FF: LIFE After u!!!!!!!!! part 16 updated(page 77) - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

528

Views

61.1k

Users

64

Likes

467

Frequent Posters

Fearless_Lover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#51
nice update... i m excited
iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: madhuri16

i just read yrs..n its very interesting!!!! thnaku!!!😊

so abhay believes pia 2 be dead yes!...but is she really dead???? right now yes!
n is jeh searching 4 pia???just w8...wats misha doing with him??? with whom?
pls do continue soon...n pm me..i would luv 2 read!!!thanks for liking and sure😛

iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: anukrati

AWESOME DEAR OMG PIA IS DEAD PM ME PLS WHEN U UPDATE CONTINUE SOON


thanks !!!!!! and sure!!!😛
iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: luckdiya

nice update... i m excited

thanks!!!!😊
iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: priya.1

pia is alive???? how come abhay never knew it???? i feel really bad for abhay... he is missing pia so much.. plz make abhiya meet soon...

continue soon...


just w8 and keep reading!!!!😳
iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#56
GUYS AFTER READING THIS U MIGHT THROW TOMATOES AND ONIONS ON ME😆...BUT JUST KEEP READING ...😆😳

PART2:
Alina was driving her car then she saw that she was passing by graved yard...so she planned to see pia's coffin before eaching home...she parked her car and enter...she was walking suddenly her foot came under her foot and sliped ...she felt on a old women who was putting some flowers one of the coffin...as they both felt on snow...alina face was coverd with snow as she rub her eyes women saw that and shouted

Old women: PIA!!!!!
Alina: no no!!! i m alina(moving snow over her face)
Old women: oh yes!!!!(looking at her face)...ur face don't match with her except ur eyes!!!!!
Alina:after all who sister she was...every one said that ours match but...only Abhay found the differnet my eyes were same as other but when he saw PIA'S eyes he wouldn't stop describing .
Old women: so u knew it whom i was talking about?
Alina: very well...he is the one who always come here and spent time...and u take care with ur husband her coffin after he leave
Old women: he never gaved a chance...
Alina: i was just coming for other city by road so throught y not see pia coffin before going to home.

ALINA WENT TO PIA'S COFFIN PRAYED FOR HER AND LEFT FOR HER HOME
...

RICHAND'S MANSION...
ABHAY WOKE UP BY THE CRIES OF HIS SON ...HE PICKED HIM IN HIS HAND LIKE A DELICATED PIEACE OF GLASS..THE LAST MARK OF HIS LOVE,HE DIDN'T WONT HIM TO FACE SMALLEST TO SMALLEST PAIN...

Abhay: abhi...come on don't cry see ur dad here...w8 u must be hungry ...

ABHAY PICKED A BOTTLE OF MILK AND PLACED ON HIS MOUTH...HE WAS DRINK AND SMILING

Abhay: ur smile is just like ur mom...(he smiled a little) lets play

ABHAY STARTED PLAYING WITH HIM...HE SMILING AND LAUGHING ...ABHAY COULDN'T STOP SMILING...

ABHAY: abhi u r hand some as ur dad( pointing towards himself)...when u will grow up girls will dig u as they dig me...but ur are lucky u r free...and me i m capture by for fairy mother...

ABHI STARTED LAUHING LOUDLY

Abhay: excuse me... ur mom is one and only beauitful person on this planet in my eyes...and ur too!!

ABHI SHAKED HIS HEAD AS A SIGN OF YES!!!AND SMILE...

Abhay: look pia ur son also agree with me...after all he is my and ur son(smiling)

HE LOOKED BESIDE HIM ,THEN REALIZED THAT SHE IS NOT WITH THEM ...HE PICKED A PHOTO-FRAME OF PIA...LOOKING AT HER

Abhay: pia i m trying but i can't help it...i love u i love pia ilove u!!!!!!!!!

LOOking at his son and smiled with his (but in his heart he was crying terribly)

Abhay:u better get ready for birthday champ...

HE WENT TOWARDS THE CUPBORAD LEAVING PHOTOFRAME ON BED...AS HE WAS TAKING OUT THE CLOTHES...ABHAI TROW THE MILK AWAY AND PICKED UP THE PHOTO FRAME AND STARTED KISSING IT...ABHAY TURNED AND LOOK AT THAT MOMENT...THAN ABHAI SPOKE "MAA-MA-MA-AA"...ABHAY SURPPORT HIM SELF WITH THE CUPBORAD AND TEARS MADE THEIR WAY...HAEESNA WAS WATCHING THIS AND PUT HAND ON ABHAY'S SHOULDER...ABHAY TURNED AROUND...HASEENA SAW HER SMALL BOY IN SO MUCH PAIN,WOUND WILL NEVER GO...THEN ABHAY WENT TO HIS SON AND STARTED PLAYING WITH HIM,HASEENA WAS ENJOYING FATHER AND SON LOVE...BUT SOMETHING WAS GOING IN HER MIND...SHE LEFT.
...
ALINA IN HER CAR,DRIVING...

Alina(thinking): y pia? y did u leave him and ur son here they need u badly...abhay beg u to come back...he tries to run from this truth...and he even tried to suicde 18 to 20 times!!!!!!...i still remmeber the 1st time u and me and ofcourse our family came here...

...Flash back...
ALINA AND PIA WAS WALKING TO THE UNVERTIES ...IT WAS THEIR FIRST DAY AT THE UNIVERSITIES...

Pia: i miss my old place y did dad had to be transfere here!!
Alina : come on i was bored there...new place,new started and who knows some one comes on horse for u...and make a place in ur heart!!...what do u think pia?
Pia:Romance bird..r u done with ur diagoles?...we r getting late!
Alina: yeah right...

AS THEY WERE WALKING ALINA SAW A CROWD WAS GRATHER ON GROUND SHE FORCE PIA TO SEE WHAT IS GOING ON AS THEY ENTER IN THE CROWD THEY SAW HORSE RACING ...SUDDENLY ONE OF THE HORSE RIDER CAME RUNNING LEAVING EVERYONE BEHIND ON BROWN HORSE WITH WHITE HAIRS...HE WINS THE RACE AND EVERYONE STARED TO RUN TOWARD HIM,LEAVING PIA AND ALINA BEHIND...THE BOY TOOK OUT HIS CAP AND GLASSES,THROWING INTO THE CROWD AND WAVING...

Alina: look ur dream prince have arrive...
Pia: shut up...
Alina: who is he?
A voice: ABHAY RICHAND...

PIA AND ALINA TURNED AROUND...SAW A BOY WITH SPIKES AND office SHIRT SMILING...

Jeh: me jeh...JEH KURANA and that boy on that horse is my best friend...beloging to the richest family of this city..MR.ABHAY RICHAND"...
Pia: oh!
Jeh: and what r ur names lovely?
Pia: pia dorbiyal
Alina: and her elder sister Alina dorbiyal...
Jeh: u r new here right?
Alina : yes!

JEH AND ALINA KEPT TALKING...PIA WAS JUST SYARRING AT ABHAY...SOON ABHAY REALIZED AND LOOKED AT HER ,SHE MOVED AWAY...

Pia: alina lets go we are getting late...
Alina: pia y r u blushing?...
Pia: ALINA!
Jeh: may i show ur class room ?
Pia: yes plzz...

THEY WENT AWAY FROM THE GROUND...

...

PRECAP:

JEH: U IDIOTS...!!!!!!!! U CAN'T DO ANYTHING RIGHT...
A MAN: WE WILL FIND HER BEFORE HIM!!
JEH: YEAH U BETTER FIND PIA!!!!!
Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
adnilover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#57
That was alina😭. I thought it will be piya. Please bring her back soon na. I want her to meet abhay again soon and her son. BTW, abhi is really cute
continue soon!
sweety_crazed thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#58
so u made a twist...interesting!!!..alina is piya's sis!!!
i feel so bad 4 abhay poor him!!..wish he finds his luv back!!!
is jeh good here??...so piya is alive n he is in search 4 her!!!!
conti soon n thnx 4 d pm😊
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
Fearless_Lover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#59
nice yaaar .👏 plz update soon
--Rose-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Ooo she was Alina:-( i thought pia:-(:-(:-(... THE UPDATE IS JUS AWESOME:-) Waiting 4 the next.,..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".