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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update heena thanx shrish😊
I so loved it v r glad 😊
Abhay is on mission 2 follow pia & finally he kidnapped her.
I wnt 2 know who wnt 2 kidnap pia & y? soon u wl come to knw abt it😉
Jeh is such a snig yup he is😆
Plz cont sure
Luv u luv u too 🤗






Originally posted by: Neytiri

Nice updte.thanx dear😊..thnx 4 pm.



Originally posted by: abhiora

wow!!its getting more and more xciting and thrilling thanx alot tora😊..cnt wait to c wat vl happen nxt !!





Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update. thanx peehu.piya is so much different..so she finally got kidnapped ha..n jeh he is err..um..forget it hehehe



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuri16

Awesome update Heena di🤗...thanx madhuri😊

Tanzie, so wat i will manage with d stalker if abhay is not there😆
so finally she is kidnapped..!!..heheh, yeap finally v did d honour😉
i liked misha n piya's bonding!!...u guys r amazing when it comes in giving even tiniest details...!! thanx
n 4 jeh..m really upset if he is wat misha said!!..v cn understand madhu, how much u love jeh bt here his character is planned like this only.but all i care is abhiya..so no probs!!..glad
piya here is really interesting!!..
do continue soon. sure.n thnx 4 d pm..luv u n tc u too🤗




Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

brilliant update heena. !!! thanx soni

this blue eye guy is abhay na and he is stalking pia everyday !! oh finally pia kidnapped .!!! i love misha concern for pia !!!! glad jey is such a creepy .!!! i think misha say right thing about him .!! jey also hate misha . !!! i think both have some secret .!!! cn't say, wait n watchbut i love pia here .!!! i loving this story .!!! v r glad soni u r liking this story continue soon sure😊



Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

yippee abhay kidnapped pia finally 😆 dishu😲 u r happy coz abhay kidnapped pia😲 gosh u just want abhiya chahiye wo kidnapper hi uska😆




Originally posted by: mandy1024

Hi, hi, i m replying on behalf of tanz also

@Princess_Xeelan: Loved this SS. thanx dear Plz add me to ur buddy list n PM me on updates 😊 sure she wl Heena had sent a PM n thats how I came across it n loved it.glad Too good. Keep me posted on updates . Thanks 😃 our pleasure
@Heena: Thanks for the PM Heena 😃 ny pleasure Its mindblowing. Concept is superb. thanx once again Abhay as a killer is what I'd call smoking HOT 😳 Loved it . So Pia is kidnapped? Waiting to read the next part. When will Abhiya meet? soon😉




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

nice update...thanx dear

love misha and pia bonding ...glad
jeh...creepy as ever!!! hehehe
so abhay has finally kidnappped pia...whats he gonna do next...soon u wl come to knw abt it
continue soon...sure





Originally posted by: anjali.K

was it abhay stalking piya? Why is he after piya? whose orders is he following? ok, I'll stop before I become a questionaire like piya😆 ya btr, bt soon u wl get answer of ur all questions

The story is going really interesting and loving it but then again its Heena and Tanzie's ff so how can it not be.awww, v r totally humbled y ur words 😊
I find jeh really creepy. I find piya's stalker also less creepy than him 😲 gosh how much love for pia's kidnapper😉. Waiting for the next update. Eager to see abhiya's interaction
continue soon!😊 sure
love you guys for writing such a amazing ff🤗 luv u too



Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

awesome update heena & tanzie totally loved it reaaly very good thanx alot dear n glad u loved it very eagerly waiting for next update especially for abhiya and hope tat gets away from jeh but yes story is mindblowing thanx thanks a ton for pm update soon sure dear



Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm

grt part thanx dear
lukin fwd for ur nxt part with lot of abhiya:))))) wl try to continue soon😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

🤗superb!!!!!!! heena thanx diya😊
thanks 4 pm
update soon :)) sure v wl try😊



Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome update..thanx dear 😊.jeh is awlways a creep no doubt piya love only feel to tht abhay a kidnappe lets see...yupieee abhay kidnapped piya so now in next update plzzz more scenes of abhay and abhiya of course..ya sure nxt update wl b full of abhiya😉.hate tht jeh i didnt like him jerk..v too😆.lets see now wht happening to piya and wht will abhay do with her and how they even fell in love??? cont soon,,,,,,,sure😊


Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

amazing update Tanzie n Heena thanx dear Pia well is 2 different here but guess c is 2 lonely n hurt n it is her way 2 escape from reality n is completely different person from inside now waiting for next😊 wl try to continue soon😊



Originally posted by: abc123ca

great update...👏 thanx dear😊
continue soon...😊 sure wl try
waiting 4 da next part...😳
can't wait 2 c lots of abhiya...😛
n u didn;t pm me dis time...😭 oh sry dear, actually u were nt there in my buddy list, nw i av sent u buddy request so wl pm u frm nxt time😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekvisu

loved it thanx dear😊



Originally posted by: sweet_sudeshna

amazing update thanx dear😊




Originally posted by: Akshi0019

nyc update heena di... i loved it...thanx akshi n v r glad u liked it

jey is such a creep...yeee😆
abhay finally kidnaped pia...
waiting 4 next update containing abhay n pia...
cont soon sure n thanks 4 d pm


Originally posted by: anukrati

REALLY AWESOME HEENA.REALLY amazing thanx anukrati.update soon and pls pm me ya sure, i av sent u buddy request, so wl pm u frm nxt time😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

wow
awsum
gr8

thanx dear
continue soon sure😊
plz pm me


Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome ff thanx dear😊

a very unique concept
intrstng
do continue soon sure


Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update
loved it

thanx pari n glad u loved it😊
Jeh is really ____
I hope Piya breaks up with him soon hehehehe, sure she wl do it 😉
continue soon sure
thanks for the PM



Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

nyc updt thanx nidhi😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

gr8 part thanx dear😊





Originally posted by: vampire123

no abhay 😕 well not superb update i say good update without abhay everything is incomplete v cn understand bt thanx for ur comments😊and thanks for pm heena di 😊





Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Tanzie and Heena!!


Nice update, as usual!! thanx dear
Pia - Is she such a spoiled brat?? You know, I love her innocent look all the time, so it's really hard for me to imagine her like this!! But still fiction is a fiction!!😊 yee, v cn understand, bt its like, dt circumstances has brought this kind of pia infront of u

Jeh, is he a playboy?? Dating Pia just for ?? Oh then Pia, you need to be careful!!
Pia now kidnapped?? Waiting to know what is gonna happen!!😲 wl try to continue soon

Thanks for the PM dearies!😉



Originally posted by: sweta-mony

awesome going dr, thanx

loved it, glad u loved it
continue soon, sure😊
will wait for next nd abhiya😳.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DonIsback

awesome update.thanx dear😊 so abhay kidnapped her





Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

Wow heena awesome n mindblowing update,thanx dear 😊loved it to the core.v r glad u loved it 😊stalker is abhay am i rite hehehehe,😆.loved mishu n pia conversation,loved to see that mishu hate jeh infact i also dont like jeh same here😉.



Originally posted by: visufansona

awww awesome.thanx dear😊.hope pia with abhy...


Originally posted by: meerubzara

great story line fabolus heena...thanx dear

i love abhay chrcter as stalker...
i loved it..glad u loved it😊.keep it up
thx 4 pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

I know I'm going to sound really sadistic but I'm SOO happy Pia is kidnapped🤣.🤣 hahahahah, neetz actually most of our readers r xtra ordinarily happy dt pia has gt kidnapped n d point is she is wid abhay, who cares even if he is her kidnapper😆

Yes, yes, one update and I miss Abhay already. Hope to see lots of him and AP in the next one😳
As far as this update goes, very well-written, Heena! I loved how you described everything making it all seem very simple to imagine and relate to. thankuu so much n v r totally glad dt u loved it😊
Looking forward to seeing what else you guys have in store for us! (:

P.S. Kill Jeh, one of you? :P heheheh, sure v wl do d honour 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice ss yar u both r brilliant writters and i really like abhay in ur ss this abhay in ur ss is very different and would love to read about him more.:-) plz continue soon.
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