Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Oh Gosh what a terrible ending. But it was a lovely chapter! All those things Pia did for him were so sweet... But I hope she doesn't kick him out!
And yes if changing it into a FF means more chapters...then definitely go ahead!

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

Superb
Mindblowing
Awesome chapter. Abhiya moments were so beautiful. Piya scolding abhay and abhay's intense gaze on her uff! Superb. Last part was sad one but waiting for piya's reaction. Plz plz plz continue soon. And u can change it into ff becoz I love to read this ss. I will more than happy. Thanks a million times for the pm and pls do it next time too.

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neetu

@sweet_neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

This update is just out of world...so amazing...
Abhiya moments r so nice...
Waiting 4 nxt part..
Thnxxx 4 pm

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Smoking_up

@Smoking_up

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

wow... Both the parts r awesome... Sorry for not commenting bfore... Bit busy so thts y... So sorry dear... nevertheless its reallyyy amazing parts.

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

I don't mind the pace you choose to write and move on with the story but the meotional turmoil of both the people are well depicted. Looks like Pia is Chand's (Master) daughter and that is the reason he is on the hunt for her. God help her then.

Abhay seems to be treading over murky waters. He himself is not sure of what he sees in Pia. And the reformed Pia has him all the more confused looks like. So will the killing of his father have an impact on their relationship waitng to see that.

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#426

Wow its Hillarious:-) poor Abhay:-(

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Monkey

@TISA0711

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

that was an awesome update.just loved abhiya interactions.waiting for piya's reaction.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#428

wonderful update

just lvd each and every part in it.abhay pia moments were sweet.

jus lvd hw pia scolded himand he agreed to each and everything she said.

just lvd both of them

i think u should make it a ff:)))

thanks for pm

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#429

awesome update dear..
eagerly waiting for d next part..
carry on..
thanxx for d pm.

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

really lovely 👏 ur writing style is really unique the abhiya moments were super cute just imagined how beautiful it would have been if such moments were shown in the show. waiting for ur nexy update eagerly . 😍 ❤️

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