'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 12

Superb update.
u have described both abhiya's turmoil beautifully.
U are an awesome writer.
so, had abhiya broke up ?
kate is abhay's gf or what?
pls continue soon. I am loving ur ff dear.
Thanks for the pm.

nice ss... please contine soon... full of suspense... update...

loved the update!

superb...o pm me wnevr u updt...😳

Originally posted by: abhiora

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it was awesummm!!luvd reading it!!i could feel their pain and longing..darun likhechs,...m nt kidding!!fabulous !!clap clap:-D

thanku..thanku...sweetheart!! 🤗Thanks a lot! Ur appreciations means lot to me.. 😳

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

awsm update
beautifuly writn , u describ deir pain so well
cntinue soon nd thanx 4 pm

thanks hema!! Glad u liked it.. 😳 u'r welcome!! Yep will continue soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
you are very welcome
thanks for the pm

thanku alicia!! Will b updating soon!! U'r welcome !! 😊

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Amazing loved it.The way u described their inner turmoil was jst wow.I guess there was a time whn Abhiya used 2 love each other but now they r apart but I m sure soon they will meet each other & will become one.Plzz cont..😳</font>

thanks a lot shrish..glad u liked it..!! 😳 yaa...thy lovd eachothr bt thy weren't couple,thy were just good friends!! Yep,thy will gt united 4 sure..aftral its their luv story na!! 😉
will continue soon..the nxt update will b written by tora.. 😊