. Cant believe I missed reading this ff. Superb job yaar👏. Will update my comments once I read all the parts😊 thanks a lot anji..😳.it's great to see ur comment dear...🤗 okey...will wait...! 😊

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