Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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minibsp2007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Superb awesome..beautiful potray of feelings continue soon with lots of abhiya moments

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Awesome , amazing , fabulous , mast , jhakass , rapchik what else should I say , I read upd 3 times , I really loved yaar , Heena & tanzie Kay lekhteh ho tum log and piya taking care of abhay was sooo sweet actually made me laugh , whats the thing abhay can't tell to piya related To her mom dad , and poor abhay he cried after ages , and what else should I say whole upd was awesome plsss upd soon love u both

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Pari Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

I am really sorry I couldn't reply to last updates as my board exams were going on

awesome updates

loved them

Abhiya were really cute in last update

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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Pallavi Sarkar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

thnx for d pm

awesome wow gr8t 👏👏

really loved it

eagerly waiting for next updt

cont soon

updt soon

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Beautifully written
i seriously have no words
i loved how she said he is her hostage now
i totally loved it
sorry for late reply.
you can keep the SS going till you want because like others i will be reading it till you write it.
thanks for the pm

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
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Yay! Yay! Yay! Me first! It happens only once in ages..!😆haha...im glad it made u happy to be the 1st one 🤗

Just now caught with all 3 chapters! Amazing!

Abhay is now hostage of Pia!! OMG, that is incredibly cute!! glad u liked it 😳

Please, leave Abhay's master or whoever the B*****D is and carry on only with their sweet love and romance! Please!!

Thanks for the PM! Master wont appear any soon but he will in the climax 😳

Originally posted by: .rumki.
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beautifully written tanzie.abhiya part was cute👏
u have expressed everything beautifully
liked lake part❤️
now waiting 4 pia's reaction.

why abhay's master trying to kill him?

Thanks a lot dear. Pia's reaction would be disheartening at first but that doesnt mean it will lead to their separation 😳 will know master's secret... later.

Originally posted by: flora212
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Tanzie, my sweetheart! Truely u r amaizing writer. U just explained everything so perfectly. Seems like both r falling in love! I love each ane every scene especially the one where abhay tried not to look pia legs and the environment became hot! The dialouge in which abhay says' i will cut him into pieces and feed those pieces into shark', this was just awsome.
Just waiting what would be pia reaction to hear that abhay killed his father. I hope she understand him. UPDATE SOON!
OH YES DO IT MAKE IT FF AS I WAS ALSO THINKING TO REQUEST U FROM LAST FEW UPDATES! It will be beautiful as ff but yes HAPPY ENDING I WANT, PLZ!

Thanks a lot dear 🤗 currently this is my fav pcs of write up so I always enjoy writing it. They are falling in love and they are very passionate about each other. they are both so different that it will be difficult for thenm so express their feelings. Abhay is very protective about her offcourse 😳

I cant promise anything about the ending right now but yes I will try my best that's a promise 😳

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Mousumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

I am so sorry for being late and not commenting on the previous update. Well I know you understand me more than abhay understands piya🤣 🤣

Fantastic to say the least ! the emotions,fears,feelings,.everything has been described so beautifully ! Loved it. Why does the master want to kill abhay 😡
The lake scene was so cute and romantic 😍
I am wondering how is piya going to react after hearing the bitter truth 😭

Waiting for the update 🤗
And yes..do turn it into a ff if you can. I dont want it to end 😆

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
Amazing yr...
abhay pia movements was amazing... i love dis abhay...
but how will pia react after knowing dis truth...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

Thanks dear. Pia will be hurt and scared ...

Originally posted by: -Sonia-
awesome update
loved each and every part...
Yiipppeee... Abhay is fine ! & piya is scolding him..& Taking care of him..so sweet !
I'm glad that both are opening up to each other...
Abhay & his killer eyes can make anyone go weak..poor piya..lol
why was Master Chand hell bent on killing abhay..
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Thanks dear. Chand has motives.. will reveal it soon..maybe within 2/3 updates.

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Lovely update...i guess u make this a ff tanzie..gud idea

Thanks Rashu. will make it longer but keep it as a SS 😊

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
beautifully written tanzie. loved the new abhiya bonding, but i hope pia overcomes this shock and understands abhay

Thank you so much Dishu. She will because Abhay will give her a second shock...

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Comment updated on pg-60
plzz check... 😊

-Indu

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
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loved abhiya moments...n pia taking care of abhay...n evrything...continue soon

Thank you dear. glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111
superb!!!⭐️ superb!!!⭐️ superb update⭐️!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

i m totally speechless...i mean it was mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r the one FANTASTIC writer🤗...jus excellent piece of writing. Thanku soo much dear.. you are making me overwhelmed 🤗

loved the way u portrayed the emotions of the abhiya..❤️...OMG!!! i cant tell u how much i enjoyed it😍...n literally for the first time i m truly speechless...abt how to praise u n ur wirting skills n this update...if i go one by one frm starting...then probably my comments wud be longer than ur update😆...i mean each n every part was awesome.👏 honestly, write now this is my fav pcs im writing. i hav never felt so emotional while writing anything. there are moments when i feel like crying myself when i wrote tht so i really love writing it and it gives me gr8 pleasure to see people liking it too..

i loved abhay's pov where he said that pia is now his nurse, docter, guardian,cook..❤️..n pia's pov where she mentioned she cud feel his intense gaze...ohhh....so decent yet so erotic
n above all i loved lake scene...it was so beautiful❤️ thanku 😳
n u gave me tension in the end.😲...what does abhay mean when he said in the end- i lost everything i gained till now????? ❓does he mean it that by looking pia's horror stuck face he felt now pia will hate him????😕if yes then plz dont do this..😒...he had killed people but pia has seen his human side too...dont make her hate him...he'll be broken frm inside.😭 He is very insecure about his life and he never felt loved, cared or had a family so he is too much insecure. pia will be hurt and scared but she will overcome the shock.

n whats the mystery wid pia's real identity???😕

n i dont have any problem wid the pace of this SS u can continue it the way u like.😊...i will also prefer it to be a FF so that we can read more😆😉 thanks a ton.. will defo make it long now.. and yes, pia's real identity will be revealed soon...

continue soon.😊

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