FF: LIFE After u!!!!!!!!! part 16 updated(page 77)

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GUYS I AM PLANNING TO START A NEW FF😃...AND THIS TIME I WILL COMPLETE IT😆...SO READ THIS PLOT AND REPLAY THAT I SHOULD CONTINUE...?😉


A MAN WALKING IN THE "GRAVED YARD"...ALL ALONE...SLOW BREEZE BLOWING...SNOW ALL OVER THE GROUND AND COVERED SOME OF THE COFFINS!!!!!...HE WALKING STRAIGHT LEAVING FOOT MARKS BEHIND...CAME BETWEEN OF THE YARD...AND BENT DOWN ...PUT A BUNDLE OF FRESH PURPLE ORCHIDS...FRONT OF THE COFFIN...AND A CARD WITH IT..."WITH LOVE ABHAY"

Abhay: i hope u like it...as usual i always come here a put bundles of these..but today was the day u came i my life!!!!!!!

TEARS STARTED TO FALL FROM HIS BLUE LIKE SKY EYES ...FALLING ON CHEEKS...STARTED TO CRY...

Abhay(shouting):Y?...Y DID U LEAVE?...HOW COULD U?...I ALWAYS LOVED AND LOVING U...BUT THEN WHY?...Y DID U MADE ME DO THAT PROMISE?...Y.?...Y?...

HIS PHONE STARTED TO RING...HE PICK UP

Abhay(low voice): yes misha...
Misha: what the hell ABHAY!!!!!!!...WHERE R U...?...TODAY IS OUR SON 1ST BIRTHDAY!!!!!!
Abhay: My SON BIRTHDAY...his father is coming just meeting his mom...
Misha: He is also my son...
Abhay: i told u 100 times!!!!!!!!!!!...i don't want to talk about this again!!!!!

HE HAND-UP THE PHONE...HE STARTED TO TRACE HIS FINGER ON THE COFFIN PLATE...AND STARTED TO WALK AWAY...TOOK FEW STEPS AND TURNED AROUND LOOKING AT THE COFFIN...

Abhay: i m sorry.i follow half of ur promise...and other half...i can't be happy without u...

HE WALKED AWAY...A OLD WOMEN HEARD WHAT EVER SAID AND CAME TO THAT COFFIN...

Old women( to her self): every one dies one day...my son...

ON THE COFFIN IT WAS WRITTEN...

"MS.PIA RICHAND...REST IN PEACE..R.I.P"!!!!!!!!!!!!

INDEX:

PART1:
PART2:
PART3:
PART4:
PART5
PART6
PART7:
PART8
PART9
PART10
PART11
PART13
PART14
PART 15
PART 16
OTHER OS
TRUE DESIRE:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh God thts thrilling.Plzzz cont.Oh I had tears I hope Pia is still alive😳
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awesome.. plz continue... nd thanx for pm
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Oh God thts thrilling.Plzzz cont.Oh I had tears I hope Pia is still alive😳



THANXX!!!!!!!!!!!...U R NEAR!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg piya dead! I hope she is alive. Do continue..
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Originally posted by: piya_abhay_love

awesome.. plz continue... nd thanx for pm


THANX!!!! FOR LIKING I..AND UR WELCUM!!!!!!!!😃
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Originally posted by: peehu24

omg piya dead! I hope she is alive. Do continue..


THANX!!!!!!!! FOR LIKING!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice updt.continue n pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
pm me
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wow, the summary was chilling. I hope piya is alive. Without piya, there is no abhay! do PM me when you update😊
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