Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Wow heena awesome n mindblowing update,loved it to the core.stalker is abhay am i rite.loved mishu n pia conversation,loved to see that mishu hate jeh infact i also dont like jeh.

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

awww awesome... .hope pia with abhy...

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

great story line fabolus heena...

i love abhay chrcter as stalker...

i loved it...keep it up

thx 4 pm

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

awosome update 😆

Edited by meerubzara - 13 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

I know I'm going to sound really sadistic but I'm SOO happy Pia is kidnapped🤣.🤣

Yes, yes, one update and I miss Abhay already. Hope to see lots of him and AP in the next one😳

As far as this update goes, very well-written, Heena! I loved how you described everything making it all seem very simple to imagine and relate to.

Looking forward to seeing what else you guys have in store for us! (:

P.S. Kill Jeh, one of you? :P

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Comment updated on pg 9
plzz check...

--indu

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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first of all sorry fr nt commenting on d 1st update...!! :-(( no probs indu😊

nw cming to d ss..
Amazing start nd an enthralling story...!!! thanx a lot n v r glad dt u said that
U already knw na tanzie,tht hw much i love ur writng..as well as heena's !!! So dnt evr frgt to pm me whtevr u write..!! :-)) sure dear😊

superb job..both f you..!! Thumbsup 😊

abhay an assasin nd piya a super model leadng a lonely lyf...nd finaly she hs been kidnappd by abhay..!!

Though its nt a supernatural story bt still it hs d mysterious nd dark aura making it even mre appealing...!!! v r totally glad dt u r finding our story worth reading

Bt M nt going to ask u to diverge details dis tym as m lovng dis suspense...wink heheheh, thanx😆

m eager to knw wht happns nxt...
Plz update soon.. sure wl try😊

And Once again ...well dne bth f u..!
Its a totally refreshng storyline...
Wht an idea tanzie.!!! Thumbsup

thx fr d pm..
Tcr.. u too tc😊

-indu

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
1st congrats to both of u for ur ss thankuuu so much rashu and sorry i didn comment on 1st update.no probs dear..this update was lovely after ayshu u both are really good writers seriously publish a book. omg rashu, this is such a big compliment, thanx😊 .

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend to pia
thankuu so much dear😊

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Nice update... thanx sonia😊
OMG !! Abhay stalking piya..thats a change..lol 😉
jeh seems like all the typical men who wants one thing..he doesnt love piya!! yeee😆
Misha n piya sisterly bond is amazing.. 😊
So, abhay finally kidnapped piya! yeap, he did d honour😉
Continue soon sure😊
thanx for d pm
tc u too

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Ohh God 😲... you guys are soo mean Pia is kidnapped and you all are happy 😛 🤣 🤣

Great,... I hope I will be successful in making you happier in the next update 😉

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update pia is projecting her self out their like a common tart really bad loved the update thanx alot dear so she has been kidnapped waiting for what happens next loved it glad😊 thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: priya.1
lovely update heena...thanx dear
Jeh is always a prb😡 hehehe, u cn say dt😆
finally abhay has succeeded in kidnapping pia...yeap
waiting or lot of abhay in the next update 😛 sure vl try 😉
continue soon dr...

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
Superb thanx.. So abhay kidnapped pia waiting to see how will he control bratty pia soon u wl come to knw abt it😉 update soon sure

Originally posted by: hpoirotac
i guess piya's problem is that she is misunderstood by guys like jeh who see her as a piece of meat or something🤢 u cn say dt bt rest u wl come to knw as story progresses abhay ishtalked piya and ended up kidnapping her...waiting for more!

do continue soon sure😊 and thanks for the pm

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: seabeauty
nice thanx dear 😊continue soon sure😊

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Brilliant Heena Di and tanzie. thanx snigs😊 wow Pia is wayyy different from the show one. Or for that matter from any character ever written in a fan fic. This is too good🤗 thanx to tanz snigs for this wonderful idea😉

Originally posted by: kuttu
Jeh sure gives a creepy feel and Abhay a dangerous feel. So now I hope it is Abhay who has captured her.u hope so😲 😆So how is pia darling going to torment our guy with her 101 questions wait n watch😉. Abhay is going to get an earful from her I guess keep on guessing dear😆.thanx for ur comments

Originally posted by: flora212
Lovely,beautiful update thanx dear😊.i think abhay is the kidnapper.how he is going to fall in love with u wl come to knw abt this soon.is there happy ending in this story? dts too early to askcontinue soon sure...thanks fr pm .

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