Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Aww, yes of course! I like a gradual build up in a love story. Instantly falling for each other just because he has a hot body and she has a pretty face doesn't work for me. I just don't like it when this 'gradual build up' is equated to dragging in most shows😛

Aw!! I remember reading somewhere that it is Abhay's parents in the prologue but I couldn't connect how. I'll wait till it is revealed. Haha!

Well, I'm sure AbhIya's future will be dark since their pasts are such that it will come back to haunt them again and again. But I know they'll be there for each other in the time of need and hence will be able to overcome it all. I hope our blackmails work. I mean, come on, the tale is tragic enough. We don't need a tragic ending as well😳

AND I see another update coming which I love so far! Eagerly looking forward to the full thing❤️

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#462

awesome update ... Tanzie !

Loved it to the core

Finally! Abhiya have realized their love for each other...I am so happy for abhiya... They have found solace in each other...Cannot wait until they confess their love ...

This SS just gets better from chapter to chapter! It was superb !

I really felt bad for abhay.. hate his father ! I'm glad that Piya understands him!

Bixie getting jealous from abhay was sooo cute !

OMG ! Abhay bought a saree for piya.. Sho shweeet ! Cant wait for the show & Abhay watching piya wearing his gifted saree... The moment is going to be so special !!

Master Chand is still looking for abhay ! I hope he doesnt succeed in finding him ! I dont want abhay to go back to the dark world...

Continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Tanzie, sorry yaar, this time I really have no words to say for the update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Hopefully u get what I mean 😃 I so loved everything abt it. Abhay's POV was brilliantly written. Abhiya are in love even though a confession hasnt happened? 😍 And I already love Bixie 😳 Choo cute 😊 Abhay competing with a dog for Pia's affection? 😆 This is so emotional and so beautifully written that I can literally feel each and every emotion Abhiya go through. Loved the fact that Abhay bought a saree for her 😳 I hope you give us readers something intense n passionate in the next update lets say a super duper emotional Abhiya confession 😃 WOW tat'll make my day 😳 I really hope history doesn repeat yaar 😭 I dont want Abhiya to get seperated again n I definitely dont wanna see Pia run away with Abhay's child(if they have any) like his mom 😭 Please no tragedy there, please please please. Requesting u well in advance in case u had planned for it. I cant stand Abhiya seperation yaar 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Also I am really scared for them as well. Chand plans to target Rhode Islands? 😲 Please let Abhiya elope yaar 😃 Atleast want a romantic update for few more updates before things get too serious. U rock Tanzie 👍🏼

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

I had tears in my eyes when I was reading Abhay's story. It was so well written Tnzie! And so Abhay and Pia both realise they love each other but are hiding it... I wonder how long they can keep it up! Lol. Continue soon

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Abhay and pia both love each other!! just haven't confessed! 😉

glad Abhay opened up and shared about his life wid pia!!

😊

him buying her a saree was soo cute!😍

Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

AWESUM UPDT TANZIE!!! WAITING 4 ABHIYA 2 CONFESS THIER LUV..LOVED

ABHAY'S STORYN ALL ABHIYA MOMENTS WERE AWESUMN CUTE

N CHAND..HOPE HE DOESN'T FIND THEM..THNX 4 D PM N CONTINUE SOON..

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Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#467

awesome update

loved it

finally Abhiya realised love for each other

It was a really emotional update

It was fantastic to read that Abhay wanted to change for Piya

Only Piya could make him realise what could really bring peace to his mother's soul

So Chand is still keen on finding Abhay and he belives that he is still alive

Abhay bought a sari for Piya wow I hope he helps her in wearing that😉

Continue soon

thanks for the PM

Edited by Pari-Gupta - 13 years ago

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

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UFF WHAT A UPDATE!!! REALLY BREATH TAKING...U DESCIBED WELL ABHIYA'S FEELING FR EACHOTHER!! WOW..ABHIYA R FALLING IN LOVE..GREAT GREAT!!! I AM REALLY LOVING THE WAY U R TURNING THE STORY...SUPERB!!! AND MAKE THIS SS LONG...ITS ONE OF MY FABOURITE😃

ABHAY BOUGHT SAREE FR PIA...SO CUTE!!! I AM JUST WAITING FR THE DAY WHEN ABHAY AND PIA WILL CONFEESS THIER LOVE FR EACH OTHER...AND WHO IS CHAND???😕IS HE PIA'S REAL FATHER!!!!😲 WANT SOME MORE HOTY ROMANTIC SCENE...AND YES I WANT PIA TO BE JELOUS OF ANY BIMBO MODEL AS ABHIYA R GOING TO MODEL PARTY!! 😳

UPDATE SOON...CANT WAIT FR NEXT CHAPPY!!!

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago