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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 13

PIA POV
i saw him going away from me...later everything black
out...soon later i opened my eyes,my head was paining..i
was feeling weak..i try to move but it hurted .later i started to
realize where i was...looked around and i was lying on floor...i
was still in carnival..but when i stood up with pain...i saw
carnival changed..red colour was now blue.front of me ice cream
stall was now a game stall...i couldn't remmeber what had happen
few minutes ago.i started to walk the people were changed...later
i realize about abhi i got scared started shouting but people were
ignoring me i came front of them and they pass through me!!..i got
scared...then i feel some one present i turned around and saw
him.i saw my abhay walking with smile...he was changed...he was
not in is proper suit but he was wearing t-shirt with blue
jacket...he was coming toward me.i feel relax..he had 2 cup ice
cream...he came to me and pass through me.i was shock.i looked at
my self i was all grey...i turned around to see him...he was
walking away...then he stoped...i ran to him but i later
stop...saw him giving a cup to some one.i couldn't see..i walked
near to toward that person and i saw ...i saw...my
self!!!!!!!!!!...wearing simple clothes...red t-shirt and black
skrit. holding a big white teddy bear...smilng she took that cup
from him and smiled ...later they were kissing...my headache was
getting now worse i fell on ground ...saw them walking away
holding each other hand...tears made their way...my body was
shivering in pain..i felt cold...i closed my eyes,everything was
vainshed...voices were gone...i took a sigh...then i heard my
name ..."pia!"...that name was echoing my head...some one was
calling me in worried state.."Pia!!wake up"..i realize that
voice...it was abhay's..i opened my eyes...sun light came on my
eyes...i brought my hand to blocked it...later abhay face came
front of me...he was worried...his hand was on cheek...i looked
around and saw kabir and ruhi too...ruhi was holding abhi...then i
turned to abhay..he was confused...

POV ENDS...

ABHAY WENT TO THE STALL AND ORDER TWO CUP OF ICE CREAM..AS HE WAS
WAITING HE TURNED TO TOWARD PIA...ABHAY SAW PIA WAS LOST SOME
WHERE...HE STARRED AT HER THEN SAW PIA FELL ON GROUND...ABHAY RAN
TOWARDS HER...

Abhay:PIA!!!

ABHAY PICKED HER UP IN HIS ARM...MADE HER LYED PIA ON
BEANCH...SHAKING HER ...TRYING TO WAKE HER UP..LATER KABIR AND
RUHI CAME TO HIM.KABIR RAN TO BROUGHT SOME WATER ..CROWD WERE
GRATHER...LATER PIA OPEND HER EYES...HE COULD FEEL THAT SHE WAS
SHIVERING ...HE TOOK OFF HIS COAT AND PLACED ON HER...

Abhay(confused and worried):PIA!!!...wake up!!!
Pia:what just happen?
Abhay:u got unconise and fell down...
Pia:that's it!...
Abhay:yeah!!!...what else u expceted?
Pia:where were u all?
Kabir:me and ruhi were inside haunted house
Abhay:and i went to bring ice cream for u!!
Pia:oh!!
Abhay:r u okay now?...really pia u need to take care of your
self...
Pia:well..abhay..i think coming fashion week made me
tried...working on day...
Abhay:fine!!...will u get up or i should carry u?
Pia:i think i can walk by myself...

PIA STOOD UP AND TRIED TO WALK BUT SHE ALMOST FELL DOWN...

Abhay:i think i should carry u...GUYS i think today we had enough
let's go home

ABHAY TOOK HER IN HIS ARMS AND CARRIED TOWARD EXIST...
...
INDIA
JEH KURANA'S HOUSE...
JEH WAS SLEEPING ..SUDDENLY his phone started to ring...FIRST HE
IGNORED..LATER AGAIN HIS PHONE STARTED TO RING HE PICKED UP

Jeh:so is it?
Neil:hey jeh..me neil...
Jeh:oh neil...what problem had came that u have to call in
night...
Neil:opps!...sorry yar...well in los angles it's day right
now...any way i need to tell u something...
Jeh:what?
Neil:i am marrying...
Jeh(shocked):what?!?!'
Neil:yes dear!
Jeh(laughing):well who is that dum girl who have given her heart
to u!!
Neil:excuse me!..well jeh dear...she is one of the hottest girl
here in this town...i haven't met her yet but soon...
Jeh:okay...
Neil:so come here now!!
Jeh:really?
Neil:yes jeh...i need my friend here!!
Jeh:fine fine.i will come with next flight okay
Neil:good!
...
CITY HOSPITAL...
SID ENTER TO THE BURNED ICU...

Sid(thinking): theire must be something.by which i can figure it
out..

HE STARTED LOOKING HERE AND THERE...

Sid:in cc camaer.the turth was not clear.my own little bro is
suffering.i need to find it out...(looking on wall.he figure
something)their must be another door by which pia was taken away.

HE LOOKS AROUND AND FIND THE DOOR.HE ENTER...AND FOUND HIMSELF IN
OTHER SIDE...THERE HE SPOT AN SPOTBOY

Sid(thinking):yar.every icu thearter has another door and someone
will be in chanrage of that door...(he went to that spot boy):hey
u..
Spot boy:yes sir..
Sid:r u incharage here
Spotboy:yes!
Sid:since when?
Spot boy:4b years sir!!my bad luck.
Sid:u nust be pesnet that time when fire took place in this icu?
Spot:a..well sir...i need to go!
Sid:w8 here!!!!

sid push him on the wall

Sid:tell the turth...no lying otherwise u will be here in this
icu with broken body!...my bro is suffering...tell the turth
now!!!!!
Spot boy:fine fine!! i will tell everything!!..well he paid me 20
lacs..just to allow him to kidnap that girl.i don't know him but i
have seen his face.
Sid:good...come with me to the sketcher...i want to to make that
face!!
Spot boy:yes sir!!

...

LOS ANGLES..
ABHAY PARKS HIS CAR OUT OF PIA'S MANSION...

Abhay:here u go!
Pia:thanks for dropping
Abhay:welcome
Pia:come inside i want to to meet my dad...
Abhay:sorry but its already getting late...some other time..
Pia:okay see u later...

PIA COMES OUT OF THE CAR...ABHAY LEAVES.LATER PIA ENETER AND SAW
MR.JASWAL SITTING

Mr.jasawal:where were u?
Pia:with friends...
Mr.jaswal:pia!!...u didn't tell me where were u going?...what gone
with u?
Pia:u know what is troubling me!!...i don't want to marry...
Mr.jaswal:pia!...dera u need to start a life..
Pia:with that pearson!!!...i even don't know his name..and i don't
give a dam!
Mr.jaswal:pia!..that enough u r marrying the men i
choose...that's it!!
Pia:i rather die..!

PIA WENT TO HER ROOM AND MR.JASWAL KEEP SHOUTING...LATER PIA
ENTER INTO HER ROOM LYED ON BED AND THINKING ABOUT THE EVENT TOOK
PLACE WITH HER...

Pia:what had happen back there.y do i feel that i know abhay...we
have met before..long time back!!!..ithink i am daydreaming becoz
of dad !..i won't marry.i won't!!..
...
NEXT DAY ,ABHAY WAS BUSY IN HIS MEETING AFTER THAT,HE WAS SITTING
IN HIS CABIN WANTED TO TALK WITH PIA SUDDENLY HIS PHONE STARTED
TO RING..HE PICKS UP..

Abhay:hello?
Pia:hi!
Abhay:oh pia..
Pia:missing me..
Abhay:yes!..mean no!no no no
Pia:what no or yes?...anyway are u busy tonight?
Abhay:y?
Pia:well we all can go to pub..
Abhay:well nyce idea..
Pia:we can take abhi too
Abhay:i think not a good idea...
Pia:i see...he will attract more girls then u
ABHAY:excuse me!! he got his charms by his father...
Pia:really?
Abhay:yes!..really!
Pia:okay okay...fine so plan made..
Abhay:yeah sure see there then...bye
Pia:bye!

ON OTHER SIDE...PIA HANG THE PHONE AND TRUNED AROUND SAW HER DAD
STANDING

Mr.jaswal:well i think u have made a plan to go out with your
friends..
Pia:plz don't tell me which kind of friend i should made...
Mr.jaswal:pia!..this the way u talk with your dad?...i was
thinking about the last night and have made plan that u should
meet this guy...name neil..
Pia:dad..
Mr.jaswal: plz pia for my sake...u guys r going to meet in pub
okay?
Pia:dad..
Mr.jaswal:this is your love for your own dad?...u can't complete
his one wish?...pia i just want to be happy...

HE LEFT...PIA WAS STILL IN HER PLACE...SHE WAS CRYING...
...
AT NIGHT..
PIA GOT READY AND CAME OUTSIDE SAW ABHAY STANDING BUSY WITH HIS
PHONE...HE HASN'T SEEN HER YET..PIA SMILED WALKED TOWARDS
HIM...LATER HIS EYES FELT ON HER...HE WAS FROZEN...SHE WAS LOOKING
BEAUITFUL...WELL DRESSED...SHE CAME TO HIM

Pia:so?
Abhay:what?
Pia:how do i look?
Abhay:u look ...pretty, lovely...beauitful...
Pia(little blushing):really?

ABHAY NODDED...

Pia:well r we going to stand here all night?
Abhay(coming back to his senses):yeah!...lets go...

LATER THEY REACHED TO THE PUB ,WHERE KABIR,T,ANGAD AND RUHI WERE
WAITING FOR THEM...LATER THEY BOTH JOINED THEM...

Ruhi:u look beautiful pia usual...
Pia:thanks...let's go

LATER EVERYONE WENT INSIDE THEY WERE DANCING DRINKING HAVING FULL
TIME FUN..LATER ABHAY WENT AND SAT front of the counter, SEEING
PIA DANCING...HE WAS ENJOYING IT ...SMILE AUTOMACTIALLY CAME ON
HIS FACE...LATER HE SAW SOME BOYS CAME TO HER DISTURBING HER...HE
WENT TO THEM REMOVE THEM AWAY AND DANCED ALTOGATHER..LATER PIA
WENT AWAY..ABHAY WAS ABOUT TO FOLLOW WHEN ANGAD CAME TO HIM AND
TOOK HIM IN CONER...

Angad:abhay i m in big trouble..
Abhay:what happen?
Angad:well...
Abhay:tell!
Angad:how can i explain u?
ABHAY:R U SPEAKING..OR SHOULD I GO?
Angad:yar wait na...well i like this girl...
Abhay:okay...so?
Angad:and i want to ask her out..so i need your help
Abhay:how can i help...
Angad:yar..u were the number 1...flirty..back in study life...u
have an experiences..plzz tell some of them to me..
Abhay:yar..i ..i..
Angad:plz!!
Abhay:who is this gril?
Angad:ruhi...
Abhay:WHAT!?
Angad:abhay slient...
Abhay:okay...well,first take her some were alone with fake
reason... started with her eyes...her likes and dislike...tell her
about yourself...and when she get intersted..ask her out...
Angad:it will work?
Abhay:try it out...
Angad:thanks yar u r my ture friend...
Abhay:now may i leave?...anyway good luck...really?u and ruhi...
Angad:abhay!
Abhay:fine! go!

ANGAD LEFT LEAVING ABHAY BEHIND...HE WAS LAUGHING AT
ANGAD...LATER WAS LOOKING FOR PIA AND HE HITS SOME ONE... THEY
BOTH TURN TO SEE EACH OTHER...AND GETS SHOCK!!

PERCAP:ABHAY AND PIA SPENT ONE NIGHT TOGHTER!!(I HOPE U UNDER STAND THIS hint😆)
Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
bookworm-ALS-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow thats really interesting...piya's getting flashbacks thats great! Precap is...well, i'm waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dr!!!!
pia is finally getting her memory little by little...
Jeh also coming... hope he dsnt do anythng to pia again...
precap 😳
plz continue soon dr...
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Posted: 13 years ago
BAAP RE BAAP!! PRECAP TOH SUPER DUPER HAIN!! CONTINUE SOON!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super cool! Dude!
Precape is interesting! I think pia remembers everythink in next update. Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
I loved it
So nxt will b full of abhiya romance
So pia is getting her memories back
Plz cont..
iqrahareem thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh wow thats really interesting...piya's getting flashbacks thats great! Precap is...well, i'm waiting for it



THANKS FOR LIKING!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I thought Piya will get her memory back in this update😔
but the update was still enjoyable coz of Abhiya!
waiting for next update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome! So piya is getting her memory back in bits n pieces! Hope she remembers everything soon..n m waiting for precap nw..update soon

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