FF: LIFE After u!!!!!!!!! part 16 updated(page 77) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept continue soon & add me 2 ur pm list
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nyc story !!!!!!cntinue soonnn and pls pm me tooo
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thnx for d pm
gr8t ff
cont soon
felt sorry to know pia is dead
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part 1:
ABHAY WAS WALKING TOWARD HIS CAR...SUDDENLY HE HEARD SOME IS
CALLING HIM,HE LOOKED BEHIND HIM AND SAW A OLD WOMEN COMING TOWARD
HIM...HE STARTED TO WALK TOWARD HER

Abhay: yes?...
Old women: son i think this wallate belongs to u...

SHE PASSES THE WALL-ATE TO HIM

Abhay: oh yes...thank u
Old women: ur wife is beauitful...i saw her photo in ur wallate...
Abhay: she WAS beautiful...
Old women: Don't say she was ...she IS...if u can't see someone
from ur eyes then see through ur heart u will find her...
Abhay: my heart die at that same movement when i hold her lifeless
body...

ABHAY STARED TO CRY...

Abhay: i don't want to live this life...i don't want to
Old women: u love her that much?
Abhay: more than anything exist
Old women: if u really badly love her and if she is ur ture love
,she would never leave u in this condition...she would turn my
son..she would...just hold ur horses...
Abhay: yeah i hope...
....
ABHAY REACH HOME ...HE ENTER IN HIS ROOM SAW MISHA SITTING ON HIS SOFA...

Misha: i hope u had a good time with ur wife...
Abhay: what r u doing here?
Misha: i was waiting for u ...today is abhi birthday...so many
perpartion are left and u... sitting in spooky graved yard...
Abhay: stop it!!!!!!!!...what do u know?... nothing!!!!...any
way who had intivated u?
Misha:aunty!!!!!!... Abhi is my son...i took care as my son...
Abhay:oh plzzz... as soon Abhi starts to understand world the
first thing he would know that his mom is die !!!!! leaving us in
this useless world...
Misha: y do u want to destory his life?
Abhay: i know what i m doing...i know how to take care of son i
don't need to leaern from u!!!! i want him 2 know truth...i want
him to know that he hasn't have a shadow of his mom over him...it
is much to have him known the truth except telling him that he have
a women who is so call mom!!!!!!!!!

ABHAY TRIED TO STOP HIS TEARS...

Misha: till when?...abhay u will understand she is gone and u have
a whole life in front of u...
Abhay: i don't care...i was going to suicde..i stop becoz of my
son..my and only my son...my and pia son...i am living becoz of
him and DON'T U DARE ENTER IN MY OR MY SON LIFE...WE R MUCH BETTER
WITHOUT U!!!!!!...U HAVE ALSO HAVE A long life in front of u
then why r u wasting ur time here...
Misha: i care for u!!!
Abhay: don't...leave my room now...
Misha: but ABHA...
Abhay: now!!!!!!!!

MISHA LEFT THE ROOM...ABHAY LIED ON HIS BED ...SUDDENLY HE HEARS
HIS SON CRIES...HE RUN TO His son's LITTLE BED AND PICK HIM STARTED
TO MAKE HIM QUITE...HIS MOM,HAEESNA WAS STARRING AT HIM ...

Haeesna(to herself): plzz god do anything...plzz be nice i beg u i
can't see my son in this condition...plzzz do anything...plzzz do
anything...

HAEENA LEFT...ABHAY MADE HIS LIE HIM ON THE AND LIED BESIDE
HIM...HE MADE HIM SLEEP AND FEW MINUTES HE ALSO WENT SLEEP...BEFORE
GOING HE THOUGHT: SOME PLACE IN MY HEART I THINK U WILL TURN BUT IF
U HAD TO TURN... "U WOULD HAVE TURN A LONG TIME AGO..."
...

IN AIRPORT...
JEH KURANA TALKING TO MISHA...

Jeh: mish...there are 3 hrs left before the party start i am coming
do worry...
Misha: yeah u better cum...!!!
Jeh: i will talk u later...

JEH SITS IN HIS CAR AND DAIL A NUMBER...

Jeh: did u found anything
A voice: no! sir...i m trying
JEH: WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!...i year is passed and u haven't found
anything ?!!!
A voice: i m trying...
Jeh: u r useless...

HE HANG UP THE PHONE..

Jeh(thinking): what will i do these stupid ppl can't DO ANYTHING
RIGHT!!!!!!!
...

RICHANDS OFFICE...
SID SITTING AND SOME ONE KNOKS THE DOOR...IT WAS PANCHI...

Sid: my lovely wife come in...u shouldn't have knok the door...
Panchi: wait a minute knoking door is the work of her
only...right?
Sid:who?
Panchi: miss ruby...shory shrit and red lips...

SID STARED TO LAUGH

Sid: do u think a girl will dig on a man who has a dangerous birdie
wife and father of 2 kids?
Panchi:yes!!!!!!!!!!
Sid: bingo!!!!...ur answer is right...i m so hot that girls can't
stop it!!!!
Panchi: if u r done admiring ur self think about ur brother,abhay
...we need to find him a girl he is to young... he can't waste his
life in darkness...he and abhi need someONE support abhay need to
marry...again!!!!
sid: yeah right!!!!...he would have listen...i told him not to
fall over pia but he won't listen...look he is trap..
Panchi:he loves her madly!!!!
Sid: then what on the earth do u think he will marry again?...mom
wants Misha to marry him...and ur sister is ready to marry and
take place of PIA!!!!!!!...but abhay wont let this happen...i
told him not to fall for her...i told him...pia had cancer and
one day it would take her life and WALA!!!!!!!!!!...
Panchi: POOR pia!!!!!

Percap:

in the graved yard a girl suddenly fall over that old women and when that old women saw her she shouts..PIA!!!!!!!

Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
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awesome update.. thanx for pm...
Edited by piya_abhay_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am so relieved. Piya is alive. But poor abhay, he is all alone and he doesnt know that piya is alive. I hope he finds out soon and I hope abhi is able to accept piya as his mother
liked the first update! continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update..i feel bad for abhay..poor him..he is broken..so piya is alive i guess..hope abhiya meet soon enough

Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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SUPERB SUPERB SUPERB UPDATE DEAR:-):-):-) YE PIA IS ALIVE:-):-) FEELING BAD FOR ABHAY:-(:-(:-(... Cant wait 4 next part... Plz update soon ok... Thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for d pm
gr8t awesome updt
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc part⭐️⭐️eagerly w8ng 4 next part ...n thanks 4 pm😛

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