ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#911

loved it..

thanx for the pm..

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

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Posted: 13 years ago

#912

Awsome update Anji.Lil ayaan showed a lot of courage.Pia getting hit by the bullet and Abhay's dead heart breaking into pieces-it was described perfectly

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#913

YIPEEE!!!! Loved it Anjali!!! Ayesha, whos upd8ing next?!
-Gauri

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#914

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amazing anji...🤗 it was beautifully written,magnificient update...👏
The way u portrayed abhay's human and demonic side,was just lovely!!! ⭐️ And atlast how his love for pia reached its heighest peak,was again beautifuly explained!!! 👍🏼 He compelled jim to look after her n tht shows though a part of him wants to punish her bt another part wants to protect her from everything!!😳 and ayan is really very brave and most importantly he loves pia very much and dat is the only reason that he got the courage of calling the person who almost bite him to death..!!
And the last scene...hm wat shud i say? Hm..i am speechless...pia smiling aftr so long,seeing her saviour nd abhay the most dangerous predator who forgot wat human emotions mean,smiled back!! And dis was the most amazing moment for me!! Then the bullet piercing her heart with her hands strechd towards abhay was another memorable moment!!! It was the most heart wrenching moment as well ..!! This entire part was just awesome,so much so that the whole scene is captured in my heart!!! ❤️ All in all a terrific update!! 👏
Awaiting the next chap ...and i am sure abhay will save pia!!! Plz continue soon...😊
And thanks for the pm..😳

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#915

Oh that was utterly beautiful Anji!

I have nevr loved Ayaan more...the kid is awesome!

I love how you showed Abhay's dilemma and how the light won over the dark. Coming to the end...I wonder what'll happen to Pia now...That was one hell of a cliffhanger...Good job!

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#916

awesome update anji!!!!!!
jim was taking care of pia...i doubted that why he was so concerned about her...so abhay compelled him to do so.
pia is really stubborn...she threw herself in trouble to come face to face with abhay...last scene was amazing...the way he smiled looking at her and rushed to her when bullet hit her...all was beautifully described.

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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#917

wow read it once gonna read it again!!!!

this part was simply beautiful!

Piya caught sight of Abhay standing near the back door. Relief washed through her seeing his face. She had missed him a lot. Her face broke into a smile. Abhay couldn't help himself but smile back. The man was going to duck into the car seat when one of the cops raised his gun again and fired. The man had already caught sight of the gun before the firing and pushed Piya in front of him. In the length of that second, all the happy moments spent with Piya flashed before Abhay's eyes. All that he truly felt for her, all the love he held for her filled his heart. As the bullet pierced her chest, Abhay could feel his heart being ripped out of him. Her lifeless body fell to the floor, her outstretched arm trying to reach out to him. Abhay slowly made his way to her. He held her unconscious body in his arms. The world disappeared around him as he leaned in and planted her face with kisses. He muttered with all the passion in his heart" don't die on me again".

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#918

OMG! I cant wait until the next chapter! Hopefully Piya is ok and didnt get killed!.. awesome chapter!
Want to see abhiya together

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#919

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pia shot

plz update fast

waiting to know what happens next?

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#920

Outstanding Anji, I had goosenbumps reading the last part...damn,

I loved how you destroyed the two sides of Abhay. truly said, Love and hate such a thin line 👏 👏

Poor Pia, I felt so bad for her. she is completely broken and lonely. and Aayan part was soo good. how he felt for Pia and called Abhay inspite of being so afraid of him.

and the last part, needless to say, the best and no words... too good... I already read the update twice..gonna read again after commenting.

I hope Pia is not going to die. Finally Abhay poured out his emotions seeing Pia is in life threat. his line of hatred will be diminished with love 😳

@Ayeshu, whos gonna update next?