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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update piya lost her memory so now waiting 4 abhiya meeting soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Great update iqra...! Clap clap
so piya hs lost hr memory ?
Aww...abhi s soo...sweet...n 'mama ' ws very cute...!
Hope abhaiya will meet soon...

want to see piya-abhi bond n d nxt update...

Update asap...
Tcr...
N Happy New Year...

-indu
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update so pia lost here memory.How Abhay will react whn he'll come across Pia.So plzz cont.Oh Pia finally met her son.Gud
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww.pia lost her memory but how.meet abhay and pia soon.i am wating to read next ch.great work
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 7:
ABHAY SITTING ON THE SOFA...KABIR WAS BUSSY WITH THE PHONE...

Kabir: what ever u do i need that child!!!...did u hear me i need
that child!!!!
Abhay: i can't belive it!
Kabir(hang the phone): nothing will happen to him!!!!
Abhay: i m a careless father!!!..i lost my son..if pia was here
...she would never forgive me!...never!
Kabir:ABHAY!!!!...if pia was here...this would never happen...she
would take care of ur son...look the effects having a baby with no
shadow mother!!!!!!
Abhay: abhi!!
Kabir(sitting beside him): abhay...if pia was her she will never
blam u ...know y? ...becoz u r a father who is all the time ready
to give his life for his son...a husband who is all ready giving
punshiment to himself!!!!!...nothing will happen to him...
Abhay: hmmm

ABHAY CLOSED HIS EYES!!!!
...Flash back...

IT WAS NIGHT AND ABHAY SAW PIA GOING ALL ALONE...HE CAME TO
HER...

Abhay: so?...miss lovely whole day u were in the collage...with
those miserable,heartless...creepy scary...
Pia: books!!!!!...yes i was with those books..
Abhay: reall!..how can u bear them?...
Pia: i need to go abhay its late!
Abhay: let me drop u...going alone is dangerous!
Pia: no!!...i will go alone
Abhay: fine!

PIA AND ABHAY LEFT IN DIFFENERT DIRECTIONS!!!...SUDDENLY SOME
DRUNK BOYS SPOT PIA...BUT BEFORE THEY COME TO HER..ABHAY SUDDENLY
APPEARS FROM HER BACK AND PUT HIS HAND ON HER WRIST!!...PIA WAS
HELD SHOCK BUT SHE SOON REALIZED HE WAS SAVING HER...LATER...WHEN
THEY GOT RID OF THEM PIA PUSH HIM...

Pia: u could say it!
Abhay: excuse me miss!!...i was just trying to save by making them
think we r a couple...
Pia: to afraid to fight...
Abhay: they were scared from me...they could have come after looking
at us but still
Pia: what!!

PIA HOLDS HIS HANDS

Pia: drop me home.plzzz
Abhay(little confuse by his feeling when she hold his hands): yeah
sure!!!

...

AFTER FEW DAYS ,ABHAY WAS SITTING IN THE CLASS ROOM ALL ALONE...JEH
CAME..

Jeh: what's wrong?
Abhay: i don't know ...it is pia?...she is torebling me!
Jeh(surprise):really?!?!...now that is not okk!!
Abhay: jeh...not funny...her eyes...her lips her hairs...every
moment when ever she is with me near me...i forget
everything...i think i m started liking her!!!!!!(closing his
eyes)...yeah!!! i m started to like her
Jeh( in his thoughts later came back): c'mon...u and
pia!...really?...she is not ur type...hmmm..u know what i mean
right?
Abhay: i m in love with her!!!!!!!...jeh i m in love with
her!!!!!!!...after SAVING HER FROM THOSE DRUNK GUYS AND THE TIME
WE SPENT TOGETHER...she chanaged me!!!!
Jeh: kk !!!now what?
Abhay: i m going to ask her out!!!!!!

HE WENT AWAY LEAVING HIM BEHIND WITH HIS THOUGHTS AGAIN!!!...
...

IN INDIA,

ALINA WAS SITTING IN HER ROOM AND READING PIA'S DAIRY...

PIA'S POV<,
"AFTER LOOKING AT ABHAY I WAS LOST,I DON'T KNOW WHAT GOT OVER ME I
COULDN'T STOP LOOKING AT HIM!! HIS EYES,HIS SMILE HIS LAUGH,HIS
HAIR,HIS FACE ...HE KEPT TEASING ME ALL THE TIME AND I REACT THAT
I WAS BEING TEASED BUT SOME WHERE I WAS ENJOYING THIS,AFTER HE SAVED
ME FROM THOSE BOYS I STARTED TO FELT PROTECTED WHEN HE WAS NEAR
ME!!!...WE HAD BECAME FRIENDS...AND OUR RELATION GREW UP...ONCE
AND THE PROMNIGHT WHEN HE ASK ME OUT I DIDN'T SAY NO!!

ALINA SMILED A LITTLE...


"WE HAD A BLAST,FULL TIME FUN,BUT AFTER THE PARTY HE TOOK ME TO A
CLASS ROOM,AND HE ASKED ME OUT...I COULDN'T FORGET THOSE
WORDS:PIA...PIA I M ...I M IN LOVE WITH...WITH U!!!!!...I COULDN'T
UNDERSTAND HOW TO REACT...A PLACE I WAS SUPER HAPPY BUT ON OTHER
HAND I COULD NOT DESTORY HIS LIFE, I SAID NO! SMIPLY NO!...

TEARS STARTED COMING OUT FROM HER ALINA EYES...

"BUT HE DIDN'T STOP,HE PUSHED ME ON THE WALL...AND SAID U DON'T
FEEL ANYTHING WHEN I COME NEAR U...WITH MY HEAVY HEART NO!...THEN
HE PLACED HIS LIPS ON MY SHOULDER,NOW? HE ASK..I KEPT QUITE..LATER
HE MOVED ON MY NECK...KISSED ME ON MY FOREHEAD,ON MY CHECKS AND ON
EACH EYE...BEFORE HE COULD TOUGH HIS LIPS ON MINE HE SAW TEARS
COMING OUT FROM MY EYES HE PULL HIM SELF BACK...SORRY HE SAID AND
TURNED AROUND...BUT WITHOUT LEAVING A SECONDS I HUG HIM BEHIND...I
HAD LOST FRONT OF HIM...HE HAD WON THE BATTLE...I WAS
SQUEEZING MY SELF ...HE TURNED AND HUG HIM AGAIN...,"so y did u
rejected first?...i knew u love me then y?"he said ," i love u
...but i can't ruin ur life abhay!!!"...i said with my crying
heart.."what do u mean" he asked..."welll...abhay i m a
...a...cancer pantient!!!"...his eyes were not binking...he was
freeze for a moment...then smile..." u dum girl..having a cancer
doesn't mean u are not allowed to live a happy life...u have a
right u live an beauitful life with me...""but abhay...i will
die"..."u might die with me...but without me u 100% GOING TO
die...and i will never let u die!!!!"

ALINA: U ALWAYS HAD RIGHT PIA AND ABHAY HAVE GIVEN TO U...

...
IN LOS ANGLES,

ABHAY WAS LOOKING OUT SIDE OF THE WINDOW...KABIR CAME FROM
BEHIND..

Kabir: dude i found abhi...a girl had regertier a complain was
loosing a boy with the same photo...i have given them urs and
mine number...
Abhay: yeah...
Kabir: abhay u have to be strong i can't look u in this
condition...
Abhay:yeah...
Kabir: well i m going to check...

...flash back...
RICHAND'S MANSION...

Sid: really?...u r going to marry a girl who have a
cancer...c'mon...!!!
Abhay: i will going to marry her!!!
Sid: go ahead destroy ur life...
Panchi: abhay sid is right...
Sid i m right!!!
Haseena: nooo...stop this if abhay thinks pia is the girl then
pia is the girl for our family!!!!...
Sid: but mom!
Haseena: how many day she could live...i m worried but we will fix
this ...that final...
Sid: fine!!!!
...
AT MORNING IN UNIVERSALITY
ABHAY BRING A RING FOR PIA AND HAD PLAN TO PROMOES HER...HE SAW
PIA SITTING ALONE AND GO TO HER...

ABHAY:PIA!!!
Pia: yes abhay...
Abhay(sitting on his knees): will u marry me!!!
Pia: abhay!...so early...
Abhay: i don't want to loose another second with u!!...i want u be
mine...from every where..
Pia(smiles):well...no!
Abhay: y?!?!?!
Pia: u have to promoes me front of the people of this city!!!
Abhay:that's a challage?
Pia:Yes!

AT NIGHT WHEN PIA WAS AT HOME ALINA CAME AND TOLD HER THAT ABHAY IS
HERE TO MEET HER SHE WENT DOWN...AND OUTSIDE ...SAW ABHAY SITTING
IN THE CAR HE TOLD HER TO SIT WITH HIM HE HAVE A SURPIRSE!!...PIA
WENT WITH ABHAY TO THE HILL IN DRAK GREEN FORSET...

Pia:abhay where r we going?
Abhay: to complete the challage!
Pia:but where?
Abhay: just see

HE TAKES HER TO THE TOP OF THE HILL,WHERE SHE COULD SEE THE WHOLE
CITY lighten,THEN ABHAY AGAIN WENT TO HIS KNEES...

Abhay: now! will u marry me?...look i promoed u front of the city
Pia: yes!!!...oh my god abhay!!!
Abhay: just for u!!

ABHAY AND PIA THEN HAD THEIR FIRST KISS...THEY SUCKING,LAUGHING
KISSING EACH OTHER,THEY COULD TASTE SALTY TEARS ...BEHIND JEH CAME
ALL CONFUSED...THEY SAW HIM...PIA GOT SHY AND DUG HER SLF IN IN
ABHAY...WHILE ABHAY WAS SMILING AT JEH...

Jeh: i thuoght...u were in danger as u were runing..
Abhay: i just asked her out that will she marry me and she said
yes!!!
Jeh:oh!... congrats panther!
Abhay: what r u doing here?
Jeh : passing by!!!
...

PERCAP:

ABHAY GETS SHOCK SEEING PIA WITH HIS SON!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing dr!!!!

finally dey had found abhai.. cool i loved d flashback part... dere life was so gud at dat point!!!!
i just wonder what jey did with pia??? i hate him 4 what he did...😡
waiting 4 d next part... finally abhay is going 2 meet pia!!! i m really exited about it...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww... LOVELY update dear:-):-):-) ... AWESOME:-):-):-) ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo swt dear... plz update soon... i m waitinggg
flashbck ws awesome... pia hd cancer...🥺 oh !!!!!!! soo sad
precap is exciting
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey awesome update..loved the flashbacks..!
precap sounds interesting..do continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome update! I loved it..the flashback part was so sweet..their lives seemed! That jeh ruined everything! So abhi is found..cant wait for abhiya to come face to face!

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