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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

QUOTE=FeistySoul]Res

Will be catching up soon Indu😳

okey nidha ! will wait...😊

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku
well very nice chapter looking for next thanks for pm ...what is reaction of piya lets see u'r welcome...thanks dear...😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

QUOTE=.rumki.]gr8 update thanks rumki...😳

Originally posted by: ashu1909

wow finally abhay broke with kate.hope he realise his feeling towards piya soon.abhiya r really lucky to have such good friends. yep..dear..he did..! n he will realise his feelings soon..😊.ya...all of them share a lovely bond...😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: Rmuk
First of all I am really sorry for commenting so late, but I was hell busy dear.
now coming to the update, it was amazing, brillant and fab. I so so loved it. It was not at all boring. I loved each and every part of it, abhay's confusion, restlessness, anger everything was beautifully written.
Omg abhay slapped kate, I was was feeling so happy reading that part, finally usme kuch sense toh aaya.
I loved that guy rajeeb's character, wow kya attitude hai.
I loved that part where abhay called tora at 2:30 am, lolzzz I was laughing hard that time, bechara confused soul.
last part was awesome too.
all together gr8 work. Loved it and ur writing skills are just amazing.
plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

it's okey romi..no worries..u commented..that's enough...😊

thanks a lot dear...glad u enjoyed reading it...😳

yaa...dear...abhay is back n his usual self now...😎 😉

glad u liked his character...yaa..rajeeb is a smart n intelligent guy...😎

😆 even i enjoyed writing it...😉 yaa..dear...poor abhay...actually he was hell worried for pia n lost count of time...😊

aww...thanks a ton dear...🤗

yep,will updat soon...😊

my pleasure...😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

QUOTE=urmita] superb update...

abhay slapped kate...i m happy...

ur write really good...

update soon...

now i hv one more ff on my reading list...as i didn't follow it before...

keep pm-ing me this as well...

thanks urmi...😳

glad u enjoyed reading...😊

yep..will surely pm you..!

will updat within tuesday...

n thanks again...😳

amazing dr... finally abhay realized his miatake.. hope he get 2 knpw about his feeling soon.. cont soon... thanks akshi...😳glad to see ur comment after so long dear...🤗

yaa...abhay will realise very soon...will updat soon...😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

ouch ouch h ...am unresing sooo late...sorry re......but i did read the update longgg ago..soon after u posted,u know that😊

the update was brilliantly written...each word each emotion was perfect...⭐️.aww...abhay is hopelessly in love...look at him.😳..!!!the way love changes a person...urghhh...why did he have to be stupid and waste time before when his heart always beats for piya..😡...he seriously needs anger management classes..😕.

poor boy...he is so jealous of anik...but i want him to burn a little for giving pia so much much...yes yes i know i'm evil..😆

and piya i guess is slowly realizing that she has lost her heart to abhay already...😳

i have no concerns for kate...but i feel a little sad for anik...he does have a soft corner for piya in his heart...but in the end i guess he deserves someone who can fully belong to him..as piya's heart already beats for someone else...😊

well now my turn..hope i can keep it as good as u did...😛

wonderful job once again fairy👏

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 13 years ago

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Indu this is for underestimating urself 😡 This update was so subtle, sweet and realistic 😳 n here u were telling me its turned out bad Love the way u express a person's feelings with subtlety, its awesome 👏 Nothing overboard, a right mix of feelings n emotions 😊 Abhay getting restless on wanting to see Pia, hear her words was so natural for a friend who was guilt ridden seeking her forgiveness. He didn't mind ditching his shoot so that he could be by her side? Awww so sweet of him 😊 On the other hand Pia too is unsure if her friend still hates her n even she's desperate to hear his voice but doesn hold any anger towards him though he hurt her so many times 😭 that too for that vile Kate 😡 Finally Abhay got the smile back on his face that reached his heart n dont we all know why? 😉 Then Abhay wanting to meet Pia immediately n Tora telling him off was so cute but still our Abhay knows how to get something when he really wants it 😉 Loved Abhiya moment. It was so natural Tora, u expressed it beautifully n for me this was the best part of the update 👏 It is clear that both of then are being friends but neither of them have realised it completely yet How sad! I hate Anik 🤢 I know he's a good guy n all that but still I dont want anyone between Abhiya 😭 Abhay did beg for Pia's forgiveness n damn this Anik 😡 He interrupted their lovely moment 😆 But please make Anik step aside for Abhiya, please 😭 Once again a lovely update Indu 👏

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#738

First of all I am really sorry for commenting late dear. It's really good to see u back with a bang, I feel so happy.
Now coming to the update just update amazing yaar, seriously from beggining till end just loved every bit of it dear. Amazing descriptions, the way abhay cared for piya calling tora everytime, not wanting to go to shoot everything was just perfect. Loved that director scene where where abhiya talked on phone and abhay was ready to do the scene again lol, really u made me remember abhay's natural smile, naughty ones.
My most fav part was last one so in the mirror scene, was so cute, I can sweetly abhay wanted forgiveness and I know piya will forgive him. So abhay didn't kile anik taking with piya, jealousy will play it's card. But I am feeling bad thinking abt anik, let's see what u two do with his character. Loved all the convo's and now abhiya track will start na slowly, it's gonna be interesting now. I am waiting to know what will abhiya do now. Plz continue asap dear, waiting for next part.
Once nore just a fab, sweet and b'ful update, update when u can, studies and health come first ok so no worries. Gr8 job dear, tc and thanks for the pm

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Sheena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Nice update! 👏
Abhay calling to check up on Pia was cute😊
Abhay asked for forgiveness, I guess Pia will forgive him😊 Abhay didn't like Anik calling Pia😆
I think Anik will realise Abhay and Pia feel for each other even before Abiya do 😆😆
Thanks for the Pm🤗

Edited by Abhiya_Gunner - 13 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#740

i wonder what will you do to separate anik and pia. i just hope u make him a good guy who makes pia realize where her heart actually lays and does not come between them

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