Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

loved it yar...
tooo gud...
the way you described abhiya feeling their diffenebr tnatures...awsome
loved the dailouge of abhay when he said cut into pieces and feed them to sharksss...wonderfull yarrr
so abhiya started falling in love now...
what will the reaction of piya now after hearing abhay truth of kied his own dad...
hope she will understand him...
and yes plsss do make it a ff i loved to read it more...
its going too gud loved it every single word...
cont soon

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

god it was such a luvly update i luvd it 👏
Pia ordering ABHAY 😆 that was fun
u described their feeling so well
uff! ye arnab 😡 😡 koi kam nai hai ise dusron ki zindgi barbad krne k alawa...arhh main ise maithli se zayada hate krti hun 😡
last part was touchy lets c pia kya kahti hai...
continue soon nd thanx for d pm😊

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

2sum...awesome...
u bth r awesome writers dear
abhiya r falling in love
hw swt
nw abhay is pia 's hostage...& she ws threatening him...aray wah!!!! its paybck tym 4 abhay
he killed his own father at d age of 23...
abhiya moments ws mesmerizing
oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superb update yaar.plz continue soon i cnt wait...
hats off 2 u (heena & tanzie)

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

wow!!!! ausome update..

hope they both dont separate again...😃

they falling in love...and waiting for know who is pia's real father...i hope its not chand...or some criminal..

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

superb update tanz

abhiya moment was lovely and cute !!!!

abhay is good now and i like this abhay !!!!

now i want abhiya romance scene its already 7 updates of your ff and no romance thats not fair chalo next one romantic update honi chaye !!!!

continue soon !!!!

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

awesome update..just loved it...abhiya were really sweet..i m loving this abhay...piya has a past unknown to her...eager to know about it...continue soon...

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

tanzie mind blowing update 🤗

im loving this abhay-pia moments...

pia taking care of abhay.. scolding him.. 😛

how will pia react whn she gets to knw abhay's past?

continue soon dr...

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

#438

thank you so much for pm and also amazing story

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#439

See, Tanzie, it is true that this story is slow but it is most definitely NOT boring. At least not for me. The kind of depth and detail and complexity and intensity you both are wanting AbhIya to possess in this SS requires this kind of a pace to create that kind of a graph and for a proper insight into the two characters. Any kind of rush, and that quality will be lost. It is upto you whether you want to extend this into a FF or not but my only request is to PLEASE give AbhIya a happy ending. Considering how ridiculously attached I still am to them, I'll be depressed for days if you end them tragically, I'm telling you

You know, I generally skim through the older parts of the story for 5-10 minutes before I start reading any chapter since it helps me keep up with the story but as this SS is progressing, I am getting more and more confused about the prologue.

Ok, coming to the update, I think this Master Chand is Pia's biological father.

Argh!! That STUPID Rob, I'm glad he's dead😡

Oh, man, you people never fail to leave me enchanted with the way AbhIya are being portrayed in this SS. Each and every movement by them touches my heart. You really know how to tug the right chords. I love how Pia deals with Abhay and his incredulous reactions to her guts is hilarious to read in this otherwise gloomy and tragic tale.

But Abhay killing his father was a twist I had not expected and the last sentence scares me. I hope Pia can control her reflexes 'coz one impulsive reaction and Abhay might just lose all his hope once again, not to mention, this will lead to Pia being pushed back into the darkness as well

Update soon, guys! You both are just amazing🤗