ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

brilliant update anji.

so is the track now moving towards how abhay lost ada also same way?

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
brilliant update anji.
so is the track now moving towards how abhay lost ada also same way?

Yes!!!!!!!! Only difference is how it happened????This update was supposed to be part of Manasa's but it became too long so Anji got the exciting action packed UPDATE. Next part is handed over to Gauri. She will delve into the mysterious past

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Outstanding Anji, I had goosenbumps reading the last part...damn,
I loved how you destroyed the two sides of Abhay. truly said, Love and hate such a thin line 👏 👏
Poor Pia, I felt so bad for her. she is completely broken and lonely. and Aayan part was soo good. how he felt for Pia and called Abhay inspite of being so afraid of him.
and the last part, needless to say, the best and no words... too good... I already read the update twice..gonna read again after commenting.
I hope Pia is not going to die. Finally Abhay poured out his emotions seeing Pia is in life threat. his line of hatred will be diminished with love 😳

@Ayeshu, whos gonna update next?

https://sl.glitter-graphics.net/pub/704/704207kby09mvri2.gif

Gauri will update next. It will be solely based on the past and reviving PIA.

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

superb update, thanks 4 pm... i love dis part a lot but why abhay speak "dont die on me again"... hope she will be fine and why ayaan get such dreams... i am confussed..,

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#925

Awesome update anji.I m thrilled.U know wht is the bst thing abt this FF?The bst thing is tht in this FF Abhiya never confessed their love,they loathe the sight of each other,they r here 4 each other redemption.Its more lke duty call 4 Pia & ego call 4 Abhay but still without words being used u can still feel the immense love,passion & hatred they both hold 4 each other.Abhay hate her or better pretend 2 hate her but still a sight of her in pain make him devasted.I loved the way u described last scene & this boy ayaan is courageous enough 2 call Abhay & Abhay hynotise Jim.C evn if he was far away still his care & love never died 4 her.But yeh kya ho rha hai Abhay ko track pai laate laate Pia out of track ho gayi hai:P? & tht faint smile both gave each other shows the passion indulging in thm.Plz cont..😳

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#926

Anji that was a great update 👏 👏 👏

So Jim was concerned for Pia coz Abhay asked him to.. Nice !! The love - hate relationship is captivating

I loved Ayaan, he's a mere kid yet so matured, confident n caring

I donno y but this line - '' Her face broke into a smile. Abhay couldn't help himself but smile back. '' This kinda made my eyes wet n i hav got no clue y 😕

Btw, Book 1's about to end, congrats Aysha, Anji, Shivani, Gauri, Tanz, Purple nights & Mandy 😃👍🏼

We want Book 2, 3, 4 and so on 😆

Edited by Pavi.Dravid119 - 13 years ago