'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 31

Originally posted by: taz90

Nice update Tora!!!

Anik is so sweet just hope he'll support Pia whenshe loves Abhay...

As for Kate, I think we will hate her more after each update...

I hope Abhiya sign the movie...

Cont soon n thx for pm😊

Originally posted by: qwerty-sonu

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hi Indu and Tora...😊

</div>I'm a new reader of ur story...😊Both abhay and piya's feelings were described beautifully...👏👏Both of them r going thru a lot of pain..I hope abhay realises his mistakes soon...<div>

...continue soon..and plspm me d nxt time u update..😃</font>

Originally posted by: anjali0111

<font color="#990099"><font size="2">nice update!!!!👏

anik was nice.😊
pia was sad..as ahe was again insulted😒
kate was as usual🤬
abhay was dumbo🤪...this time also he didn't support pia...jerk😡

hope they say yes for the film...than probably they can sort out their misunderstanding.</font></font>😍

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

awsm update ...

aniket was very nice ... i hate kate ..nd abhay ,, he didbt support pia 😡

hope abhay realize his mistake soon ...

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum updt..hope abhiya will agree 4 d movie
...n kate
continue soon n pm me

Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

Loved it loved it loved it yaar , grrr abhay didnt support piya all because of this stupid Kate and is aniket piya's bf ? Well eagerly waiting for next upd , and hope abhiya signs the film :) , please upd soon awesome yaar loved it tora , u wrote really well

Originally posted by: ashu1909

i liked how anki stood up for piya. i hope abhay soon realise that he loves piya

Originally posted by: abhiora

hi dr:-)may i knw ur name??hope u keep on liking the story:-)vl surely pm u:-)