os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

a lovely end to a beautiful piece of writing...😊
abhiya all the way😳😊
loved the ending "genuinely"!😊

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

amazing update shivani !!!

i loved it!!!!! abhay pia are fully carried away in love!!!!

i loved dere passion 4 each other!!!finally babby .wow

its wonderful!!!

n thanks 4 d pm!!!

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Ume Salma Kakal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Loved your OS and ending and the description of Italian cities were really good.

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ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this new abhay's just the man every girl wants ...and pia is too lovely tht i can't describe!!!!!!!!!

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

A month long honeymoon. Pia sure had the raichand for herself. But still jealous . Come on give the guy a break. But it was a beautiful ending to a fairy tale.

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Pari Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

awesome update
loved it
it was the most romantic part
only Abhiya filled update

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Ankita

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

aww shivani what an update yaar really awesome wonderfully described n pia is pregnent yayyy u ended it on such a beautiful note really amazing

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.SmokeySilence.

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

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It was such an wonderful OS Shivani... 👏 👏

Pura romantic to the core... loved it 😳 abhiya romance was so beautiful through out the OS...their longing ot be each other and finally becoming one.. happy moments...passionate honeymoon and OMG your description of Italy... marvelous... it was perfect till the end and I loved reading it... i started reading it when u posted chpt 1 but sorry cudn't comment... 😳

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago