'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#281

anikat is sooo swt😃 & kate***ignore*** 😡
luv abhiya meeting❤️
update ws little painful... i cnt c her lik dat...😊
thx 4 pm:)) update soon...nxt tym lng update plzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sulagna

@SheIsTheOne

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Pheww...read all 3 updates in one go...anyways...the updates were really nice...👏 But..I have one little confusion...Abhiya's fight happened one week ago because of some reason but in the dream that Abhay saw..there he was saying something like 3 months before...didn't get that...😕 And I want to know what was the actual reason because of which abhiya fought...please reveal that soon...😳

And Aniket...he seems to be a sweet kind of boy...btw..i really liked his name...😳 and...Kate...haahh...her name is nice but kaam is not so nice... Shakespeare was so right...😆and Abhiya going to do a film...😍 And Tora...please write a bit more about that character...So..overall bole toh faata-faati updates..😃

Will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter...and ya...thanks for the PM...😊

Edited by SheIsTheOne - 13 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
<font color="#6600cc" size="2">Very nice update Tora and Indu. read all the chapters 👏 </font>
<font color="#6600cc" size="2">I like Anik. and no comments about Kate. I must say one thing... while reading the story i was feeling like you its ViSu's story instead of Abhiya's 🤣 jokes apart...wonderful going and thanks for the PM 😳</font>

thanks a lot tanzie! Your appreciation means a lot!! 😳
😆 no comments !!nt a bad guess though!!😉 its a mixture of both actually!! 😳
thanks again for liking!! 😳

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

really nice update Tora 😊 👏 but short but I loved it Anikat is nice I liked him and that Katty 😡

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653787

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Nice update Tora!!!

Anik is so sweet just hope he'll support Pia when she loves Abhay...

As for Kate, I think we will hate her more after each update...

I hope Abhiya sign the movie...

Cont soon n thx for pm😊

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bubble_

@bubble_

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Hi Indu and Tora...😊I'm a new reader of ur story...😊Both abhay and piya's feelings were described beautifully...👏 👏Both of them r going thru a lot of pain..I hope abhay realises his mistakes soon......continue soon..and pls pm me d nxt time u update..😃

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

nice update!!!!👏

anik was nice.😊
pia was sad..as ahe was again insulted😒
kate was as usual🤬
abhay was dumbo🤪...this time also he didn't support pia...jerk😡

hope they say yes for the film...than probably they can sort out their misunderstanding.😍