New SS: Love after Marriage!chp#4 updtd pg#14 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Awesome concept
I so loved it
Pia will ultimately marry abhay thts gud
Plz cont..
& do Pm me coz i use mobile so it'll b easy 4 me 2 read if u will PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks... yea sure i will PM you :).. m sending u buddy req plz accept
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting...pls continue soon...im waiting...😛...n pls pm me next time...😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting!!
continue..would love to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2 (part 1)

One week later Chand arrived India and talking about wedding of Jeh and Pia...
Chand: So next week it is fixed, OK!?
Arnab: Next week? It is too early for us how can we manage in this short amount of time?
Chand: I dont want anything from you guys I just want Jeh and Pia together..
Madhu: Say yes Arnab we'll manage all this..
Pia listening to the conversation and blushing :$..
Madhu: Go Pia, see if the dinner is ready..
Scene shifted to Germany, Jeh and Haseena having their dinner and discussing..
Haseena: I dont know whats wrong with Chand. I dont know why he is doing everything so fast, well if you like someone else then you can tell me i'll talk to
your dad..
Jeh: It doesn't matter to him whether i like someone else or not, he will do what he feels..
Haseena: So you like Pia then?
Jeh: No, but she is kinda innocent she'll adjust pretty easily with you, well you know i dont have much interest in girls and marriage stuff.
Abhay comes for dinner then he says
Abhay: So you're interested in men then?
Jeh stares at him -.-
Abhay: Mom, why are you wasting your time talking to him about girls, it is such a waste, waisay ap batayien kitni shaadian karni hain iskay hissay ki bhi
mai hi karlonga :D..
Haseena: Gosh why cant you be serious Abhay, your dad is not here tow jab dil chahta hai ajatay ho kahanay kay liye
Abhay: Ofcourse, it is my house! :P
Jeh reading his mails on his phone Abhay says,
Abhay: Bhai kabhi koi coloured message bhi kardia karien sara din bas black and white..
Jeh: Mai mails check kar raha hon messages nahi kar raha
Scene shifted to India, it is morning Pia woke up. After she freshened up.. Her friend calls her telling her that she is getting marry in a while and tonight
is her sangeet and she has to come.. Pia tells this to her mom,
Pia: Tonight is my friend's sangeet and she has invited me and i really want to go..
Madhu: Dont ask me ask your dad..
Arnab: You dont need to ask anything, you can go..
Pia: Oh really thanks dad i love you soo much!
Arnab drops Pia at her friend's house. There when she was dancing with her friends a stranger took her photographs secretly. After sometime when the sangeet ceremony was over she went out to see if Arnab has come to pick her up that guy named Kabir comes close to her and says
Kabir: Excuse me, you danced really well bohut khoobsurat lag rahien thien ap..
Pia was feeling uncomfortable then she asked who are you? He said I'm Kabir Danish's big brother apki dost merey bhabhi bannay wali hai..
Kabir: Shall i drop you ?
Pia refused saying no thanks my father is coming to pick me up.
Then Arnab arrives and Pia leaves and that guy was staring her.
At the same night when they all were talking suddenly the phone rang, Pia picked up the phone that same guy Kabir was on the phone,
Kabir: Hello! Pia?
Pia: Yes, who is this?
Kabir: I'm someone whom heart you have stolen, Kabir Singh Rathore speaking, I want to meet you
Pia: Sorry wrong number.
Madhu: Who was it?
Pia: No one it was a wrong number..
Kabir calls again and Arnab picked up the phone,
Kabir: Pia ko phone dien
Arnab: Kon?
Kabir: Kabir, her friend
Arnab shocked: Sorry Pia ghar per nahi hai and cuts the phone.
Kabir smiling and thinking i'll make her mine..
Pia is thinking about that guy and is pretty tensed, Madhu comes and asks her then she tells her everything. Madhu says dont tell anyone about this Jeh and everyone is coming tomorrow so try to be normal, ab raat bohut hogaye hai sojao..
Next day, Abhay and his mother arrived and waiting at Airport, Arnab and Chand come to pick them up,
Chand: Where is Jeh?
Abhay: He didn't come, he said he has something important to finish so he didn't come
Chand: Call him, I'll talk to him
Abhay: Oh leave it dad let him do what he wants, CHILL!!
Haseena: Yes Chand let him be it must have been something important.
Arnab too will say ..
Dobriyal House:
Madhu is preparing lunch for them she is looking very happy. Pia is waiting desperately.. Madhu heared the sound of horn realizing that they have arrived Pia rushes down stairs she sees Abhay and thinks of him as Jeh !
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Edited by innocentgal90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2 (Part 2)

Abhay comes near to Pia, Pia blushes Arnab comes and says Pia meet Abhay Jeh's younger brother,

Pia: Oh Abhay, hi.. nice to meet you
Abhay: Hi :), nice to meet you too.

Arnab will introduce Abhay to everyone, Madhu and Haseena embracing each other. After some time Madhu and Haseena went for shopping, Pia comes and says

Pia: Papa.. Call ay thee bootique say my bridal dress is ready or ap log aker pick kerlien.. Mujhey or bhi kuch stuff chahiye.. So i want to go
Abhay listening the whole conversation suddenly he says I'll go with you
chand: Thats a good idea.. :)
Arnab: Lo bhaye.. Problem solved :)

Then they went for shopping... After shopping.. They both comes out from the mall and they were to sit in the car suddenly a land cruiser comes in front of

their car.. Kabir comes out.. Pia looked at him and got scared.. Abhay notices this, he asked her
Abhay: What happened Pia? Do you know him?
Pia: Abhay lets leave
Abhay: But what happened suddenly you are acting strangely
Pia: Abhay please I'll tell you later lets leave for now..
Then they left for home.. After reaching there, Pia goes to her room, Abhay thinks what just happened? Abhi tow she was fine per us insaan ko dekhte he uska

mood off hogaya.. I think I should talk to her..

Then he was going to Pia's room Arnab and Chand sitting there Arnab asks, hey Abhay how was the shopping? Or tumhien yahan k malls kaisay lagay?
Abhay thought abhi baat kerna theek nahi hai I will talk to her later.. Jee uncle, shopping achi rahi and malls b theek thaak thay.
Next morning, after breakfast Abhay was sitting in the garden playing with his guiter(actually he likes to play guiter it is his hobby).. Pia comes there

thinking kia mujhey abhay ko batadainaa chahiye? Then she thought shayad nahi woh kia sochay ga then she was just about to leave abhay saw her and he calls

her name loudly Pia.. Pia who was about to leave turns around and saw him smiling abhay stood up from the chair and comes near her Pia I need to talk to

you.. Please dont misunderstand me, who was that guy? Do you know him? Actually Abhay she narrated the whole story to him... He got furious and said that guy

is such a ba***d. Abhay said Tum nay Arnab uncle ko bataya? She replied nahi Abhay and please dont tell this to anybody its my request..
Abhay: Per Pia..
Pia: Abhay please bas 4 days or phir meri shaadi k baad wo kuch nahi kar payga..
Abhay: Ok.. Per agar koi bhi prb ho tow tum mujhsay share ker saktee ho ok?
Pia(smiles): Sure i will.. Then Pia changed the topic so u like guitering?
abhay: Hmm.. Bohat ziada whenever i feel lonely or feeling happy i use to play guiter:)
Pia: ahaan.. Can you teach me?
Abhay: Sure anytime:)
Pia Smiling Abhay said to her when you smile you look beautiful:) after hearing this Pia said to him so u r trying to flirt with me haan?
Abhay: Flirting no way I m just complementing you :)
Pia: Really per mujhey tow kuch or laga
(then they both laughed whole heartedly)
Abhay: There is a surprise coming for you..
Pia: Suprise?
Abhay: You'll find out soon.. :)
Pia: Hmm.. Dekhte hain
Abhay: Hmm.. Dekho per dekh ker darr mat jana(Abhay lauging)
Pia: (She was about to hit abhay) but abhay ran away.. She was also running behind him.. She was about to reach that place where abhay is..but she sees

someone and it was Jeh.. He is staring at her blankly and said
Jeh: Watchout you could get hurt
Pia: All confused.. I m sorry

Suddenly abhay came hey bro.. Kaisay ho (hugging him) prb tow nahi hui anay mai
Jeh: Nahi per yahan kitna traffic hai or car ka Ac b kaam ni ker raha tha.
Abhay(laughing): Tow acha hai naa issi bahanay apko sightseeing kernay ko mili..
Jeh: Whatever!
Pia listening the conv. and looking at Jeh
Abhay: Oh by the pia thats Jeh bhai and bhai thats Pia
Pia: Hi Jeh
Abhay: Pia mai issi surprise k baray mai baat ker raha tha:)
Pia smiling
Abhay: So do you like my surprise?
Pia(smiling) and she left..
Jeh: Abhay stop this you know I dont like this..
Abhay: What? I was just introducing..
Jeh says his name angrily
Abhay: Sorry bro.. chaloo lets go inside sab ap say milker khush hungay
Jeh: Haan chalo
thn jeh meets everyone pia was also watching him... pia wants to talk with jeh but it seems that he is not interested in talking to her..
Next morning, after breakfast abhay sitting near the swimming pool and playing with his guiter pia came there
Abhay: Hey piya i want to kiss ur hand
Pia: (confused) what?
Abhay: Aray you made really tasty breakfast i really like it
Pia: (shyly) thanks
Abhay: Waisay you r luking beautiful today
Pia: thanks
Abhay: Agar tum bro ki fiance na hotee tow i might marry you(teasing pia n winked at her)
Pia: pia feels shy she laughed n pushed abhay n he falls into swimming pool and pia is laughing so as abhay..
Abhay: Flirting kernay ki itnee baree saza(laughing)
Pia laughed n abhay usper b panii phenkta hai.. jeh watching all this and went somewhere else..

In the evening chand jeh ko pia k saath shopping per janay ko bolte hain apna groom dress lainay k liyee at first jeh argued per usko janay parta hai he was

being quiet the whole journey pia wants to talk but it seems that jeh wasnot interested..

Then woh log shopping kernay lagte hain jeh does not seem interested he was buzy in attending phone calls ye sab dekh ker pia thought
Pia: dono bhai ek dusre say kitne different hain...ek taraf abhay hai jo sab ki khushi ka khayaal rakhta hai..or ek taraf jeh...
Jeh awaaz daitaa hai, Hey piaa.. Pia, hmm han? He said kia huaa kahan khoye hui ho? Nothing.. she picked up a dress and asks jeh how is it? He was about to

answer her but his phone starts ringing..
Jeh(on phone): Hello can u hear me? 1 sec bahar ja ker baat kerta hun yahan signals nahi hain i think
Pia feeling sad woh dress mirror mai dekhtee hai or sochtee hai shud i buy this one.. She heared someone's voice anything would look good on you my love pia

looks behind her, it was kabir and she got scared..
Pia: Akhir tumhrey prb kia hy plzz leave me alone
Kabir: chor he toh nahi saktaa
Pia: What do you want?
Kabir: I want you..
Pia: Shut up.. dekhoo plzz yahan say chalay jao mery fiance nay dekhlia toh kia sochayga
KAbir:acha hy naa hamrey raste ki deewar khud he hat jayegee
Pia:plzz..yahan say chalay jao..
Kabir: chala jaongaa per tumko mujhsay milna hoga on sunday
Pia: sunday..usdin meri shaadi hai..
KAbir: mai tumara intizaar kerunga agr tum ni aye toh us ka anjaam tum soch bhi nahi saktee n he leaves
Pia got scared then suddenly jeh comes and ask her woh admi kon tha piya jo tumsay baat ker raaha tha
Pia:koi ni jeh some stranger
Jeh: r u sure?
Pia: haan

Then they leave for home...
Finally the day has come which they were all waiting, (The wedding)
Arnab: jaldii kero tumlog aj meri beti ki shaadi hy koi kami nahi rehni chahiyee from evening guests will start coming and ussay pehlay i want everything

ready..
MAdhu: Arnab calm down sab ho jaygaa
Arnab:smiling

Pia is thinking what should I do? Shall I talk to Abhay? ..per aj k din nahi mai kia kerun.. Main kabir say milnay nahiin jaskatee.. Suddenly her phone rang

she picked it up pia tum arhee ho na, said kabir.
Pia: Mai nahi aongee samjhey tum, she cuts the phone
Kabir:ye tum nay acha nahi kia pia you'll have to pay for it..

After 1 hour Dobriyal house mai 1 parcel ataa hai jeh raichand k name say jeh parcel laita hai n jab woh envelope kholta hai and it has some pictures of

kabir n pia. Ye dekh ker jeh is thinking about mall scene.. He thought she is such a bi**h abhay k saath b flirt kerna chatee hai or is larkay k saath b or

na jany kitne larkay hungay iski life mai. ye shaadi I will not marry that b***h, I need to talk to dad about this..
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Here is the update, sorry Pari.gupta late hogaya cause lyt nahi thi.. Please guys if u like it then hit like and do comMent :)
Edited by innocentgal90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum...loved the update...Thanks 4 pm...Is kabir negative here...Love Abhay...cONTINUE SOON...WAITING 4 aBHIYA MARRIAGE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@zoozoo Thanks and yes kabir is negative here
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice pdate plz add me in pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update soon plz add me to ur pm list. Abhiya's marriage 😍😍

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