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anukrati19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE .sorry for late reply really nice update arnab find truth hope jeh is soon reviled update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Great update iqra..!!!
So piya is feeling a strng pull towards him...!! Bt she s tryng to ignore it...nd on the othr hand abhay s tryng hs best to cntrol hs emotions...!!
Arnab knws tht piya s alive...
So wht wil happn nw? Will piya get hr memory back?
And wht will jay do,aftr he gets to knw abt piya??
Hahaha...Sorry..i knw m askng questns lik piya...bt m super xcitd...!!! :-p

plz continue soon..
Thx for the pm..
Tcr..

-indu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay,cn u pls pm me for both ur ffs.loved them both.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx for d pm
awesome gr8t loved it
cont soon
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PART 11:
 PIA AND ABHY WERE ABOUT TO KISS EACH TOHER BUT THAT MOMENT...KABIR 
VOICE CAME HE WAS LOOKING FOR ABHAY...ABHAY STOOD..HE WAS ABOU TO 
LEAVE WHEN PIA STOP HIM BY GRABING HIS HAND

Pia: abhay!
Abhay:yes!
Pia:can we be friends?
Abhay(looking at her in shock...later):sure...

LATER ABHAY WENT BACK TO THE PARTY!!!!!!!!PIA ENTER LATER SHE WENT 

TO HER FRIENDS AND ABHAY WAS BUSSY WITH HIS CLEINTS..THEY TRY TO 
Ignore EACH OTHER THEN AGAIN THEIR GAZE MET EACH OTHER...LATER 
THE PARTY ENDED...EVERYONE LEFT ABHAY WAS IN PARKINGLOT WHERE HE 
SAW PIA HAVING PROBLEM WITH HER CAR HE WENT TO HER...PIA SAW HIM 
AND SMILED...

Abhay: any problem?
Pia:well yes...my car is not starting...
Abhay(going front of her car):let me check...

LATER AFTER CHECKING...

Abhay:ur engine is jumed or something else as broken down...i 
better drop u...at moring we can fix it!!
Pia:i will go my own abhay thanxs for help..
Abhay:no pia...at this time going alone is not save...i will drop 
u...atleast that much i can do for u as a friend
Pia: sure

...

ABHAY AND PIA WERE QUITETLY SITTING GOING PIA HOUSE...THEN PIA 
BREAKS THE silent 

Pia:so?..where is ur son?
Abhay:one of my friends house..
Pia:what is his name?...well i called abhi it ..it's...
Abhay:bingo...that's the answer...abhi...
Pia:really?!?!...wow!..u know i also want to have a son name 
abhi...just like urs.. 
Abhay(shock):well..pia wanted the same thing...
Pia:well...me and pia thinkng,feeling r same...right?

ABHAY STARRED AT HER...AND MOVE HIS GAZE...away!!

Abhay(thinking):u just like her...pia...pia...
Pia:hey...
ABhay:yeah u r right...
Pia:and my house is there...
ABhya:okay...

ABHAY STOPS THE CAR...PIA COMES OUT TURN TOWARDS HIM

Pia:tHANKS!!!
Abhay:no pro...
Pia :see u later then...

PIA WENT INSIDE ABHAY WAS THERE LOOKING AT HER HOUSE LATER HE 
LEFT...took abhi from his friends house and went back to his 
house...on his way

 Abhay:what is going on with me?...abhay control urself...she is 
not ur pia...she is to different...ur pia was was 
simple..s.weet...so delicated...so beaiulful...just like fairy an 
angle...my love...abhay!!...she is not ur pia...she is a fashion 
...into boys type...she care about care about her career...she is 
not ur pia!!...(taking a sigh)how can i juged her?...i don't know 
anything about her...i can't say anything about from looking...y 
my heart his not listening..me and her..no!..no!no!...i can't 
replace my pia from her...(looking at his son...sleeping)..i m all 
messed up...i don't know what to do?

...
JASWALS
 PIA ENTER SMILING BEACUSE OF ABHAY...SHE SAW HER DAD...PERVEEN 
JASWAL TALKING TO SOME ONE...

Mr.jawal:did u here me!..i m the perveen jaswal...and u have no 
idea what i m going to do...if i didn't get that car for my 
daughter for her brithday...i promise...u better try...

HE CUTS OFF..AND SEE PIA STANDING SMILING...HE ALSO SMILE PIA WENT 
TO HUG HIM

pIA:DAD!
Mr.jaswal:my princess...what did u took so long?...any problem had 
occur?
Pia:no dad..not that serious
Mr.jasawl"pia..i m ur dad any problem tell me i will solve in 
minutes..u know...i can do anything for my daughter !!!
Pia:that y i love u dad!
Mr.jaswal:u must be tried..go get some sleep
Pia:u won't ask me about my show
Mr.jaswal:well i seen all in television..and it was u..so show had 
to go amazing...awsome..
pia:dad!
Mr.jaswal:go get some slepp meet in moring...

PIA TURNED AND ABOUT TO LEAVE BUT HER STOP IT

Mr.jawasl:pia!
Pia:yes...
Mr.jaswal:still u r getting those dreams...
Pia:oh...hmm..yes...
Mr.jaswal:oh!!
Pia:it is like...like...um hmmm..its like i m remmbering my 

pas...it is like my past is coming back...but i can't see those 
dreams clearly..i only hear a girl scearming...fire...a man 
shouting...calling...i don't hear that clear...
Mr.jawasl:well...um..it is ur dearm darling...yes ur dream...
Pia:i know..but then i think else and to say that i had..
Mr.jawasl:close this topic...go rest..i told the turth go rest!
Pia:fine good night dad...

SHE GIVES HIM A GOOD NIGHT KISS ON HIS FACE AND LEFT...MR.JASWAL 
SIT ON COUCH

Mr.jaswal: when will this all going to end...i m tried...her 

dreams...her sceams at night and taking that name in night during 

slepping...this will ruin everything..that name ABHAY!...she 

scearms at his name...speaks his name again and again...i brought 

her far away from him from everyone...i wish abhay never see her 

again...i still remmber that night...when i found u...

...flash back...

PIA RUNING IN WOODS SCEARMING FOR HELP.. AS SHE WAS RUING SHE CAME 
ON ROAD AND SAW A CAR COING IN SPEED..IT HITS HER FLYING...DOWN FAR 
FROM THAT CAR...HER HEAD WAS BLEEDIN...SHE TOOK LAST 
NAME...ABHAY BEFORE SHE FAINTED...CAR OWER COMES NOT...IT WAS 
MR.JASWAL...HE SEE HER

Mr.jaswal:oh poor thing...i better take her to hospitial !!!

THEY REACHED TO HOSPITAL..AFTER A LONG WAIT DOCTOR CAME OUT

Mr.jaswal:is she ok?
Doctor:she not of danger but...
Mr.jaswal:but what doc?...what?
Doctor:she as losen her memories...checking her she had just bron a 
child...few hrs go...she was in very bad condition..i really feel 
bad...and i know her husband feel the same..
Mr.jaswal:when will she wake up..
Doctor: after a long time...that time she won;t know that she have 
bron a child...all th effects will be gone...
Mr.jaswal :fine
Doctor:may i know ur realationship..
Mr.jaswal:well i m her ...her dad...
Doctor:so u must know what had happen right?
Mr.jaswal:well...her husband...my son-in-law died...later my grand 
son died when she born it and she couldn't handle so she try to 
kill her Self...yeah!
Doctor:oh...poor her..well now take a good care of her ...
Mr.jaswal:oh..yes...

...flash back ends...

Mr.jaswal:pia i brought u here when u were in deep sleep...and when 
u woke up..u remmeber little...i wanted a daughter..my own daughter 
died in young age with my wife...in aircrash...i was all 
alone...after seening u planned to make u my daughter my 
pia...while u were her i had went to check ur ture idenity and i 
was hell shock to see that u were a member of a richest 
family...rich more then me...u were the richands daughter in 
law...i was scared to lose my daughter agin..so i erased my 
connection with that city...and i shift here ...i have an eyes on 
richands...i don't know were their son abhay is gone..but where 
ever he is...he is far far away from pia!!!... 

...

INDIA

RICHANDS AND DORBIYALS IN THE HOSPITAL

Mr.richand:now can u tell me that how is pia alife?
Mr.dorbiyal:well...my and pia blood group is same right
Alina:yes
Mr.dorbiyal:before we buroed pia body..the doctor took her blood 
sample...which does not match with mine!!!!
Mahdu:what!!!
Mr.dorbyails"yes...and now sooner or later docrtor will bring the 
repotrs...
Sid:about what?
doctor(coming towards them):about that it is not her body...this 
repot say the body was burned to2hr ago and pia was burned just for 
10 to 15 minutes...she is not pia
Mr.dorbyal:and they also found the video made by cc carmra...pia 
was been kinapped..the face was not clear but this was clear fire 
was put and that man carried pia..
Haseena:so my poor pia is alife..oh pia...

BEHIND POLICE ARRIVES

pOLICE OFFICER:he is right pia could be alive that body his some on 
else we r trying to figur out that...
Haseena:i need to tell tihs to abhay!!
Sid:no mom...this will tourble him more...and any way i ask his 
friend kabir ...he told he is normal...when we found out more 
about pia,,it will be much better..we won't tell 
anyone...anyone...not even jeh...
Haseena:y?
Sid:i have a doubt!!!!

...

LOS ANGLES 

 ABHAY CAME OUT FROM BATHROOM..IN HIS JEANS WITH TOWEL ON HIS 
NECK...HIS CHEST WAS EXPOSED...THEN SOME ONE RING THE BELL...ABHAY 
WENT DOWN...MAKING SURE ABHI HAVEN'T WOKE UP...AS HE OPEN IT WAS 
PIA SMILING...

Abhay(shocked):pia...

PIA WAS LOST LOOKING AT HIM...THE HAIRS ON HIS FOREHEAD...WATER 
MOVING ON HIS BODY...SHE FELT WEAK...WARM...ABHAY WAS LOOKING HOT 
TO HER...

Abhay:pia!
Pia(coming back to her sense)abhay!!...um..um(she was so shy...it was hard for her to move her eyes from his hot chest)...i came to meet u...i didn't disturbed u right?...i was just jogging by...soo
Abhay :come in!..let me make u a coffee...
pIA:SURE

PIA WENT INTO KITCHEN WITH ABHAY...ABHAY GOT ALL BUSSY MAKING COFFEE PIA WAS STANDING BESIDE

Pia:where is abhi?...sleeping?
Abhay:yup!!

THEN HOT WATER FELL ON ABHAY HANDS HE MOVES AWAY..PIA SEE THIS AND GOT SCARED...

Pia:abhay!!
Abhay(trying to hide his pain):nothing just small..
Pia:let me see!!!

ABHAY WAS TRYING NOT TO SHOW HER BUT PIA WAS NOT LISTENING..THEN THIS PIA TOUCHES HIS CHEST AND CLOSED HER EYES...ABHAY WAS FROZEN...THEN PIA WAS MOVING BOTH HER HANDS ON HIS CHEST...ABHAY MOVED HIS HAND ON HER WAIST...SLIDING LITTLE OF HER TOP...TOUCHING HER BARE SKIN...THEN SECOND THEY WERE KISSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PERCAP:PIA ACCEPT THAT SHE IS IN LOVE WITH ABHAY!!! =)




Peehu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..m loving the way story is moving..abhiya moment was really cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update
loooved it
abhiya romance was hot..in the end..
Precap is interesting..
I'm glad dat the dobrials n raichands knows d truth but they shud tell this to abhay!
Continue soon
thanx for d pm
tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...lovely abhiya scenes wow...so now piya had a dream of abhay hmm hope so she find out soon tht she is his piya...sid id gud and sharp tht he did want to tell abt this to jeh great thg tht...now abhiya kiss yupieee...precap sounds interesting...plzzz cont soon lovely update amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update.abhiya was hot!!!this time update soon,plz.
Posted: 12 years ago
thankz so much ,very late up date the story but your ff is mind bowling waiting for next