ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

awesome update Ayesha...👏

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Awesome work ayesha. I just loved each and every part of it. Piya just brings out the worst and best of abhay. I loved the way abhay taught lesson to that russian, but felt bad for those teenagers. So, daniel was ada's servant. I am waiting to know more about abhay's past now. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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This update just proves why I miss your writing so much Ayesha... you are just fantastic 👏 👏
Even yesterday i was telling manasa I miss your writing... wonderful portray of emotions of Abhya and Pia.
Poor Pia, she is all lonely and seems like in a trap and used. I dont like Daniel anymore and she surely loves Abhay now but their relationship is as complicated as it was before.
and Abhay...the way he killed Ramonav proves his obsession, possession, authority over Pia whatever you call it. he hates her but messing with her dead wounds but still can't stop caring for her.They are lost in their own whirpool of emotions..juggling between them...
eager to see what Ada did that made Abhay like this...

i loved it ayesha... reading whatever you write is always a pleasure 🤗

So long as U didn't find the UPDATE boring. I try to write when i find time but these days i feel so drained. I only decided to post an update after wating 2 weeks.

I know Abhay's brain can no longer handle being ousted with all kinds of crazy because PIA just brings out the worst and best in him. Caring nad hating for the same girl is just too difficult.

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Harshnee Vora

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

luved it

wonderful update

especially the part when when pia and abhay are both determined to hurt it really hurts.

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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Jiya tariq

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Amazing update ayesha nd thankz for the pm.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: harshnee
luved it
wonderful update
especially the part when when pia and abhay are both determined to hurt it really hurts.
thx a lot for the pm
continue soon

Both R like newborns aren't they? They are learning to be HUMAN only don't know how to do it yet. Pia is a HUMAN now while ABHAY though a VAMPIRE has no clue how to accept the light at the end of the tunnel.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Wow aysha.You finally updated.It was fabulous.

It took me long enough but i felt i needed to so i can pass the next part to someone else.

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: Jiya_tariq
Amazing update ayesha nd thankz for the pm.

I know this would come as a shocker to everyone😆

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Omg Aysha u are brilliant lovely update. Pia and Abhay are both determined yet hurt it hurts. Fabulous update.

BOTH R silly i know par dono is pal mai dheela hai. Pia is fighting this new phase in her life all alone making the ultimate decision to remain alone so ABHAY won't hurt those she loves while ABHAY is hell bent on retribution.

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squirrel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#820

whoa😲😃 finally this ff is updated..😊..thanx ayesha.😛...gr8 update...

u always write gr8 no matter what...👏😊

geez🤢...its like abhay is trying to remind himself hard that he is a monster, with all those killings.

par pia ko bachane ana hi para.😆..the small human part is trying to come out, and he cant stop it...he is falling hard for pia, nd cant even realise it...so much for hating pia...😊

pia is really hurting.😭...it hurts to see..

so what did that ada do to abhay to make such a monster out of him..😡..daniel must hv only helped things go worse...

cant wait to find out...curious abt pia's new plans after this...nd what abhay gonna do...😛

pls arrange that next update comes real soon.😃..will be waiting...😊