ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

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kambakt...u'll write more na?

whoa!!loved it!kehna padega this one was among the best!i love when u or anji write!!You perfectly showed a human pia broken n drunk ...and loved thier convo,abhay seemed totally irritated coz of the care he holds for his enemy angel while pia was in her own love land.😛But i guess abhay jo bhi kare pia can handle it well when she sees the past!!

Ada was his true lover ,seems like but is she alive now?welli guess if it was a single writer ff toh bata sakta tha koi😆now i have to wait...try to give a mindblowing update soon!

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Omg Aysha u are brilliant lovely update. Pia and Abhay are both determined yet hurt it hurts. Fabulous update.

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

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brillant update ayeshu
god abhay wants to cross all boundries of being evil...bt still cares for pia
want to knw wat ada did..
continue soon thank u for pm😊

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#794

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This update just proves why I miss your writing so much Ayesha... you are just fantastic 👏 👏

Even yesterday i was telling manasa I miss your writing... wonderful portray of emotions of Abhya and Pia.

Poor Pia, she is all lonely and seems like in a trap and used. I dont like Daniel anymore and she surely loves Abhay now but their relationship is as complicated as it was before.

and Abhay...the way he killed Ramonav proves his obsession, possession, authority over Pia whatever you call it. he hates her but messing with her dead wounds but still can't stop caring for her.They are lost in their own whirpool of emotions..juggling between them...

eager to see what Ada did that made Abhay like this...

i loved it ayesha... reading whatever you write is always a pleasure 🤗

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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superb update aysha 🤗

poo piya she hs lft rathor place...& alone nw...

i luv dis evil abhay❤️bt at d sm tym he hs sum feelings 4 piya...

ada's character is little bit confusing... xcited 4 d nxt update👏👏

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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that was a terrific and mindblowing update ayesha. 👏 👏 Oh..am so happy that you updated as i was dying to read sumthng written by you! 😃

abhay is unable to realise his own feelings,whereas it's becoming too much for pia to handle! Both are vulnerable right now!
wat's about ada? I think there is more than what meets the eye! And did daniel do anythng stupid as he fell for whom? Was it ada? Is tht's the reason abhay loathes angels so much!?
now this unravelled mystery related with d past is making me restless..looking forward to the next update..😊
please continue soon if possible..and thanks a ton for the pm..take care..🤗
p.s. It wud b great ayesha,if you can give couple of updates inbetween! 😊

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ayshu u updated finally 🤗 I am so so happy 😃 Glad to know tat we will still get to read this amazing piece of writing 😳 n thank u for tat 🤗 Coming to the update it was fantabulous 👏 Abhay's rage was depicted wonderfully and so was Pia's state of helplessness. Abhay has turned back to being the despicable monster he was but somewhere deep down Pia has had an impact on him though he tries hard to deny it n the proof for the same was when after killing those teens he felt remorse. Pia on the other hand is now a mere mortal after she exhausted all her powers on Ayaan 😭 I feel bad for Ayaan. I am sure he will miss Pia a lot n I somehow feel we might not get to see more of the Rathods now I am so glad Abhay came to save Pia. He might say tat he'll ruin her but I am pretty much sure he'll end up doing the opposite which is saving her time n again 😳 So Daniel was in a way responsible for what went wrong with Abhay? 😕 Eagerly waiting to know tat part. The ending kinda left me puzzled Daniel said if Abhay gets personal with her he might end up getting his humanity. But from what I have seen of Abhay he ends up draining a gal dry after getting physical with her 😭 I wont be surprised if Pia allows him to do tat in the hopes of bringing his humanity back but what will this cost her is my question.

All in all a supreb update Ayshu 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#798

superb ayeshu. thats a brilliant update.

loved how abhay still cannot stop himself from saving pia and pia still yearns for him.

waiting to know what ada did that made abhay a monster like this

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#799

Awesome post ayesha.Missed u so much yaar.Oh glad tht u actually wrote this.I loved this update.Pia left Mishka house.Gud idea but I loved tht evn though Abhay show grt hatred 2wards Pia but still he saved her frm tht stupid moron guy.Hatred & love both r quite passionate emotions & anything passionate make u insane & here Abhay still cant decide whether his love is more passionate 4 pia or hatred?So Ada was not bad but daniel?Ada nai kuch nhi kiya?But daniel nai exactly kya kiya?I m loving it.In one moment Abhay is devil who suck blood lke demon in nxt moment he is saviour.Wow awesome.Plz cont..😳 But y no PM 2 me?😡

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago