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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DonIsback

outstanding update.thanx dear but who did this to abhay... thank god pia save him. she had to 😉😆waiting for more abhiya movements u wl b getting them soon😳



Originally posted by: lmonilly--

misha and jeh is together 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲i can't believe that you were about to give me shock 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 actually v r glad dt u gt shocked and i am happy for Abhay that now he will have some alone time with pia in her house 😳 😳 😳 yeee, v knw😆and he will open his pain to pia😛 And thanks for pm 😛 😛 😛




Originally posted by: anukrati

WOW...!
HEENA AND TANZIE U BOTH DONE EXCELLENT JOB thanx a alot anukrati
JEH AND MISHA LIKE IT glad
POOR ABHAY FEELING BAD FOR HIM HE IS IN SO MUCH PAIN don't worry, soon pia wl take away all his pain. PIA FEELINGS FOR ABHAY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DEAR. PIA CHANGE A LOT. KABIR IS SWEET.
CAN'T WAIT
HOW ABHAY REACT TO SEE PIA? WHO DONE ALL THIS TO ABHAY? IS ARNAB HAS ANY CONNECTION WID ALL THIS? opsss so many question, u wl get all answers soon
UPDATE SOON sure wl try
THANKS 4 PM




Originally posted by: TISA07

great update.yay!they met again.waiting for nxt one thankuuu so much dear 😊.




Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Amazing dr...thanx a lot akshi
what happen 2 abhay??
waiting 4 abhays reaction on seeing pia!!! nxt update
cont soon waiting 4 d next part... cont soon sure wl try




Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

awesome gr8t thankuu so much dear
so jeh n misha got married
n pia finally found abhay n his secret
cont soon wl try
updt soon




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mgarg75

Dear writers, what a brilliant story 😊 thanx dear please don't move story too fast, I am hoping you will show pia taking care of Abhay like feeding him, or giving him a sponge bath as poor guy is too sick to take care of himself 😉 omg, u av such wild imaginations😳 and he should continue to stay in pia's house for at least next 2 updates😆 please please😉 v wl take this into consideration😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love



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just amazing..superb!!! 👏 Heena nd tanzie bth of you rock!!!! 👍🏼 thankuu so much indu
WoW..!! Misha-jay wedding gave me real shock!! 😲 v planned it like this nly a big "shocker"
'thy actually...question marks on their faces'..pia sure hs guts engh to abonden a temptng professn nd choose a decent career or rather say a lyf savng professn instead!! and its d sheer power of love!! [<3] " dt was a life changing xperience for her
I lovd dis line, 'I'm still as wild ... of displayng it'.. 😊 glad
"..i found a man lyng...turnd hm wth my shiverng hands"..dis whole part ws very well writtn 👍🏼 as though I ws there in the scene wth pia witnessng evrythng!! thankuu so much indu, it helps us a lot to knw dt where v were gud n where v lacked behind...
"I realisd who ws he...who made me see what LIFE is"...dis part is xtrmly beauutifuull..👏 It's colorful nd it consists diffrnt shades of so many unspokn emotions... indicatng to tht one letter(love) whch is d sole reasn behnd evrythng!! [<3] i must say u av gr88 understanding towards words n emotions
"he hs got two shots...hs blood group" wow dis part is brilliant...evry detail is apt!! While readng it i wonderd wethr any of you(tanzie & heena) is a doctor!! 😲 😊 nooo,
"he didnt pass out...hs feet r moving till nw"..no wonder, its abhay aftrall !! Vampire or human dosnt mattr..he is d strongest!! 😳 xactly, his past life made him enough strong
"I myslf didnt knw wat he ws fr me"...well tht sums up evrythng... 😳 thankuuu so much
Kabir"...b4 ur super handsome patient..." wow! Anthr admirer !! [LoL] 😉 heheheh
"I took out abhay's coat...I will mak thngs ok fr hm'...no matter what"..again a very deep nd emotional part !! I lovd it to d core... 😳 n v r glad u loved it
Aww...kabir is soo sweet nd undrstndng..glad you brought hm in dis ss..😃 so is there some bigger role for hm to play?? cn't say nw nything😕
Poor abhay..he's in so much pain..bt nw pia knws hw to soothe hm...!!! 😊 true
Heena and tanzie hatsoff to bth of you fr dis magnificient update!! 👏 n thankuu so much for ur warm n encouraging words
Awaitng d nxt part eagrly...bth of u tkcre...🤗 u too

-Indu 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay! Yay! Yay! Me first! It happens only once in ages..!😆

Just now caught with all 3 chapters! Amazing!

Abhay is now hostage of Pia!! OMG, that is incredibly cute!!

Please, leave Abhay's master or whoever the B*****D is and carry on only with their sweet love and romance! Please!!

Thanks for the PM!
Edited by Sivaranjani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written tanzie.abhiya part was cute👏
u have expressed everything beautifully
liked lake part❤️
now waiting 4 pia's reaction.

why abhay's master trying to kill him?
Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tanzie, my sweetheart! Truely u r amaizing writer. U just explained everything so perfectly. Seems like both r falling in love! I love each ane every scene especially the one where abhay tried not to look pia legs and the environment became hot! The dialouge in which abhay says' i will cut him into pieces and feed those pieces into shark', this was just awsome.
Just waiting what would be pia reaction to hear that abhay killed his father. I hope she understand him. UPDATE SOON!

OH YES DO IT MAKE IT FF AS I WAS ALSO THINKING TO REQUEST U FROM LAST FEW UPDATES! It will be beautiful as ff but yes HAPPY ENDING I WANT, PLZ!
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update!! beautifully written
Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing yr...
abhay pia movements was amazing... i love dis abhay...
but how will pia react after knowing dis truth...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved each and every part...
Yiipppeee... Abhay is fine ! & piya is scolding him..& Taking care of him..so sweet !
I'm glad that both are opening up to each other...
Abhay & his killer eyes can make anyone go weak..poor piya..lol
why was Master Chand hell bent on killing abhay..
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc
Edited by -Sonia- - 13 years ago

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