ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

fab update anjali. pia has put herself in extreme danger just to bring abhay to her & save her. Abhay's inner turmoil was well depicted . I lvd hw d monster in him wants to make pia suffer & the human side which is slowly coming to the fore wants to protect her & is able to win over d devil in him. Compelling jim proves hw mch he cares 4 her. Lvd hw ayaan sought help 4m abhay even after remembring what he did to him...dat was really courageous f him. He really loves pia alot. Bt pia got shot & abhay could only remember all d moments with her bt m sure he would save her & this might be the turning point in their relationship. I lvd d last line f abhay...dat was emotional. Thanx 4 pm.

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neetu

@sweet_neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

Amazing update
brillantly written
describing the two shades of abhay..he compelled jim to take care of her
the last part was so brillant
waiting to know

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

Comment updated on pg- 141
plz check..

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

awesome update

loved it

Piya has completely lost herself in dark

I hope Abhay saves her

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

Amazing update Anji👏👏

u described it really well especially d last part👏

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minibsp2007

@minibsp2007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

wow... that's amazing no words now abhay will realise all his emotions for pia and no tension for pia as he will save her at any cost. continue soon

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

sorry 4 the late reply

that was a fabulous update👏

omg what pia had done to herself😔

pia shot😲

hope abhay saves pia😔

continue soon

thanx 4 pm

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Nice upd anjali 👏

The way you showed 2 different abhay was really nice

So that's why jim was sooo caring towards piya , abhay said her to do sooo , how sweet of him 😳

Last part was really sad , place abhiya gets out of this turmoil soon

Upd soon 😃

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Mona

@mona1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

Awesome update loved it!

Edited by masaf57 - 13 years ago

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squirrel

@urmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#950

awsome update anji...i just dont hv words for it...

the way u differentiated the part of abhay that wanted to ruin pia from the part that wanted to keep her protected...

nd the last scene...the way his heart broke seeing pia shot...

now i m just dieing of impatience - this is so unfair u ended like that like the tv serials, nd now we hv to wait...update real soon, whoever's turn it is to write...😊

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